Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise, correct grammar and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason and an example. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: I prefer typing because my handwriting is messy and typing is faster. For example, when I type on my laptop, spell-check catches mistakes so my documents are neater and quicker to edit.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and confidently. Use a topic sentence that states which device you use, then add one or two supporting details. Avoid filler phrases and questions at the end.

Ejemplo: I type on a laptop every day. I use it for both work and study, usually for writing emails and essays, so I end up typing several hours each day.

Sugerencia: Give a clear time reference and concise supporting detail. Reduce hesitations and finish your sentences. Use a linking word like "when" or "during" to structure the answer.

Ejemplo: I learned to type at school when I was around 11 years old. We had a computer class that included regular typing practice, which helped me build basic speed and accuracy.

Sugerencia: This answer is unclear. Provide a direct method and a specific example of practice or tools you use. Use simple, correct sentences and one linking word like "by" or "through".

Ejemplo: I improve my typing by practising on online typing websites for 15–20 minutes a day. For instance, I use typing tests that focus on accuracy and gradually increase my speed over time.

× Personally I prefer typing as my handwriting is not very great and I think there are less typos when we are we type as a computer shows error with a curved line.

✓ Personally I prefer typing because my handwriting is not very good, and I think there are fewer typos when we type because a computer shows errors with a wavy line.

Original sentence has several pronoun and word choice issues: 'we are we type' is incorrect repetition and pronoun use, and 'less typos' should be 'fewer typos' (countable noun). 'Very great' is unnatural; use 'very good'. Also 'curved line' is better described as 'wavy line' or 'squiggly line'. Suggest simplifying clauses and using correct pronouns and quantifier: 'we type' (not 'we are we type'), 'fewer' for countable nouns, and clearer adjective choice.

× Actually I do not own desktop. I have a computer. I think it is called laptop and.

✓ Actually I do not own a desktop. I have a computer; I think it is called a laptop.

Missing indefinite articles before singular countable nouns: 'desktop' and 'laptop' require 'a'. Also the sentence ended abruptly with 'and'; replace with a complete clause or punctuation. Suggest using 'a desktop' and 'a laptop' and joining ideas properly with a semicolon or conjunction.

× Everyday I use my laptop for my work and study.

✓ Every day I use my laptop for work and study.

'Everyday' (adjective meaning common) is incorrect; use the adverbial phrase 'every day'. Also 'for my work and study' is wordy; 'for work and study' is more natural. Suggest separating into clearer phrases and using correct form 'every day'.

× Do I type more or?

✓ Do I type more often?

Sentence is incomplete and lacks the appropriate adverb. 'More' needs a comparison target or 'more often' to ask about frequency. Suggest using 'Do I type more often?' for clarity.

× So actually, uh, my school incorporated a subject which includes computer and.

✓ So actually, my school included a subject that covered computers.

Awkward phrasing and dangling conjunction 'and.' Use 'included a subject that covered computers' to convey past curriculum content. 'Incorporated a subject which includes computer' mixes tenses and uses 'computer' singularly; use plural 'computers' or 'computer studies'.

× Mainly we did typing in our practical system, it was quite.

✓ Mainly we practiced typing in our practical classes; it was quite useful.

Original mixes awkward noun phrases and incomplete clause 'it was quite.' Use past tense 'practiced' to match 'did', and replace 'practical system' with 'practical classes' or 'practical sessions'. Finish the thought by adding an adjective like 'useful' or 'helpful'.

× Forms of dreams very valuable to speed.

✓ Typing drills are very valuable for improving speed.

Original is unintelligible: 'Forms of dreams' is incorrect. Presumably the student meant 'typing drills' or 'forms of practice'. Also use 'valuable for improving speed' to show purpose. Suggest replacing with a clear subject and purpose phrase.