Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler and broken phrases, and give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Use correct tense and articles, and replace vague phrases like "letter erasing thing" with precise terms such as "backspace key".

Ejemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is much easier to correct mistakes. For example, I can simply press the backspace key to delete a word, which saves time and keeps my writing neat.

Sugerencia: Make the answer coherent and focused. Begin with a direct statement, then give one supporting detail. Avoid irrelevant or unclear phrases (e.g. "go to do my father's work"). Use linking words like "however" or "also" correctly.

Ejemplo: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I own a laptop. However, I enjoy using desktop keyboards sometimes because I like the tactile clicking sound they make.

Sugerencia: Be concise and clear with dates and reasons. Start with a direct time reference, then briefly explain why that setting helped you learn. Avoid repetition and improve grammar (e.g. 'there were computer science lessons' not 'there was').

Ejemplo: I learned to type in first grade at my primary school. We had weekly computer science lessons with a supportive teacher, which helped me practice typing from an early age.

Sugerencia: Remove fillers and give specific, varied methods. Provide concrete practice strategies and link them logically. Mention frequency or tools (e.g., online typing tutors) to make the answer more informative and credible.

Ejemplo: I improve my typing by practicing daily: I write essays and short paragraphs on my laptop and use online typing tutors to build speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing because whenever I made a mistake, I can easily correct it with.

✓ I prefer typing because whenever I make a mistake, I can easily correct it.

The sentence mixes past tense 'made' with present tense 'prefer' and 'can'. Use present tense 'make' to match habitual action. Suggestion: keep all verbs describing habitual actions in present simple (prefer, make, can correct).

× Letter erasing thing.

✓ a tool for erasing letters.

This fragment is not a complete sentence and uses informal noun phrase 'letter erasing thing'. Make it a noun phrase with article and clear noun: 'a tool for erasing letters' or 'the delete key'.

× I can press 1 button and it's delete and I can easily delete it.

✓ I can press one button — the delete key — and easily delete it.

Use 'one' in words for clarity; 'it's delete' is incorrect and informal. Rephrase to identify the key and streamline the sentence. Maintain present simple for habitual action.

× I have a laptop and because of that I am writing on laptop keyboard every day.

✓ I have a laptop, so I use the laptop keyboard every day.

Present continuous 'am writing' is unnatural for habitual action; use present simple 'use'. Also add article 'the' before 'laptop keyboard' for clarity.

× Besides, I really like the clicking sound when you are writing with desktop keyboard and that's because I like to go to do my father's work and using desktops.

✓ Besides, I really like the clicking sound when I write on a desktop keyboard, and I like to use desktop computers to do my father's work.

Pronoun 'you' should be 'I' to express personal preference. Use 'write' (present simple) for habitual action. 'Desktop keyboard' needs article 'a' or 'the'; 'using desktops' is awkward — rephrase to 'use desktop computers'.

× I think I learned it when I was in first grade because I went to a very high science primary school and there was a computer science lessons we have every week and I like taking lessons on there and I like my teacher because I really like writing on keyboard.

✓ I think I learned it when I was in first grade because I went to a very good science primary school where we had a computer science lesson every week. I liked the lessons there and I liked my teacher because I really enjoyed typing on the keyboard.

Mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. Use past tense consistently ('learned', 'went', 'had', 'liked') for past events. 'High' is not correct for school quality; 'very good' or 'high-quality' is better. 'There was a computer science lessons' has article and number errors; use 'we had a computer science lesson' or 'lessons'. 'Taking lessons on there' is awkward — use 'the lessons there'. 'Writing on keyboard' should be 'typing on the keyboard'.

× I improve my typing by umm, writing essays on laptops and umm, writing some paragraphs to make remembering the letters places easily.

✓ I improve my typing by writing essays on my laptop and by writing paragraphs to remember the letters' positions more easily.

Use parallel structure with 'by' + gerund for both activities. 'Laptops' should be singular possession 'my laptop' when referring to personal device. 'Make remembering the letters places easily' is ungrammatical — use 'to remember the letters' positions more easily'. Use possessive noun 'letters' positions' and adverb 'more easily'.