Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the response more grammatically correct, concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect verb forms (use present simple: 'I look' or 'I usually look').

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. I enjoy watching the passing countryside and sometimes note how long each part of the journey takes, which helps me estimate arrival times.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer followed by a clear reason and a brief example. Use correct verb forms and connect ideas with linking words like 'because' or 'but'.

Ejemplo: Not often — I usually don't take photos from a moving car because the pictures turn out blurry. However, if we stop or the view is truly spectacular, I will take a few photos to remember it.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and expand with one or two specific reasons using linking words. Use natural phrasing (e.g., 'I prefer the mountains' and 'at the top of the mountain') and avoid awkward word order.

Ejemplo: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy hiking and the fresh air. For example, reaching the summit often offers breathtaking views and a strong sense of achievement.

× Clearly, Yeah, I'm looking out the window for the nature when traveling by bus or car.

✓ Clearly, yes, I look out the window at nature when traveling by bus or car.

The student used present continuous 'I'm looking' which implies a temporary action; the question asks about habitual behavior, so simple present 'I look' is correct. Also 'for the nature' is incorrect preposition/article use; use 'at nature' or 'at the scenery' without 'for'. Suggestion: use simple present for routines and 'look at' + noun phrase.

× If I traveling by bus, I remind my remember my passing times at the time.

✓ If I travel by bus, I remind myself of the passing times then.

'If I traveling' is missing auxiliary/incorrect form; conditional with simple present requires base verb 'travel'. 'remind my remember' is ungrammatical and redundant; correct reflexive pronoun is 'myself' and use 'remind myself of' + noun. 'at the time' is awkward; use 'then'. Suggestion: use 'If I travel' for conditional and 'remind myself of' for recalling something.

× I usually don't like take photos in the car when a car is stopping.

✓ I usually don't like to take photos in the car when it is stopped.

The sentence omits the infinitive marker 'to' after 'like' and repeats 'car' unnecessarily. Use 'like to take' and passive/adjectival form 'stopped' or 'when it stops' to describe the car's state. Suggestion: use 'I usually don't like to take photos in the car when it is stopped' or 'when the car stops'.

× Maybe I take photos when nature is very amazing.

✓ Maybe I take photos when the scenery is very impressive.

'Nature is very amazing' is understandable but stylistically odd; 'scenery' or 'view' fits the context of looking out a window. 'Amazing' is informal; 'impressive' or 'breathtaking' improves register. Tense 'I take' is acceptable for habitual or occasional actions. Suggestion: use 'Maybe I take photos when the scenery is very impressive'.

× Obviously mountain because of hiking, I like hiking to the mountain and on the top of mountain, nature is very breathtaking picture.

✓ Obviously the mountains because of hiking; I like hiking in the mountains, and from the top the view is breathtaking.

Several issues: missing definite article before 'mountain(s)' and incorrect singular/plural consistency. Use plural 'mountains' when speaking generally. 'Hiking to the mountain' is incorrect preposition; 'hiking in the mountains' or 'hiking up a mountain' is better. 'on the top of mountain' needs article 'the top of the mountain' or 'from the top'. 'nature is very breathtaking picture' is ungrammatical; use 'the view is breathtaking' or 'the scenery is a breathtaking sight'. Suggestion: use consistent plural/singular forms and correct prepositions: 'I like hiking in the mountains, and from the top the view is breathtaking.'