Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and organize the response: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with brief support, using linking words to connect ideas. Avoid repetitive phrases (e.g., mentioning both phone and laptop separately if not necessary).

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting because it helps me focus and remember information better. For example, when I take notes by hand I process ideas more deeply, and my writing is neater than when I type quickly. Therefore, I usually choose pen and paper for studying and planning.

Sugerencia: Finish sentences fully and avoid trailing off. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific details linked with words like "for example" or "so". Mention frequency or purpose to give clearer context.

Ejemplo: Yes, I type on a desktop keyboard every day at work because I update patient records and treatment plans. For example, each morning I enter new diagnoses and medication changes into the hospital system, which keeps the records accurate and up to date.

Sugerencia: This answer is generally good but could be slightly more concise and polished. Start with a clear time phrase, then add one specific detail or feeling and link it with a connective like "because" or "so" to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: I learned to type in school when I first visited the computer lab. I remember being excited because it was my first time using a computer, so I hurried to try the keyboard and type my first words.

Sugerencia: Use correct verb tenses and produce a clearer structure: topic sentence + specific method + brief result. Avoid awkward phrasing like "do not had"; choose simple, accurate grammar and one linking word such as "so" or "therefore."

Ejemplo: I have improved my typing by practicing every day on my phone and sometimes on shared computers. As a result, my speed increased and I can now type much faster, especially for short messages and notes.

× I prefer handwriting. I think everyone today loves to type, but I am a little slower to type in my phone as well as in my laptop.

✓ I prefer handwriting. I think everyone today loves to type, but I am a little slower when typing on my phone as well as on my laptop.

Use of 'to type in my phone' is unnatural and mixes infinitive with device preposition. Use gerund 'typing' with preposition 'on' for devices. Also replace 'to type in' with 'when typing on' for correct present-tense habitual action structure.

× I prefer to write with my pen smoothly and in a good handwriting.

✓ I prefer to write with my pen smoothly and in good handwriting.

The phrase 'a good handwriting' is incorrect because 'handwriting' is an uncountable noun here; do not use 'a'. Use the adverb 'smoothly' correctly; keep 'in good handwriting' without the article.

× I think physical writing engages me more rather than typing.

✓ I think physical writing engages me more than typing.

Use comparative structure 'more than' rather than 'more rather than'. 'Rather than' is for alternatives, but with 'more' the correct collocation is 'more than'.

× So during work, I would type on a desktop keyboard to enter the information regarding the patients, their diagnosis and the treatment plans.

✓ So during work, I type on a desktop keyboard to enter information about the patients, their diagnoses, and the treatment plans.

Use simple present 'type' for habitual action. Remove extra article 'the' before 'information' and use 'about' not 'regarding' for naturalness. 'Diagnosis' plural should be 'diagnoses' when referring to multiple patients.

× I have to update the daily patients and.

✓ I have to update the patients' daily records.

Original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Update the daily patients and.' lacks object. A clearer, grammatical phrase is 'update the patients' daily records' or 'update daily patient records' depending on intended meaning.

× I think it was during my school days when I attended the computer lab for the first time.

✓ I think it was during my school days when I attended the computer lab for the first time.

Sentence is acceptable as written; past tense 'was' and 'attended' are correctly used to describe a past event. No correction necessary.

× It was a really an amusement and surprising experience for me because I was first seeing a computer and the keyboard, so I was just excited to type my first word back then.

✓ It was a really amusing and surprising experience for me because I was seeing a computer and a keyboard for the first time, so I was just excited to type my first word then.

Use adjective 'amusing' not noun 'amusement' to describe 'experience'. 'First seeing' is awkward; use 'seeing ... for the first time' and use 'a keyboard' (not 'the keyboard') when introducing it. 'Back then' redundancy with 'for the first time' — 'then' suffices.

× I improved my typing by practicing daily.

✓ I improved my typing by practicing daily.

Sentence is correct: 'practicing' gerund correctly follows 'by' to indicate method. No correction necessary.

× Even though I do not had any computer back, I typed in my phone so that helped me a lot to improve my speed and the rate at which I type per minute.

✓ Even though I did not have a computer back then, I typed on my phone, which helped me a lot to improve my speed and the rate at which I type per minute.

Combine past-tense forms consistently: use 'did not have' rather than 'do not had'. Use 'back then' for time reference. Use preposition 'on' with 'phone'. Use a relative clause 'which helped me' instead of 'so that helped me' for clarity. The phrase 'the rate at which I type per minute' is wordy but acceptable; could be simplified to 'my words per minute'.