Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant, but a bit wordy and slightly repetitive ("write things with my hands" and "write my ideas out"). Make it more concise, start with a direct topic sentence, then give one specific reason and an example. Use a linking phrase to connect reason and example.

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting because it helps me organize and visualize my ideas. For example, when planning an essay I sketch diagrams and bullet points by hand, which makes it easier to structure my paragraphs later.

Sugerencia: Good direct answer and clear reasons. To improve, combine sentences to avoid repetition and add a brief comparison to strengthen your point. Use a linking word to show contrast or emphasis.

Ejemplo: I generally prefer a desktop because the large screen makes it easier to read emails and type for long periods. In contrast, my laptop’s smaller display strains my eyes during extended work sessions.

Sugerencia: The answer is natural and gives context, but it’s long and slightly unfocused. Begin with a concise topic sentence (e.g., "I learned to type as a child.") then give one specific supporting detail and, if possible, a brief estimate of timing. Avoid repeating phrases like "answer mails" and "send mails."

Ejemplo: I learned to type as a child because both my parents used computers for work. As a result, I picked up typing informally at home around the age of eight or nine by watching and practicing on their keyboards.

Sugerencia: Good content and clear method, but phrasing is slightly vague ("a mnemonic", "them"). Be specific about the technique and explain briefly how it helps, using a linking word to connect the method and its benefit.

Ejemplo: I improved my typing using a mnemonic taught in primary school that maps finger positions to key groups. Because of this, I can quickly visualize which fingers press which keys, which reduces errors and increases my typing speed.

× Personally, I would say I prefer to write things with my hands because it helps me to organize my thoughts and write my ideas out for me to visualize them.

✓ Personally, I would say I prefer to write things by hand because it helps me organize my thoughts and write my ideas out so I can visualize them.

Multiple small issues: 'with my hands' is wordy and non-idiomatic for handwriting; replace with 'by hand' (article/phrase choice). 'Helps me to organize' -> 'helps me organize' (omit optional 'to'). 'for me to visualize them' is awkward; use purpose clause 'so I can visualize them'. These changes improve idiomatic phrasing and clarity.

× I generally prefer a desktop. This is because I have a desktop from work which I use to answer mails.

✓ I generally prefer a desktop because I have a desktop at work that I use to answer emails.

'This is because' is unnecessary splitting; combine into one sentence for clarity (sentence structure). 'From work' is the wrong preposition; use 'at work' (incorrect use of prepositions). 'Which' can be replaced with 'that' for restrictive clause (sentence structure). 'Mails' is non-idiomatic in English; use 'emails' (word choice).

× It's just easier for me because it has a very large screen and the words are easier to see.

✓ It's just easier for me because it has a very large screen and the text is easier to see.

'The words are easier to see' is understandable but 'the text' is more natural when referring to on-screen content (incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs/word choice). No tense or agreement issues; this is an idiomatic improvement.

× I can't exactly remember when I started to type because I had working parents while I was growing up who were always typing all day long on their systems to answer mails or send mails to different people.

✓ I can't exactly remember when I started typing because my parents both worked while I was growing up and were always typing all day on their computers to answer or send emails to different people.

'Started to type' vs 'started typing' – both can be used, but 'started typing' is more natural here (verb + -ing form). 'Had working parents' is awkward; use 'my parents both worked' (sentence structure/pronoun use). 'On their systems' is better as 'on their computers' (word choice). Replace 'mails' with 'emails' and simplify 'answer mails or send mails' to 'answer or send emails' for idiomatic clarity.

× There was a mnemonic that was taught to us by my teacher when I was in primary school.

✓ My teacher taught us a mnemonic when I was in primary school.

'There was a mnemonic that was taught to us by my teacher' is wordy and passive. Change to active voice 'My teacher taught us a mnemonic' to improve clarity and naturalness (incorrect passive usage/sentence structure). Tense remains past simple, which fits the context.

× This has stuck with me and I always use them to visualize the keyboard every time I type so it's easier for me to remember where the keys are.

✓ It has stuck with me, and I always use it to visualize the keyboard whenever I type, so it's easier for me to remember where the keys are.

'This has stuck with me' is fine, but pronoun agreement error: 'This' (singular) followed by 'I always use them' (plural) is inconsistent; replace 'them' with 'it' (incorrect use of pronouns). Also replace 'every time' with 'whenever' for smoother flow. Keep present perfect 'has stuck' and present 'I always use' to indicate continuing effect.

× I still use it today though.

✓ I still use it today, though.

Only a minor punctuation change: add a comma before 'though' for natural cadence. No grammatical tense or agreement issues.