Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid sentence fragments and repetition (e.g., “by bus, by car or by trains” and the broken sentence at the end).

Ejemplo: Yes. I always look out the window when I travel by bus, car or train because I enjoy observing the countryside and local life. For example, on a recent trip I watched farmers working in the fields, which made the journey more interesting and helped me learn about the area.

Sugerencia: Make the answer direct and grammatically correct. Use one reason and a brief specific example. Avoid redundant phrases like “car or car window or any transportation window” and choose clearer words than “monumental and remembrance.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos through vehicle windows because they help me remember the places I visit. For instance, I photographed a mountain village last month and the photos remind me of its architecture and local festivals.

Sugerencia: Clarify your preference with correct grammar and a concrete reason. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and avoid unclear expressions like “I have the fish of water” and “being a prey.” Provide a short example to support your preference.

Ejemplo: I prefer the mountains because I feel more comfortable and relaxed there. For example, hiking in the hills helps me clear my mind, whereas the open sea makes me anxious and uneasy.

× Of course, I really look out the window at the scenery when I'm traveling either by bus, by car or by trains, simply because I love the views and I love to feel the time in another country. So I get to experience this and will never. Let this chance.

✓ Of course, I really look out the window at the scenery when I'm traveling either by bus, by car, or by train, simply because I love the views and I love to feel the time in another country, so I get to experience this and will never let this chance pass.

Errors: 'by trains' is incorrect plural after 'by' for modes of transport; use 'by train'. The sentence also has incorrect sentence boundary and word order: 'will never. Let this chance.' should be combined into 'will never let this chance pass.' The issues involve present participle phrasing and sentence structure. Suggestion: use 'by train' for consistency, join clauses into one sentence, and use the verb phrase 'let this chance pass' for correct idiomatic expression.

× Yes, I do think photos of the scenery outside the car or car window or any transportation window, simply because it becomes monumental and remembrance that I get to travel to this country and I get to experience the view and their culture.

✓ Yes, I do take photos of the scenery outside the car window or any other vehicle window, simply because they become memorable reminders that I traveled to this country and got to experience its views and culture.

Errors: 'do think photos' is incorrect verb choice; use 'do take photos'. Repetition 'car or car window' is redundant. 'Any transportation window' is awkward; use 'any other vehicle window'. 'It becomes monumental and remembrance' is ungrammatical; use 'they become memorable reminders'. Tense consistency: use past tense 'traveled' if referring to a completed trip, or present perfect 'have traveled' for general experience. Pronoun agreement: 'their culture' should match 'this country' => 'its culture'. Suggestion: choose correct verb 'take', remove redundancy, use plural pronouns for 'photos', and ensure consistent tense and pronoun agreement.

× I prefer the mountains rather than sea simply because I have the fish of water, so whenever I see oceans or sea I being a prey at all because it makes me feel lost.

✓ I prefer the mountains to the sea simply because I am afraid of water, so whenever I see the ocean or the sea I feel like prey because it makes me feel lost.

Errors: 'rather than sea' should be 'prefer the mountains to the sea' (correct preposition). 'I have the fish of water' is meaningless and likely intended as 'I am afraid of water' — pronoun and noun misuse. 'Oceans or sea' should be singular 'the ocean or the sea' and articles are needed. 'I being a prey at all' is ungrammatical; use 'I feel like prey'. Suggestions: use correct comparative structure 'prefer X to Y', replace incorrect phrase with 'am afraid of water', add definite articles for specific natural features, and use 'feel like prey' for idiomatic expression.