Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clearer and more natural: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid invented or wrong words, use linking words, and give one or two specific reasons with correct vocabulary. Keep answers concise (max 3–4 sentences).

Ejemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more efficient for drafting emails and taking notes. For example, I can quickly edit and reorganize text on my laptop, which saves time. However, I still write in a paper journal occasionally because writing by hand helps me remember details better.

Sugerencia: Respond directly and use correct tense and vocabulary. State clearly whether you type daily, then give a short reason and a comparison using linking words (e.g., because, however). Avoid unclear words and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Not every day; I usually type on a laptop when I work on assignments because it is portable and convenient. However, I sometimes prefer a full desktop keyboard for long typing sessions because the keys feel more comfortable.

Sugerencia: Give a clear time reference and concise sequence of events. Use correct past tense and avoid filler words. Mention specific activities that helped you improve, using accurate vocabulary.

Ejemplo: I learned to type when I was 17 during a computer class at school. The instructor taught the basics and I practised regularly with typing exercises and online games, which helped me increase my speed and accuracy.

Sugerencia: Organize your answer: start with a topic sentence, then list 2–3 specific methods using linking words. Remove fillers and finish with a measurable goal to sound natural and effective.

Ejemplo: I improve my typing by practising regularly with structured exercises and typing software that focus on touch typing. I also use online lessons to drill difficult key combinations until they become automatic, and I set small goals, such as increasing my words-per-minute by five each month while maintaining proper posture.

× Yes, I prefer typing because it's much Foster and more efficient for drafting emails and taking notes on a laptop.

✓ Yes, I prefer typing because it's much faster and more efficient for drafting emails and taking notes on a laptop.

The student wrote 'Foster' which is incorrect; the intended comparative adverb/adjective is 'faster'. Use 'faster' to compare speed; 'much' is appropriate as an intensifier. Replace incorrect word and maintain comparative structure. Suggestion: Learn common adjective/adverb pairs and use spell-check to catch similar errors.

× For example, I can easily edit and organize text without music crossing orge.

✓ For example, I can easily edit and organize text without manually crossing out or erasing mistakes.

The original phrase 'without music crossing orge' is nonsensical and likely garbled. This is a sentence structure and word choice issue. Replace with a clear phrase that contrasts typing with handwriting: 'without manually crossing out or erasing mistakes.' Suggestion: Keep comparisons simple and use precise verbs like 'crossing out' or 'erasing'.

× And I still use handwriting for personal journals or when I want to remember information better Science writing by hand helps me retain.

✓ I still use handwriting for personal journals or when I want to remember information better, since writing by hand helps me retain information.

This sentence lacks proper punctuation and conjunction between clauses, causing a run-on. Also 'Science' is incorrect; intended word is 'since'. Reorder and add 'since' to link cause and effect, and repeat 'information' for clarity. Suggestion: Use conjunctions like 'since' or 'because' to connect reason clauses and proofread for accidental word substitutions.

× Everyday not, but sometime I work for my study, for example assignments I prefer the laptop science and sometime I find the KISS a bit compared to a full desktop keyboard.

✓ Not every day, but sometimes I use a laptop for my studies; for example, for assignments I prefer the laptop, and sometimes I find the keys a bit smaller compared to a full desktop keyboard.

Multiple issues: adverb forms 'Everyday' should be 'Not every day' and 'sometime' -> 'sometimes'. 'Study' should be plural 'studies' in this context. 'science' is likely 'since' or garbled; rewritten for clarity. 'KISS' is unclear; likely 'keys' or 'keyboard keys'. Use 'keys are a bit smaller' for comparison. Maintain present tense habitual usage. Suggestion: Use 'sometimes' for frequency, 'every day' as two words when meaning each day, and check word choice for clarity.

× I learn to tap on a keyboard when I was in 17 years old doing a lap uh computer classes and the a trainer touched typing basics and practice regularly with typing, SSIS and games which helped me improve speed and Aquarius.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was 17, taking computer classes; the trainer taught typing basics and I practised regularly with typing lessons and games, which helped me improve my speed and accuracy.

Tense is incorrect: use past tense 'learned' for a past event. Phrases are garbled: 'in 17 years old' -> 'when I was 17'; 'lap uh' -> 'laptop' or 'in computer classes' adjusted; 'the a trainer touched' -> 'the trainer taught'; 'practice' -> past 'practised'; 'SSIS' and 'Aquarius' are garbled — likely 'lessons' and 'accuracy'. Reconstruct sentence to correct past tense and word choice. Suggestion: Use simple past for finished past actions, and avoid filler sounds in transcripts when writing corrected sentences.

× Umm, I practice regularly using structure, exercise and typing software to build speed and umm uh, I use online lessons that focus on touch, tapping and repeat challenging key combinations until they become automatic.

✓ I practise regularly using structured exercises and typing software to build speed, and I use online lessons that focus on touch-typing, tapping, and repeating challenging key combinations until they become automatic.

Use gerund/participle forms consistently: 'structure, exercise' should be 'structured exercises'. 'repeat' should be 'repeating' to match parallel gerund structure. 'touch-typing' is clearer than 'touch'. Maintain parallelism in the list. Suggestion: Keep parallel forms in lists (all gerunds or all nouns) and use hyphenation for compound terms like 'touch-typing'.

× I usually maintain proper posture and hand position which reduce and uh, I set small measurements goals such as increasing.

✓ I usually maintain proper posture and hand position, which reduces strain, and I set small measurable goals such as gradually increasing my typing speed.

Pronoun/verb agreement: 'which reduce' should be 'which reduces' to agree with the singular noun phrase 'proper posture and hand position' considered as a single idea, or better rephrase to 'which reduces strain'. 'measurements goals' is incorrect; use 'measurable goals'. The clause 'such as increasing' is incomplete; specify what is being increased. The sentence was fragmented; combine clauses for clarity. Suggestion: Ensure subject-verb agreement, use 'measurable' not 'measurements', and complete comparisons by specifying the object being increased.