Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrases (e.g. “falling” is unclear). Pay attention to grammar (verb forms and articles).

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually look out the window when I travel by bus or car. I do this because it helps me relax and pass the time; for example, I enjoy watching passing buildings and trees. Also, looking outside makes long journeys feel shorter.

Sugerencia: Give a concise direct answer first, then support it with one clear reason using linking words. Avoid repeating the same idea and fix sentence structure (e.g. use 'because the car is moving' rather than repeating 'since').

Ejemplo: No, I don't usually take photos from a moving vehicle because the pictures often turn out blurry. Also, for safety reasons I prefer to watch the scenery rather than using my phone while the car is moving.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and choose a preference or clearly state equal preference. Use linking words to compare and give specific details. Correct grammar (singular/plural and word order) and remove hesitations. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I don't have a strong preference because both are special to me. The mountains appeal to me for their fresh air and peaceful trails, whereas the sea is great for relaxing on the beach, watching sunsets and swimming.

× Yes, I look out the window at the scenery when traveling by bus or car because I find that falling and to distract myself because since travelling in a bus or a car for you to distract only small scenario you have to look out to see yes.

✓ Yes, I look out the window at the scenery when traveling by bus or car because it helps me relax and distract myself; when you are traveling in a vehicle, looking outside is an easy way to pass the time.

The original sentence contains multiple sentence structure errors, such as fragments, redundant connectors, and unclear phrases ('falling and to distract myself', 'only small scenario'). Combine ideas into clear clauses and use appropriate connectors. Suggestion: state the main reason first, use 'helps me relax and distract myself' and join related ideas with a semicolon or conjunction. Grammar problem type ID:26

× No, the reason for that is taking photos of the scenery outside the car windows is not appropriate because when taking photos, since you cannot take a photo since the car is driving will be difficult for you all, the photo will not be clear.

✓ No, the reason is that taking photos of the scenery outside the car window is not appropriate because while the car is moving it is difficult to take a clear picture.

Errors include article misuse ('car windows' should be 'car window' in this context) and redundant conjunctions ('since... since'). Simplify the clause order: 'the reason is that...' then explain cause with a clear subordinate clause 'because while the car is moving...'. Grammar problem type ID:22

× It will not come out clear.

✓ The photos will not come out clearly.

Original lacks subject and uses adjective 'clear' where adverb 'clearly' is required to modify the verb 'come out'. Also specify subject 'photos' for clarity. This fixes both sentence structure and word form. Grammar problem type ID:26

× That's what I'm saying.

✓ That's what I mean.

While not strictly ungrammatical, 'That's what I'm saying' is less natural here; 'That's what I mean' better conveys intended clarification. Use present simple for general statements. Grammar problem type ID:26

× No, I don't see.

✓ No, I don't take photos.

The phrase 'I don't see' is incorrect for saying you do not take photos. Replace with direct answer that fits the question: 'I don't take photos.' This matches expected tense and meaning. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I I precisely I don't have personal preference, but both have something special.

✓ I don't have a personal preference; both have something special.

Remove repeated pronoun 'I' and add article 'a' before 'personal preference'. Use a semicolon or conjunction to connect the two clauses neatly. This fixes pronoun redundancy and article omission. Grammar problem type ID:12

× The mountains are fresh, calm and quiet view while the sea are feeling relaxing through beaches, waves, sunset and swimming can be really enjoyable.

✓ The mountains offer a fresh, calm, and quiet view, while the sea feels relaxing with its beaches, waves, and sunsets; swimming there can be really enjoyable.

Several issues: 'mountains are ... view' mismatches noun forms — change to 'offer a ... view'. Subject-verb agreement: 'sea are' incorrect; use 'sea feels'. Use plural 'sunsets' to match list. Rearrange to create parallel structure and correct adjective/adverb usage. This addresses description clarity and agreement. Grammar problem type ID:13