Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
Apple handwriting because it have more human heart. Last year I became a volunteer to ride handwriting to remote goals for engage encourage them them. Uh, it's a good way to. Uh, handwriting letters is a good way to to. Of feelings, a feeling.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
Umm, you usually I use laptops keyboard, uh, because I like, I like, uh, typing on the bed. It's a very comfortable way to type text.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
For the time I learn how to type on a keyboard when I was in primary school. Our primary middle school have a computer lesson to to teach me how to use keyboard to typing to type. Uh, I would like uh, airport apostate keyboard.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
Just practice. That was in primary school ever lesser I use I hardly to practice my typing access so now. I type very quickly.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Puntuación: 42.0Sugerencia: Speak more clearly and directly answer the question first. Use one clear topic sentence (e.g. I prefer handwriting) and then give two specific supporting details with linking words. Correct basic grammar (subject-verb agreement) and avoid repetition and filler words. Mention a concrete example of your volunteering experience with simple, relevant details (where, who, what you did, and the effect).
Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting to typing because it feels more personal and expressive. For example, last year I volunteered to deliver handwritten letters to people in a remote village, and those letters made the recipients feel appreciated and less isolated. In addition, writing by hand helps me think more clearly and remember things better.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Puntuación: 58.0Sugerencia: Begin with a direct answer (Yes, I usually use a laptop). Then give a reason and one specific detail, using linking words for coherence. Avoid repeating phrases and reduce fillers like "uh". Use correct collocations ("laptop keyboard" rather than "laptops keyboard").
Ejemplo: Yes, I usually type on a laptop keyboard because I like the flexibility it offers. For instance, I often work from my bed or couch, which is more comfortable than sitting at a desk. However, when I need to type for long periods I prefer a desktop with a full keyboard for better ergonomics.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: Start with a clear time expression (e.g. I learned to type when I was in primary school). Use correct verb forms and simpler sentences. Give one specific detail about the lessons (what you learned or how often). Avoid unclear or irrelevant phrases. Use linking words if you add another point.
Ejemplo: I learned to type when I was in primary school during our weekly computer lessons. The teacher showed us basic typing skills and we practiced using typing exercises to improve speed and accuracy. Those early lessons helped me become confident using a keyboard.
How do you improve your typing?
Puntuación: 49.0Sugerencia: Provide a clear method and one or two specific steps you take to improve typing. Use coherent linking words (e.g. "first", "then", "finally") and correct tense. Replace vague or conflicting statements with consistent information. Mention measurable practice habits if possible (minutes per day or resources used).
Ejemplo: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice. First, I use online typing exercises for 20 minutes a day to build accuracy, and then I practice by typing emails and essays to increase speed. As a result, my typing has become much faster and more accurate.
× Apple handwriting because it have more human heart.
✓ I prefer handwriting because it has more human warmth.
The sentence had a missing subject and incorrect pronoun use ('Apple' and missing 'I prefer'). 'have' is incorrect for singular third-person subject so it should be 'has' (third person singular). Also 'human heart' is unnatural; 'human warmth' or 'a human touch' is more natural. Suggestion: always include the subject and match the verb form to the subject.
× Last year I became a volunteer to ride handwriting to remote goals for engage encourage them them.
✓ Last year I volunteered to deliver handwriting to remote villages to encourage them.
The original mixes incorrect verbs and nouns ('ride handwriting', 'goals') and repeats words. Use 'volunteered' (past tense) correctly and 'deliver handwriting' or 'deliver handwritten letters' to 'remote villages'. Also use the infinitive 'to encourage' rather than 'for engage encourage'. Suggestion: choose accurate nouns and verbs and keep verb tense consistent with 'Last year'.
× Uh, it's a good way to. Uh, handwriting letters is a good way to to. Of feelings, a feeling.
✓ It's a good way to express feelings. Handwritten letters are a good way to do that.
The original is fragmented and repetitive. Combine ideas into complete sentences: 'a good way to express feelings' is the correct structure. Use plural 'letters' with appropriate verb 'are'. Avoid fragments like 'a feeling'. Suggestion: form full sentences with subject and verb and avoid repetition.
× Umm, you usually I use laptops keyboard, uh, because I like, I like, uh, typing on the bed.
✓ Usually I use a laptop keyboard because I like typing on the bed.
The sentence had extra pronouns ('you usually I') and missing article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard'. Use 'I use' not 'you I use'. Also 'laptop' is singular and needs 'a'. Suggestion: remove extraneous words and include articles where required.
× It's a very comfortable way to type text.
✓ It's a very comfortable way to type text.
This sentence is acceptable; no article error. Kept as is. Explanation: 'a very comfortable way' is grammatically correct. (No change required.)
× For the time I learn how to type on a keyboard when I was in primary school.
✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in primary school.
Incorrect tense and extra words ('For the time'). Use simple past 'learned' to match 'when I was in primary school'. Suggestion: remove unnecessary phrases and use past tense for completed actions.
× Our primary middle school have a computer lesson to to teach me how to use keyboard to typing to type.
✓ Our primary/middle school had a computer lesson to teach us how to use a keyboard and how to type.
Subject-verb agreement: 'school' is singular so use 'had' (past tense). Also correct infinitive forms: 'to teach us how to use a keyboard and how to type' instead of 'to typing'. Include article 'a' before 'keyboard' and use appropriate pronoun 'us' if referring to classmates. Suggestion: match verb number and tense and use correct infinitives.
× Uh, I would like uh, airport apostate keyboard.
✓ Uh, I would like a compact or portable keyboard.
The original 'airport apostate keyboard' is unintelligible likely due to mispronunciation. Guessing intended meaning: 'compact' or 'portable' keyboard. Use article 'a' and adjective before noun. Suggestion: choose correct adjective and place it before the noun.
× Just practice.
✓ I just practice.
'Just practice' is a fragment; adding subject makes it a complete sentence: 'I just practice' or 'I just practice regularly.' Suggestion: include subject and, if desired, adverb of frequency for clarity.
× That was in primary school ever lesser I use I hardly to practice my typing access so now.
✓ That was in primary school. For a long time I hardly practiced my typing, so now...
The original mixes tenses and has unclear phrasing ('ever lesser', 'access so now'). Use past tense 'hardly practiced' for the period after primary school. Separate into two sentences for clarity. Suggestion: keep consistent tense and use clear expressions like 'for a long time' or 'for many years'.
× I type very quickly.
✓ I type very quickly now.
Adding 'now' clarifies the contrast with past lack of practice. The sentence itself is grammatically correct present tense. Suggestion: include time marker if contrasting past and present.