Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid unclear words (e.g. "this Hindi") and incomplete clauses. Use one or two supporting reasons connected with linking words (e.g. "because", "so"). Keep it within 2–4 sentences and avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy watching the scenery because the passing landscape and fresh air help me relax. Also, I often take photos from the window to remember the trip and share highlights with friends.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give a concise specific example. Use correct tense and smoother linking words (e.g. "for example", "because", "so"). Avoid small grammar mistakes and finish sentences clearly (e.g. "so others can see them").

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos and videos from the window when I travel to scenic places. For example, last year I sat by the window on a trip to Kashmir, recorded the mountain views, and uploaded short clips to TikTok so others could enjoy them too.

Sugerencia: State your preference clearly at the start. Use correct grammar for experience and preference (e.g. "I haven't been to the sea yet"). Give one or two specific reasons with linking words and avoid filler sounds like "uh". Keep sentences natural and not too long.

Ejemplo: I haven't been to the sea yet, but I think I would prefer the sea to the mountains. I imagine the sea's fresh air and the sound of waves would help me relax and feel peaceful, which is why I would choose it.

× Yes, I love to look out the window at this Hindi whenever I am travelling by the car or by a bus.

✓ Yes, I love to look out the window at the scenery whenever I am travelling by car or by bus.

The original uses 'this Hindi' which is incorrect word choice for 'scenery' and 'the car'/'a bus' articles are unnecessary when speaking generally. Use 'scenery' (correct noun) and 'by car'/'by bus' are standard adverbial phrases. Replace incorrect adjective/noun and adjust articles.

× The reason is when the air passes by me then I feel relaxed and calm and moreover.

✓ The reason is that when the air passes me, I feel relaxed and calm.

Use 'the reason is that' to introduce a clause. 'Passes by me' is awkward; 'passes me' or 'blows past me' is preferable. 'And moreover' is redundant and unnecessary. Simplify to present simple for habitual feeling.

× I take pictures whenever I travel by the car or bus.

✓ I take pictures whenever I travel by car or by bus.

When speaking of general habits use 'travel by car'/'travel by bus' without 'the' or 'a'. Maintain simple present tense for habitual action.

× Yes, I like to take photos out of the car for bus whenever I travel to northern areas.

✓ Yes, I like to take photos from the car or bus whenever I travel to northern areas.

Use 'from the car or bus' to indicate photos taken through the vehicle window. 'Out of the car for bus' is incorrect word order and preposition use. Keep preposition 'from' and correct vehicle coordination.

× For instance, when I travel to Kashmir last year then my seat was a window seat so I took videos of the scenery and uploaded them on Tiktok and YouTube so that other people can.

✓ For instance, when I travelled to Kashmir last year, my seat was a window seat, so I took videos of the scenery and uploaded them to TikTok and YouTube so that other people could see them.

Mix of present and past tenses: use past simple 'travelled' for a past event. Remove redundant 'then'. Use 'uploaded to' not 'on' and finish clause 'so that other people could see them' to be grammatically complete. Also use past modal 'could' for ability in the past.

× I have not been to the sea since now, but I would say that I prefer sea over mountains because the fresh air and sound of sea water uh feels me like relaxed and calm effect on my soul.

✓ I have not been to the sea yet, but I would say that I prefer the sea over the mountains because the fresh air and the sound of the sea make me feel relaxed and calm.

'Since now' is incorrect; use 'yet' with present perfect. Use definite article 'the sea' and 'the mountains'. 'Sound of sea water' is awkward; 'sound of the sea' is natural. 'Feels me like relaxed and calm effect' is ungrammatical: use 'make me feel relaxed and calm.' Maintain present perfect for experience and conditional 'would' for preference.