Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical and vocabulary errors. To improve, give a clear direct response (topic sentence), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Use correct verbs and nouns, avoid invented words, and keep the response within 2–4 sentences. For example, say why you look out (relaxation, scenery, thoughts) and give a brief example or moment when you do so.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I find the scenery relaxing. For example, after a busy day at work I like to watch trees and buildings go by to clear my mind.

Sugerencia: The answer conveys the idea but is repetitive and grammatically incorrect. Improve by making a single clear topic sentence, then add a specific reason and an example using linking words. Use correct adjective forms and avoid repetition of filler words (e.g., “I I”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I sometimes take photos of the scenery outside the car because I want to remember beautiful views. For instance, when I see a colorful sunset or a mountain range I will take a quick picture to show my friends later.

Sugerencia: The response is too short and does not explain the preference. Always give a short topic sentence and then one or two supporting details or reasons using linking words. Expand to 2–3 concise sentences to show fluency and provide content for scoring.

Ejemplo: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy hiking and fresh air. Also, the mountains feel quieter and help me relax more than the busy seaside.

× Yes, I often look out of the window when traveling by bus or carp because I find wishing the person scenarioizing and I'll go way too and win.

✓ Yes, I often look out of the window when traveling by bus or car because I find the scenery interesting and relaxing, especially after a busy day.

The original sentence has several problems but fits the 'incorrect use of prepositions' and related word choice errors: 'carp' is a misspelling of 'car'; 'wishing the person scenarioizing and I'll go way too and win' is unclear and likely intended to describe finding the scenery interesting and relaxing. Use 'out of the window' (acceptable) and correct 'carp' to 'car'. Replace the unclear phrase with a clear description. Suggestion: use simple, correct prepositions and choose clear vocabulary; keep clauses concise.

× Yes, I I take photo of the scenery outside the car.

✓ Yes, I take photos of the scenery outside the car.

This is an article/number error: English uses the plural 'photos' or the article 'a' with the singular 'photo'. Also remove the duplicated 'I'. Suggestion: use 'take photos' for general habitual actions or 'take a photo' for a single instance.

× The view is very beautiful and so surprise for me and wonderful I I look at the view and my mind is relaxing so my straight up.

✓ The view is very beautiful and surprising to me. When I look at it, my mind relaxes.

The original contains incorrect adjective/adverb forms: 'surprise' should be the adjective 'surprising'; 'my mind is relaxing' should be active 'my mind relaxes'; remove duplicated 'I' and unclear phrase 'so my straight up'. Suggestion: use correct adjective forms and simple present verbs to describe habitual reactions.

× Mountain.

✓ I prefer the mountains.

Single-word answer 'Mountain' is a fragment and does not match expected sentence structure. It also lacks plurality and a subject. The question asks preference, so a full sentence 'I prefer the mountains' is appropriate. Suggestion: answer with a complete sentence using subject and verb and correct noun form.