Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
Actually I like both, but if I had to choose I prefer typing. This is because if I use system the system like word the system the correct. My mistake.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
I usually use a desktop. This is because if I use keyboard I can't have in class. But not possible can eat.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
Certain when I was junior high school student this is because. Not postcorn was forced severely distributed engineers high school.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
I think I should play the game in not Pasco. For example there are. Various game in not Pasco com de exidal so I should practice it?
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: 答えは明確ですが、理由が不明瞭で文法と語彙の誤りが多いため、論理的で流れるような短い説明に直す必要があります。具体的には:1) トピック文で即答する(I prefer typing.)。2) 理由を一つか二つに絞り、接続語(because, as, so)でつなぐ。3) 文法的に正しい短文を心掛ける(主語・動詞が明確)。4) 誤った語句(system, the system like word, my mistakeなど)を避け、正しい表現(e.g. word processor, autocorrect)を使う。発音練習では“typing”“handwriting”“prefer”“because”などを重点的に確認してください。
Ejemplo: I prefer typing. This is because word processors have autocorrect and make it faster to edit text. For example, when I write essays I can correct mistakes quickly, so typing saves me time.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Puntuación: 30.0Sugerencia: 答えは“desktop”と即答していますが、説明がほとんど意味不明で語順・語彙の誤りが多いです。改善点:1) 簡潔に理由を述べる(e.g. I use a desktop because the screen is larger and the keyboard is comfortable)。2) 接続語を使って話の流れを作る(because, so, therefore)。3) 不明確な表現("can't have in class", "not possible can eat")は使わない。4) 一文を長くしすぎず、2〜3文にまとめる。
Ejemplo: I usually use a desktop because it has a larger screen and a more comfortable keyboard. Therefore I find it easier to work for long periods at home.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Puntuación: 25.0Sugerencia: 回答の意図は「中学生のときに覚えた」ようですが、意味が伝わりにくく語順や不適切な語句が混在しています。改善点:1) まず時期を簡潔に答える(I learned in junior high school.)。2) 続けて理由や状況を述べるなら明確に(e.g. we had a computer class or I had to type homework)。3) 余計な単語や不正確な単語を使わない。文法(時制、冠詞、複数形)に注意する。
Ejemplo: I learned to type when I was in junior high school because we had a compulsory computer class. The teacher taught us basic typing and we practiced regularly.
How do you improve your typing?
Puntuación: 20.0Sugerencia: 意図は“ゲームで練習する”だと推測できますが、語彙と文法が不正確で支離滅裂になっています。改善点:1) 具体的な練習方法を一つか二つ挙げる(online typing games, timed practice, touch-typing exercises)。2) 接続語で理由を付ける(because, so that)。3) ウェブサイト名や固有名詞は正確に、または一般的表現(typing websites)を使う。4) 問いかけで終わらせず、断定的に述べる。
Ejemplo: I improve my typing by practicing on online typing websites and games because they make drills enjoyable and help me increase speed and accuracy. For example, I play timed typing tests for 10 minutes every day to track my progress.
× Actually I like both, but if I had to choose I prefer typing.
✓ Actually I like both, but if I had to choose I would prefer typing.
The sentence mixes a present preference with a hypothetical conditional. Use 'would prefer' in the result clause of a second conditional ('if I had to choose') to match the hypothetical meaning.
× This is because if I use system the system like word the system the correct.
✓ This is because when I use a system like Word, it corrects my mistakes.
The original sentence lacks articles and correct verb form. Use 'a system' and 'a system like Word' and change 'the system the correct' to 'it corrects my mistakes' to provide a clear subject and present simple verb for habitual action.
× My mistake.
✓ I make fewer mistakes when I type.
The fragment 'My mistake' is unclear. Replace with a full sentence that explains the idea: present simple for habitual result of typing.
× I usually use a desktop.
✓ I usually use a desktop computer.
Add the noun 'computer' for clarity. 'Desktop' alone is acceptable in speech but adding 'computer' makes the sentence complete; verb form is correct.
× This is because if I use keyboard I can't have in class.
✓ This is because I can't use a keyboard in class.
The original word order is incorrect and missing articles. Use 'use a keyboard' and place negation correctly: 'I can't use a keyboard in class.'
× But not possible can eat.
✓ So it's not possible to do that in class.
The fragment is ungrammatical. Use 'it's not possible to do that' to convey inability, matching the context of not being able to type in class.
× When did you learn how to type on a keyboard? / Certain when I was junior high school student this is because.
✓ I learned when I was a junior high school student.
Use past simple 'learned' for a completed action in the past and include the article 'a' before 'junior high school student.' Remove extraneous words.
× Not postcorn was forced severely distributed engineers high school.
✓ There was no proper training; I was just forced to learn in high school.
Original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. Use 'There was no proper training' to explain lack of instruction and 'I was forced to learn in high school' to express passive experience in the past.
× How do you improve your typing? / I think I should play the game in not Pasco.
✓ I think I should play typing games, not in Pasko.
Use 'should' correctly for suggestion. Clarify 'typing games' as the object and correct the unclear location/name 'Pasco' to 'Pasko' if referring to a place, or remove if incorrect. The modal 'should' is fine but the noun phrase needed correction.
× For example there are. Various game in not Pasco com de exidal so I should practice it?
✓ For example, there are various typing games online that I can practice with, so I should use them.
The original is fragmented and contains unclear words. Use 'various typing games online' and 'I can practice with' to make a coherent sentence. Change the question mark to a statement because it answers how to improve typing.