Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons using correct tense and linking words. Avoid redundancy and fix unclear phrases (e.g. “it's quickly the handwriting”).

Ejemplo: I prefer typing for most tasks because it is faster and easier to correct mistakes. However, for personal items like birthday or holiday cards, I still handwrite them to make them feel more personal.

Sugerencia: Begin with a direct topic sentence and use linking words to list reasons. Correct grammar (e.g. "I prefer to type on a laptop") and avoid filler phrases like "you know." Provide two clear reasons compactly.

Ejemplo: I prefer to type on a laptop because it is portable and convenient when I travel. Also, laptops are more affordable and take up less space than desktops.

Sugerencia: Keep the answer direct and tidy. Start with a clear time reference, then give concise supporting details with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid vague phrases like "almost spent every day to type."

Ejemplo: I learned to type when I was about six or seven; my dad bought me a computer and taught me the basics. After that, I practised daily chatting with online friends, which helped me become faster and more accurate.

Sugerencia: Give a personal, structured answer: state your main methods, then give specific examples. Avoid generalisations about nationality and fix word choice (e.g. "consistency and repetition" not "reputation"). Use linking words to connect points.

Ejemplo: I improve my typing by using typing apps that teach touch-typing and by practising every day. For example, I use a typing tutor for 15 minutes each morning and chat with friends online to build speed and accuracy through consistent repetition.

× I think it will depend if you have to write some personal stuff such as a letter or birthday card or holiday card you had to hand write to your friend.

✓ I think it depends on whether you have to write personal things, such as a letter, birthday card, or holiday card that you have to handwrite for a friend.

Uses incorrect conditional phrasing and mixed tenses. 'It will depend if' is awkward; use 'it depends on whether'. 'Stuff' is informal; 'things' is more appropriate. 'You had to hand write' mixes past and present; use 'that you have to handwrite' to match the general statement. Also combine items with commas and use 'handwrite' as one word. Suggestion: Use 'it depends on whether' for conditional dependence and keep verb tenses consistent for general statements.

× But if something like writing an e-mail, I'd prefer typing because it's quickly the handwriting and you can avoid typos.

✓ But if it is something like writing an e-mail, I'd prefer typing because it's quicker than handwriting and you can avoid typos.

Missing subject 'it is' for the conditional clause. 'Quickly' is an adverb; the comparative adjective 'quicker' (or 'faster') is needed to compare typing with handwriting. Also use 'than' for comparison: 'quicker than handwriting.' Suggestion: Use proper subject in clauses and select adjective vs adverb correctly when making comparisons.

× I do prefer type on a laptop because you know it's affordable, especially when you go out.

✓ I do prefer to type on a laptop because, you know, it's portable, especially when you go out.

Missing 'to' after 'prefer' when followed by a verb ('prefer to type'). 'Affordable' describes cost, but context implies portability; 'portable' is more accurate. Commas added for natural spoken pauses. Suggestion: Use 'prefer to + base verb' and choose the adjective that matches the intended meaning.

× You can bring your laptop with you, but you cannot bring your desktop with you, which I think laptop is pretty convenient.

✓ You can bring your laptop with you, but you cannot bring your desktop, so I think a laptop is much more convenient.

Awkward clause 'which I think laptop is pretty convenient' misuses pronouns and articles. Use a coordinating conjunction ('so') to show result and include the article 'a' before 'laptop'. Also 'much more convenient' is a natural comparative. Suggestion: Use clear connectors and include articles before singular countable nouns.

× Well, actually it happened when I was six or seven years old.

✓ Well, actually it happened when I was six or seven years old.

Sentence is grammatically correct; tense matches past event. No change necessary. Suggestion: None.

× My dad bought me a computer and taught me how to type, and after that I almost spent every day to type and communicate with my online friend.

✓ My dad bought me a computer and taught me how to type, and after that I spent almost every day typing and communicating with my online friends.

Incorrect verb pattern 'spent every day to type' should be 'spent every day typing' (spend + time + -ing). 'Communicate' should be in -ing form to match 'typing'. 'Online friend' likely plural 'friends' for general practice. Word order 'almost spent every day' changed to 'spent almost every day' for natural placement. Suggestion: Use 'spend time doing something' and keep parallel -ing forms for consecutive actions.

× So after that, I gradually learned how to type correctly and quickly.

✓ So after that, I gradually learned to type correctly and quickly.

Both forms are acceptable, but 'learned to type' is more concise than 'learned how to type' in this context. Tense is appropriate (past). Suggestion: Prefer 'learned to + verb' for brevity when describing acquiring a skill.

× Well for me if you are a Chinese people you can download all types of apps which you can learn how to type quickly and correctly.

✓ Well, for me, if you are Chinese you can download all types of apps that help you learn to type quickly and correctly.

'A Chinese people' is incorrect; use 'Chinese' or 'a Chinese person'. 'Which you can learn how to type' is awkward; use 'that help you learn to type' and 'learn to type' rather than 'learn how to type' for concision. Added commas for clarity. Suggestion: Use correct demonym/pronoun forms and prefer 'help you learn to [verb]' for describing app functions.

× And second I think is keep consistent and reputation.

✓ Secondly, I think you should be consistent and persistent.

Sentence lacks subject and verb; 'keep consistent and reputation' is incorrect word choice. 'Reputation' is wrong word — likely meant 'repetition' or 'persistence'. 'Be consistent and persistent' or 'keep practicing consistently' is clearer. Suggestion: Use precise nouns/adjectives and include subject and verb: 'You should be consistent and persistent.'

× You need to communicate with your friend via social media everyday then you can learn quickly.

✓ You need to communicate with your friends via social media every day, and then you can learn quickly.

'Everyday' as one word is an adjective meaning 'ordinary'; use 'every day' (two words) to mean each day. 'Friend' likely plural 'friends' for general advice. Add conjunction 'and' and a comma for sentence flow. Suggestion: Use 'every day' for frequency and ensure plural/singular matches the general meaning.