Travelling— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammar (use correct tense and word forms), make response more direct and concise, and add a brief specific detail using a linking word. Keep within 3–4 sentences. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add one supporting detail and a reason.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I often look out of the car window because seeing trees and buildings helps me relax after a long day at work. For example, I like watching the changing light on the streets, which makes the journey feel calmer.

Sugerencia: Correct verb forms and word choices, and give a specific, coherent example. Use linking words (for example, because) to connect ideas. Avoid vague adjectives like "shy."

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. For example, when I travelled with my family to the mountains last summer, I took many photos because the scenery was dramatic and peaceful. The photos remind me of the clear streams and tall pine trees.

Sugerencia: State your preference clearly, then support it with two specific reasons connected by linking words (because, and, so). Fix grammar and use more precise vocabulary (e.g., "the sea" not "seas").

Ejemplo: I prefer the sea because I love the open views and the variety of outdoor activities. For instance, I enjoy swimming and kayaking at the beach, and I find the sound of the waves very relaxing.

× Yes I do, I was look out the window at the car.

✓ Yes I do. I looked out of the car window.

The student used 'was look' which is incorrect. To describe a past action use the simple past 'looked'. Also use the preposition 'out of' and place 'car window' together for clarity. Suggestion: use simple past for completed past actions (I looked), and correct preposition placement.

× It helped me feel more comfortable and relax after a long day work.

✓ It helped me feel more comfortable and relaxed after a long day's work.

The sentence mixes verb forms and omits possessive and article. Use the past participle 'relaxed' after 'helped me' and write 'a long day's work' to indicate the work belonging to that day. Suggestion: use 'relaxed' and include the possessive 'day's' and the article 'a'.

× Yes I do, I was take photo of the mountain when I went to traveling with my family in food works.

✓ Yes I do. I took a photo of the mountain when I traveled with my family to the amusement park.

'Was take' is incorrect; use simple past 'took' for a completed action. 'Went to traveling' is ungrammatical — use 'traveled' or 'went traveling'. 'Food works' is likely a mistranslation; replace with 'amusement park' or appropriate noun. Also include the article 'a' before 'photo'. Suggestion: use simple past verbs and correct noun phrases.

× It's very beautiful and relaxed and shy.

✓ It was very beautiful and peaceful and felt serene.

Adjectives 'relaxed' and 'shy' are inappropriate to describe a mountain or scenery. Use suitable adjectives like 'peaceful' or 'serene'. Also maintain past tense 'was' for a past visit. Suggestion: choose adjectives that fit the noun being described and keep tense consistent.

× I am really into seas because it's very beautiful and very a lot.

✓ I am really into the sea because it is very beautiful and has a lot to offer.

The phrase 'very a lot' is ungrammatical. Use 'has a lot' or 'offers a lot'. Also use the singular 'the sea' when speaking generally about the sea. Suggestion: use correct quantifier structures like 'has a lot' and the definite article 'the' for general references.

× It's a lot of activities in outdoor.

✓ There are a lot of outdoor activities.

Word order and preposition use are wrong. Use 'There are' to state existence of plural activities, 'a lot of' before the noun, and 'outdoor activities' as a compound noun. Suggestion: use 'There are a lot of outdoor activities' for clarity and correct grammar.