Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I prefer to handwriting because, uh, handwriting is more memorable than typing and I like some cute diary. So one of my hobby is making diary.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
Yes I do, especially I'm taking an online classes at at a cyber university so I need to write lectures and study so I almost use it every day.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
I want to type at the beginning of elementary school. I attended a extra curricular class where the teacher taught us typing properly so I can practice regular.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
I could improve my typing by game. The type game makes me more competitive. It was a really funny for me, so I could type my type improved very fast Your time.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: Be more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler sounds, and provide one specific reason with a brief example. Fix errors in articles and verb forms ("prefer handwriting", "a hobby", "keeping a diary"). Keep answer to 2–3 sentences.
Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting to typing because writing by hand helps me remember things better. For example, I keep a small paper diary with drawings and stickers, which makes my notes more personal and easier to recall.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: Give a concise topic sentence, correct grammar, and add one specific detail. Remove repetition and incorrect articles. Use linking words for clarity (e.g., "because", "so"). Keep to 2–3 sentences.
Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I mainly use a laptop because I take online classes at a cyber university, so I type notes and write assignments almost every day.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: Use past tense and clear time reference. Start with a direct answer stating when, then give one supporting detail. Correct articles and phrasing ("I learned to type", "at the beginning of elementary school", "an extracurricular class") and avoid vague phrasing.
Ejemplo: I learned to type at the beginning of elementary school. I took an extracurricular typing class where the teacher showed us proper finger placement, and I practiced regularly after class.
How do you improve your typing?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: Provide a clear method in present tense and one specific detail about how it helps. Correct grammar and awkward phrasing, avoid unclear phrases like "Your time". Use linking words (e.g., "because", "so") and keep to 2–3 sentences.
Ejemplo: I improve my typing by playing online typing games because they make practice fun and competitive. For example, timed drills help me increase speed and accuracy quickly because I try to beat my previous score.
× I prefer to handwriting because, uh, handwriting is more memorable than typing and I like some cute diary.
✓ I prefer handwriting because handwriting is more memorable than typing and I like keeping a cute diary.
The verb 'prefer' should be followed by a gerund (handwriting) or 'to' + base form, not 'to' + noun. 'Prefer to handwriting' mixes forms. Also 'some cute diary' is incorrect article and noun choice; use 'keeping a cute diary' or 'a cute diary'. Suggestion: use 'prefer handwriting' or 'prefer to write by hand' and 'keep a diary'.
× So one of my hobby is making diary.
✓ So one of my hobbies is making a diary.
This sentence has a singular/plural mismatch: 'one of my hobby' should be 'one of my hobbies' (plural 'hobbies' after 'one of my'). Additionally, 'making diary' is unnatural; use 'keeping a diary' or 'making a diary' with article 'a'. Suggestion: use 'one of my hobbies is keeping a diary.'
× Yes I do, especially I'm taking an online classes at at a cyber university so I need to write lectures and study so I almost use it every day.
✓ Yes I do. Especially, I'm taking online classes at a cyber university, so I need to take notes for lectures and study, so I use it almost every day.
Multiple issues: 'I'm taking an online classes' mixes singular/plural; should be 'online classes' without 'an'. 'Write lectures' is incorrect collocation; use 'take notes for lectures'. 'Almost use it every day' word order improved to 'use it almost every day'. These corrections fit subject-verb agreement and word choice. Suggestion: remove extra 'at', change 'taking an online classes' to 'taking online classes', and improve phrase order.
× I want to type at the beginning of elementary school.
✓ I learned to type at the beginning of elementary school.
The speaker refers to a past event, so present 'want' is incorrect; use past tense 'learned' or 'started learning'. This matches the Past tense issue. Suggestion: use 'I learned to type' or 'I started learning to type' to indicate past action.
× I attended a extra curricular class where the teacher taught us typing properly so I can practice regular.
✓ I attended an extracurricular class where the teacher taught us typing properly so I could practice regularly.
Article 'a' before a vowel sound should be 'an' (article error also but fits here). 'Extra curricular' should be one word 'extracurricular'. 'So I can' should be past 'could' to match 'attended'. 'Practice regular' needs adverb 'regularly'. Suggestion: use 'attended an extracurricular class' and 'could practice regularly.'
× I could improve my typing by game.
✓ I improved my typing by playing games.
'Could' suggests ability; context asks how they improve typing (past habit), so use past 'improved' or 'I can improve... by playing games.' The phrase 'by game' is incorrect; use 'by playing games' (gerund). Suggestion: rephrase as 'I improved my typing by playing typing games' or 'I can improve my typing by playing games.'
× The type game makes me more competitive.
✓ Typing games make me more competitive.
'The type game' is unnatural; use plural 'typing games' if referring to games in general. 'Type' should be gerund 'typing'. Article 'the' not needed. Suggestion: use 'Typing games make me more competitive.'
× It was a really funny for me, so I could type my type improved very fast Your time.
✓ They were really fun for me, so my typing improved very quickly.
'A really funny' is wrong; use 'really fun' or 'really funny' with correct noun. 'I could type my type improved very fast Your time' is ungrammatical and unclear; likely intended 'my typing improved very fast' and 'your time' is stray. Use adverb 'quickly' rather than 'fast' for improvement. Also match plural 'they' for games. Suggestion: 'They were really fun, so my typing improved very quickly.'