Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and stay on topic. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two concise supporting details. Avoid irrelevant comments (e.g. about writing) and filler sounds like “uh.” Use linking words for clarity (for example, “because” or “so”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy watching the changing landscape. For example, I often notice farmland and small villages on long journeys, which helps me relax and pass the time.

Sugerencia: Give a concise direct answer, then add a clear reason. Use fewer repeated phrases and choose smoother connectors such as “because” or “so.” Include a brief example to support your reason.

Ejemplo: No, I usually don't take photos of scenery from the car because I prefer to watch and enjoy the view directly. For instance, when I travel to the countryside I focus on the landscape rather than using my phone, so I remember the trip better.

Sugerencia: Answer clearly and expand with specific reasons and one concise example. Correct minor grammar and word choice (e.g. “enjoyable” instead of “enjoyful”). Use linking words like “because” or “so” to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy the fresh air and the peaceful atmosphere. For example, I often ride my motorcycle on winding mountain roads, which is enjoyable and gives me a sense of freedom.

× I look at the window, at the scenery when, uh, whenever I'm traveling on a vehicle.

✓ I look out the window at the scenery whenever I'm traveling in a vehicle.

Use of 'look at the window' is unnatural; native speakers say 'look out the window'. Preposition with vehicle is 'in' (not 'on') for cars and similar vehicles. Also remove filler and redundant commas. Use 'whenever' alone for time reference.

× I'm not very good at writing.

✓ I'm not very good at taking photos.

Context shows student means they do not take photos well, not that they are bad at writing. The original sentence is grammatically correct but pragmatically wrong for the question, so correct to a pronoun/verb phrase that matches context.

× I can mediate my feelings.

✓ I can express my feelings.

'Mediate my feelings' is incorrect collocation; 'express my feelings' is the correct verb phrase. This fixes verb choice while keeping present ability meaning.

× I don't take photos of the scenery outside the car window because the reason I'm at the position that I can see the scenery is because I like to look at the scenery, not taking pictures.

✓ I don't take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I'm in a position to enjoy the view and I prefer looking at it rather than taking pictures.

Original sentence has awkward structure and tense usage. Use simple present 'I don't take' and 'I'm in a position' instead of 'the reason I'm at the position that I can see'. Use parallel structure 'prefer looking... rather than taking...' and maintain present tense consistency.

× Most of the time I go to the mountains is by riding on a motorcycle.

✓ Most of the time I go to the mountains by riding a motorcycle.

Remove unnecessary 'is' which causes a subject-verb mismatch and awkward clause. Use 'by riding a motorcycle' as the correct means-expression. 'On a motorcycle' is acceptable but 'riding a motorcycle' is more natural.

× The winding roads are enjoyful to ride on a motorcycle.

✓ The winding roads are enjoyable to ride on with a motorcycle.

The word 'enjoyful' is not commonly used; 'enjoyable' is the correct adjective. Also adjust prepositional phrase to 'ride on with a motorcycle' or better 'to ride a motorcycle on' to sound natural.