Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và sự mạch lạc: sửa lỗi thì, chia động từ, và dùng cấu trúc câu tự nhiên hơn; rút gọn câu tránh lặp từ. Hãy bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó cung cấp 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ với từ nối phù hợp (e.g., "however", "because").

Ejemplo: I prefer typing for formal work and assignments because it's faster and easier to edit. However, I usually handwrite personal notes when I want to relax, as writing by hand feels more comfortable and personal.

Sugerencia: Sửa lựa từ và cấu trúc: "steal" là sai nghĩa; cần dùng từ chính xác như "use". Trình bày logic hơn bằng một câu chủ đề và một câu giải thích; kiểm soát lỗi mạo từ và động từ. Dùng liên từ để nối ý.

Ejemplo: Yes, I use my laptop keyboard every day for study and work. Most of my assignments and research are done on the computer because typing is much faster and makes editing easier.

Sugerencia: Chỉnh ngữ pháp và trật tự: tránh dùng từ không phù hợp (e.g., "usually", "at an adult"). Nên đưa rõ thời điểm và một lý do/chi tiết hỗ trợ. Sử dụng thì quá khứ nhất quán và câu chuyển tiếp (e.g., "because").

Ejemplo: I learned to type when I started my first job because it became necessary for my tasks. I therefore took an online typing course to improve my skills, as I had little access to computers when I was younger.

Sugerencia: Sửa từ vựng và ngữ pháp: dùng đúng trạng từ (e.g., "practice regularly"), số nhiều/số ít ("every day"), và tránh từ sai nghĩa ("fatter" không đúng). Nên nêu phương pháp cụ thể (e.g., bài tập, khóa học, luyện tốc độ) và kết luận ngắn gọn bằng một liên từ như "so" hoặc "therefore".

Ejemplo: I improve my typing mainly by practising regularly, whether for work, study, or chatting online, so I try to type every day. I also use online typing exercises and timed tests, which have helped me become faster and more accurate.

× For forward works or assignment I prefer typing.

✓ For coursework or assignments I prefer typing.

The phrase 'forward works' is incorrect English; 'coursework' or 'assignments' is appropriate. Also use plural 'assignments' for generality and add 'I' punctuation. Use 'prefer typing' unchanged.

× But for personal note I still handwriting.

✓ But for personal notes I still write by hand.

'Personal note' should be plural as a general habit: 'personal notes'. 'Handwriting' is a noun; the verb phrase needed is 'write by hand'. Replace noun with verb to form a correct clause.

× It's I am in a hurry I type but when I want to relax I write by my hand.

✓ If I am in a hurry, I type, but when I want to relax I write by hand.

Use a conditional clause 'If I am in a hurry' rather than 'It's I am'. Also 'by my hand' is unnatural; use 'by hand'. Commas separate clauses and present simple fits habitual actions.

× It's make me feel comfortable.

✓ It makes me feel comfortable.

'It' requires third person singular verb 'makes'. 'It's make' is incorrect contraction; use 'It makes' to agree with subject.

× Yes, I steal my laptop keyboard every single day, mainly for study or work.

✓ Yes, I use my laptop keyboard every single day, mainly for study or work.

'Steal' means to take without permission and is incorrect here. The correct verb is 'use'. Maintain present simple for habitual action.

× Most of the my assignments and research are turned on the computer and avoid typing.

✓ Most of my assignments and research are done on the computer and involve typing.

Remove the extra definite article 'the'. 'Turned on the computer' is wrong; use 'done on the computer'. 'Avoid typing' contradicts context; likely intended 'involve typing' or 'require typing'.

× When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

✓ When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

This question sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed.

× I learned how to type on the keyboard usually.

✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard.

'Usually' is misplaced; in past tense 'learned' is a completed action so 'usually' is inappropriate here. Remove 'usually' or place it in a sentence about habit.

× Actually, when I started my first job, it's become necessary for work, so I took an online typing course to improve my skill.

✓ Actually, when I started my first job, it became necessary for work, so I took an online typing course to improve my skills.

Use past simple 'it became' to match 'started'. 'It's become' mixes tenses. 'Skill' should be plural 'skills' as general ability.

× I didn't have much access to computer when I was younger, so I had to catch up at an adult.

✓ I didn't have much access to a computer when I was younger, so I had to catch up as an adult.

Add indefinite article 'a' before 'computer'. 'At an adult' is wrong preposition and phrasing; use 'as an adult' to indicate later in life.

× I improve my typing mainly by practice regularly, whether it's for work, study or the chatting online, I try to type every days.

✓ I improve my typing mainly by practicing regularly; whether it's for work, study, or chatting online, I try to type every day.

Use gerund 'practicing' after 'by'. 'The chatting online' should be 'chatting online'. 'Every days' is incorrect plural; use 'every day'. Punctuation adjusted for clarity.

× I have noticed that the more I type, the fatter and more accurate I become without thinking about it.

✓ I have noticed that the more I type, the faster and more accurate I become without thinking about it.

'Fatter' is inappropriate; intended adjective is 'faster' to describe typing speed. Keep comparative parallelism 'the more..., the faster and more accurate...'.