Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer directly responds but is slightly unclear and contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Improve by making one clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Fix grammar (e.g., ‘even on airplanes’, ‘I can’t see these views in my daily life’). Keep it under five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes. I often look out the window when I travel by bus, train or airplane because I enjoy seeing new landscapes. For example, I like watching city skylines or countryside fields pass by, and I often take photos so I can remember them later.

Sugerencia: The answer is understandable but confused and grammatically incorrect. Start with a clear statement (Yes or No), then explain one reason with a linking word and a concrete example. Avoid vague phrases like ‘different vibe’ without explaining what you mean.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I especially like taking photos from inside a car because including a bit of the vehicle in the frame can add context and create a travel atmosphere. For instance, a window frame or a passenger’s silhouette often makes the picture feel more personal.

Sugerencia: Your answer expresses preference but is awkward and unclear. Provide a clear topic sentence stating your choice, then give two specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., ‘I can reflect on my thoughts’, ‘it makes me feel calm and peaceful’).

Ejemplo: I prefer the sea to the mountains. Firstly, the sound of the waves helps me relax and reflect on my thoughts, and secondly, I enjoy having quiet conversations with friends or family by the shore because it feels peaceful and restorative.

× Yes, I usually look out the window at the scenery when traveling by bus or train, even airplane, because I think all the views there are.

✓ Yes, I usually look out the window at the scenery when traveling by bus or train, and even on an airplane, because I think there are many views to see there.

Incorrect preposition and article use: 'even airplane' needs the preposition on and an article 'an airplane'. Also the clause 'because I think all the views there are' is awkward and ungrammatical; reorder to 'there are many views to see there'. Use of 'and' improves connection. Suggested improvement: remember to use 'on' with 'airplane' ('on a/an airplane') and include articles for singular countable nouns.

× I cannot see land in my ordinary life, so I would like to appreciate the views and take photos for them.

✓ I do not see such landscapes in my everyday life, so I like to enjoy the views and take photos of them.

Awkward phrasing and incorrect preposition: 'cannot see land in my ordinary life' is unnatural; 'everyday life' fits better. 'Take photos for them' uses wrong preposition; use 'take photos of them'. Also use present simple 'do not see' to match habitual action. Suggested improvement: use natural collocations like 'see landscapes' or 'in my everyday life' and the correct preposition 'of' after 'photos'.

× Actually both but I like take photos in the car because the the front of a picture will a part of cars and the friend can show some different vibe of the picture and you can get different atmosphere there.

✓ Actually both, but I like to take photos in the car because the front of the picture will include part of the car, and that can give the photo a different vibe and atmosphere.

Multiple errors: missing 'to' after 'like' (infinitive required), duplicate 'the the', article and noun phrase errors ('the front of a picture will a part of cars' corrected to 'the front of the picture will include part of the car'), and unclear pronoun 'the friend'—use 'that' or 'this' to refer to the car element. 'Get different atmosphere' needs 'give the photo a different vibe and atmosphere'. Suggested improvement: check infinitive use after 'like' ('like to do'), remove duplicate words, ensure articles match singular/plural nouns, and choose clear pronouns ('that' or 'this').

× I like the sea more than mountains, because when I sit in front of the sea that I can sing a lot of things about myself or talk something mental work to my friend, my family and she can make me feel calm and quietly.

✓ I prefer the sea to the mountains, because when I sit by the sea I can sing and talk about personal things with my friends or family, and it makes me feel calm and peaceful.

Tense and vocabulary issues and pronoun errors: 'I like the sea more than mountains' is acceptable but 'prefer the sea to the mountains' is more natural. 'Sit in front of the sea' should be 'sit by the sea'. 'That I can sing a lot of things about myself' is ungrammatical; use 'I can sing and talk about personal things'. 'Talk something mental work' is meaningless—replace with 'talk about personal things' or 'discuss emotional matters'. 'My friend, my family and she' has wrong pronoun 'she' and incorrect grouping; use 'my friends or family'. 'Calm and quietly' incorrect: adjective 'calm' and adverb 'quietly' mismatched—use 'calm and peaceful'. Suggested improvement: use natural verbs and phrases for emotional expression ('talk about personal things', 'feel calm and peaceful'), ensure correct pronouns and parallel structure.

× It is very nice.

✓ It is very nice.

No grammatical error detected that matches the listed problem types; sentence is correct. Included here for completeness; no change needed.