Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
For me, I do prefer handwriting as I become very more confident and more comfortable in handwriting because ever since I was born and when I I started writing when I was at when I was 2 years old. So I think that I was really familiar with handwriting more than typing because I don't really really use like electronics that much.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
Before I would say that back in my countries I don't use that much kind of electronic. We normally using handwriting during class time like copying out of the lesson from what the my teacher write on the table. But for me I would say after I moved to Australia, everything has just changed and sort of developments in the school system and education here so.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
I learned to tap on the keyboard when I was 8 years old because at that time my mom had put me into an International School. They offered me like the IT programs. It was like 3 times in a week from Mondays, Tuesdays and Wednesdays. And yeah, I had to start writing during the IT class. It was hard at first, but once I started.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
For me to improve my writing, I normally watching the YouTube guide as like my kind of like the starter before starting writing. But then as I regularly practice things, I things that practical skill was one of the things that really helped improve my typing skill. Because the more that we practicing, the more that we lay our hand on keyboard, the more.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Puntuación: 62.0Sugerencia: Be more concise and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct tense and article use, and add one specific reason with a linking word. Limit to 2–3 sentences.
Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting to typing because I feel more comfortable and confident writing by hand. For example, I learned to write very early and spent most of my school time copying notes by hand, so handwriting feels more natural to me.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Puntuación: 58.0Sugerencia: Answer directly about current daily typing habits. Use a clear topic sentence (Yes/No and which device), then briefly explain with one specific reason or change using linking words (e.g., however, since). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and correct grammar.
Ejemplo: I don't type on a desktop every day; I mostly use a laptop now. Since moving to Australia, schools require more online work and I use a laptop for assignments and emails.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Puntuación: 72.0Sugerencia: Good specific detail (age and context). Improve coherence by using linking words and trimming filler words. Combine related ideas into 2–3 polished sentences and correct verb forms.
Ejemplo: I learned to type when I was eight after my mother enrolled me in an international school that offered IT lessons. The classes were three times a week, and although typing was difficult at first, regular practice quickly improved my skills.
How do you improve your typing?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: Be specific about methods and use correct verb forms. Start with a topic sentence stating your main methods, then give one concrete example of a resource and one practical habit, using linking words like 'first' and 'then'. Keep it concise.
Ejemplo: I improve my typing by following YouTube tutorials and practising daily. For example, I watch short lessons to learn proper finger placement, and then I do 20 minutes of typing exercises every day to build speed and accuracy.
× For me, I do prefer handwriting as I become very more confident and more comfortable in handwriting because ever since I was born and when I I started writing when I was at when I was 2 years old.
✓ For me, I prefer handwriting because I feel much more confident and comfortable writing by hand; I have used handwriting since I was about two years old.
The original mixes tenses and uses awkward phrasing like 'I do prefer' and 'I become very more confident'. Use simple present 'I prefer' for habitual preference. 'Become' is wrong here; 'feel' expresses current state. 'Very more' is ungrammatical; use 'much more' or just 'more'. Also remove repeated words and redundant clauses to make the sentence clear.
× So I think that I was really familiar with handwriting more than typing because I don't really really use like electronics that much.
✓ So I think I am more familiar with handwriting than typing because I don't really use electronics that much.
Tense consistency: use present 'am' for a current state. Avoid repeated words 'really really' and filler 'like'. Use comparative 'more familiar with X than Y' and correct negation 'don't really use'.
× Before I would say that back in my countries I don't use that much kind of electronic.
✓ Before, back in my country, I didn't use that many electronic devices.
Use singular 'country' if speaking of one nation; if plural intended, say 'countries'. 'That much kind of electronic' is incorrect: countable 'devices' requires 'many', and past context requires past tense 'didn't use'.
× We normally using handwriting during class time like copying out of the lesson from what the my teacher write on the table.
✓ We normally used handwriting during class time, copying notes from what my teacher wrote on the board.
Use past tense 'used' for past habit. 'Using' should be 'used' or 'would use'. 'Copying out of the lesson' is awkward; use 'copying notes'. 'The my teacher' is wrong; use 'my teacher'. 'Write' should be past 'wrote'. 'Table' likely meant 'board', so corrected for natural phrasing.
× But for me I would say after I moved to Australia, everything has just changed and sort of developments in the school system and education here so.
✓ For me, after I moved to Australia, everything changed and the school system and education here developed.
Mixing 'would say', present perfect 'has just changed', and incomplete clause. Use simple past 'changed' for a completed change after moving. Make noun phrases explicit: 'the school system and education here developed.' Remove vague 'so' at the end.
× I learned to tap on the keyboard when I was 8 years old because at that time my mom had put me into an International School.
✓ I learned to type on the keyboard when I was eight years old because my mom had enrolled me in an international school.
Use 'type' rather than 'tap' for keyboard skill. Spell out numbers under ten for formal speech. 'Put me into' is unnatural; use 'enrolled me in'. Past perfect 'had enrolled' is acceptable if emphasizing sequence, but simple past is also possible. Keep consistent past timeline.
× They offered me like the IT programs. It was like 3 times in a week from Mondays, Tuesdays and Wednesdays.
✓ They offered IT programs that met three times a week on Mondays, Tuesdays and Wednesdays.
Remove filler 'like'. Use 'three' not '3' in writing. 'In a week' should be 'a week' or 'per week'. Clarify plural 'programs' and verb agreement 'that met three times a week'.
× And yeah, I had to start writing during the IT class. It was hard at first, but once I started.
✓ I had to start typing during the IT class. It was hard at first, but I improved once I started practicing.
Sentence 'but once I started' is incomplete; complete the thought with what happened after starting. Use 'typing' rather than 'writing' for keyboard skill. Add 'practicing' to show how improvement occurred.
× For me to improve my writing, I normally watching the YouTube guide as like my kind of like the starter before starting writing.
✓ To improve my typing, I normally watch YouTube guides as a starter before I begin practicing.
'I normally watching' is wrong form; use 'I normally watch'. Replace 'writing' with 'typing' for keyboard context. Remove filler 'like my kind of like'. Use 'as a starter' or 'as a warm-up' and 'begin practicing' to be natural.
× But then as I regularly practice things, I things that practical skill was one of the things that really helped improve my typing skill.
✓ As I practiced regularly, practical exercises were one of the things that really helped improve my typing skills.
Original has word order and repetition errors ('I things that practical skill...'). Use past tense 'practiced' for completed or habitual past. Make subject clear: 'practical exercises' or 'practical skill practice' and pluralize 'skills'.
× Because the more that we practicing, the more that we lay our hand on keyboard, the more.
✓ Because the more we practice and place our hands on the keyboard, the better we get.
'We practicing' should be 'we practice' (correct verb form). 'Lay our hand' should be 'place our hands' or 'use our hands'. The sentence was unfinished; complete with the result 'the better we get'. Maintain parallel structure 'the more... the better'.