Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Говорите более естественно и стройно: начните с прямого ответа, затем добавьте 1–2 предложения с конкретными деталями. Избегайте лишних слов и ошибок в структуре (например, «to see scenery» → «to see the scenery»). Используйте связки («and», «so», «because», «for example») для плавности. Постарайтесь разнообразить лексику (e.g. use “breathtaking”, “tranquil”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I always look out of the window when I travel by bus. I find the scenery quite soothing, especially at sunrise or sunset, because the colors make the landscape look breathtaking. For example, I often watch fields and rivers pass by and it helps me relax.

Sugerencia: Дайте более связный ответ и исправьте грамматику и артикли. Начните с краткого общего утверждения, затем объясните причины и укажите конкретный пример. Избегайте повторов («sometimes, sometimes») и неверных форм («to friend» → «to a friend»).

Ejemplo: It depends — sometimes I take photos and sometimes I don't. If the weather is nice and I'm in a good mood, I often photograph the view and send the images to a friend. However, if I'm tired or feeling low, I usually just watch without taking pictures.

Sugerencia: Дайте чёткий выбор или объясните равнозначность, используйте корректные выражения и свяжите мысли. Избегайте разговорных вставок («uh») и неверных предлогов («To my opinion» → «In my opinion»). Расширьте ответ одной-двумя конкретными причинами с примерами.

Ejemplo: In my opinion, both the mountains and the sea have their charms, but I prefer the mountains. I feel inspired by their scale and peaceful hiking trails, for example when I climb a hill and enjoy panoramic views. The sea is relaxing too, but I enjoy the sense of achievement in the mountains more.

× Indefinitely, yes.

✓ Definitely, yes.

'Indefinitely' is incorrect in this context; the speaker likely means 'definitely' to express certainty. 'Indefinitely' means for an unlimited time, which doesn't fit the intended meaning. Use 'definitely' to convey affirmation. Suggestion: choose words that match intended meaning; 'definitely' or 'certainly' are appropriate here.

× When I go somewhere by bus, I always look at the window and to see scenery or beautiful landscapes, it's amazing feeling.

✓ When I go somewhere by bus, I always look out of the window to see the scenery or beautiful landscapes; it's an amazing feeling.

Errors: unnecessary 'to' before 'see' and missing preposition 'out of' after 'look'; missing article 'the' before 'scenery' and 'an' before 'amazing feeling'. Use 'look out of the window' or 'look out the window', 'to see' should follow directly without extra 'and'. Also use articles: 'the scenery' and 'an amazing feeling'. Suggestion: 'look out of the window to see the scenery' and include appropriate articles.

× To go somewhere and just watching by the sunset or sunrise, it's amazing.

✓ To go somewhere and just watch the sunset or sunrise is amazing.

Error: incorrect verb form 'watching' after 'to' (infinitive should be 'watch'), and awkward preposition 'by' before 'the sunset' (should be no preposition). Also combine into one sentence without comma. Use infinitive 'to watch' or gerund phrase without 'to': 'Going somewhere and just watching...' If using 'to': 'To go... and to watch...' or simply 'Going... and watching...'. Suggestion: use correct verb forms after 'to' and avoid unnecessary prepositions.

× Sometimes I do and sometimes, sometimes I don't.

✓ Sometimes I do, and sometimes I don't.

Error: unnecessary repetition of 'sometimes' and punctuation issues. Remove duplicate word and add a comma before 'and' for clarity. Suggestion: avoid repeating adverbs; use clear punctuation.

× If I'm tired or feeling depressed, usually I don't feel like taking photos.

✓ If I'm tired or feeling depressed, I usually don't feel like taking photos.

Word order: adverb 'usually' is better placed after the comma and before the verb phrase. The original placement 'usually I don't' is acceptable but less natural here; moving 'usually' improves fluency. Suggestion: place adverbs in natural positions: 'I usually don't'.

× But when I'm in a good mood and the view is nice, I often take pictures of the landscape to send to friend.

✓ But when I'm in a good mood and the view is nice, I often take pictures of the landscape to send to a friend.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'friend'. Without the article, the noun is incorrect. Use 'a friend' or 'my friends' depending on meaning. Suggestion: include appropriate articles before singular countable nouns.

× To my opinion, both uh variants are amazing.

✓ In my opinion, both options are amazing.

Error: incorrect preposition 'To my opinion' should be 'In my opinion'. Also 'uh variants' is informal and awkward; 'options' or 'choices' is better. 'Both options' fits the question asking preference between mountains and sea. Suggestion: use set phrases like 'In my opinion' and choose appropriate vocabulary.

× Mountains are beautiful and gorgeous.

✓ Mountains are beautiful and majestic.

'Gorgeous' can be used but paired with 'beautiful' is repetitive. 'Majestic' is a more natural collocation with 'mountains'. This is a style suggestion to improve naturalness rather than strict grammar. Suggestion: vary adjectives to avoid redundancy; choose collocations that fit the noun.

× They are so huge that when you look at them you feel so inspired of this.

✓ They are so huge that when you look at them you feel so inspired by them.

Incorrect preposition 'inspired of' should be 'inspired by'. Also 'of this' is vague; use 'by them' to refer to the mountains. Ensure pronoun matches the noun. Suggestion: use 'inspired by' for the cause of inspiration and ensure pronoun reference is clear.

× Huge size.

✓ Their huge size is impressive.

Fragment: 'Huge size.' is not a complete sentence (no verb). Convert to a full sentence, e.g., 'Their huge size is impressive' or integrate into previous sentence. Suggestion: always include a subject and verb to form a complete sentence.