Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix tense/number agreement and unnecessary phrases.

Ejemplo: Yes. There is only one tall building near my home called the PC Hotel because I live in a small city rather than a large one. Because the city is not very developed, there are few high-rises, so most buildings nearby are low and spread out.

Sugerencia: Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, plural forms) and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas and give one clear example. Keep answer within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing buildings, especially unusual or historic ones. When I travel, I often look for distinctive tall buildings and take pictures to remember their design. For example, last year I photographed an old colonial courthouse because of its ornate façade.

Sugerencia: Be specific and accurate with facts, and avoid filler phrases. Use a clear topic sentence, a reason with supporting detail, and a linking word. Correct verb forms and remove redundant words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would love to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because it is the tallest skyscraper in the world. I have heard about its observation deck and unique design, and I want to see the views from the top and learn about its architecture.

Sugerencia: Improve fluency and remove fillers (uh, like). Start with a direct answer, then give one or two clear reasons using linking words. Fix grammar and complete the explanation rather than trailing off.

Ejemplo: No, I would not like to live in a tall building. I prefer open spaces and houses with yards, and tall buildings often feel crowded and rely on elevators, which I find inconvenient.

× There is a tall building near my home which is called PC hotel but not a lot of them are near my home.

✓ There is a tall building near my home called PC Hotel, but there are not many tall buildings near my home.

The sentence mixes singular and plural 'there is' with 'not a lot of them'. Use 'there is' for a single building and 'there are' for plural. Also use 'many' with plural nouns and place the clause 'called PC Hotel' immediately after the noun it modifies. Use consistent capitalization for proper nouns.

× Only one tall building is around my home because I live in a small city, not a big one.

✓ Only one tall building is around my home because I live in a small city, not a big one.

This sentence is acceptable; no grammatical change needed. It correctly uses singular 'one tall building' to match the singular idea. Keep article 'one' with singular noun.

× So that's why there are already very few tall buildings that's.

✓ So that's why there are very few tall buildings.

The phrase contains a redundant 'that's' and awkward adverb 'already'. Remove the extra word and unnecessary adverb to make the sentence grammatically correct and concise.

× I love to take photos of building.

✓ I love to take photos of buildings.

When speaking generally about a type of thing, use the plural noun 'buildings' or include an article 'a building'. 'Photos of building' is incorrect; use 'photos of buildings' for general statements.

× Whenever I sees any rare building or something unique, I love to capture them.

✓ Whenever I see any rare building or something unique, I love to capture it.

The verb 'see' must agree with the subject 'I', so use 'see' not 'sees'. Also 'any rare building' is singular, so refer to it with the singular pronoun 'it', or make both plural: 'Whenever I see rare buildings... I love to capture them.'

× For example, when I travel, I have to experience a lot of new new tall buildings and then I capture them a lot.

✓ For example, when I travel, I experience many new tall buildings and take a lot of photos of them.

'Have to experience' is odd here; use 'experience' to describe encountering buildings. Remove the duplicate 'new'. Use 'many' with countable plural nouns and replace 'capture them a lot' with 'take a lot of photos of them' for clarity and natural phrasing.

× There are a lot of buildings that I want to visit.

✓ There are many buildings that I want to visit.

The original sentence is acceptable, but 'many' is more natural than 'a lot of' in formal speech. The 'there are' construction correctly introduces plural 'buildings'.

× One of them is Burj Khalifa, which is very famous in Dubai and I have listen a lot about it.

✓ One of them is the Burj Khalifa, which is very famous in Dubai and I have heard a lot about it.

Use the past participle 'heard' with 'have' to form the present perfect tense ('have heard'). Also include the definite article 'the' before famous building names like 'the Burj Khalifa' in natural English.

× It's a mall and and a hotel as well.

✓ It's a mall and a hotel as well.

The sentence has a duplicated 'and'. Remove the extra conjunction. The structure 'a mall and a hotel' is correct to list two noun roles.

× And that's why I love to want to visit one day.

✓ And that's why I would love to visit one day.

'Love to want to' is redundant and ungrammatical. Use 'would love to' to express desire politely for a future visit. Maintain 'one day' to indicate an unspecified future time.

× Me myself prefer places of open areas rather than uh congested places.

✓ I prefer open spaces rather than congested places.

Use the subject pronoun 'I' rather than 'me'. 'Myself' is unnecessary here. 'Places of open areas' is awkward; 'open spaces' or 'open areas' is natural. Remove filler 'uh' in formal speech.

× So I would not prefer to live in a tall building because in that type of buildings you have to like use lift sand they are.

✓ So I would not prefer to live in a tall building because in that type of building you have to use lifts and they are crowded.

Use singular agreement: 'that type of building' (not 'buildings'). Remove filler 'like'. 'Use lift sand they are' seems to be two errors: separate ideas with 'and', pluralize 'lift' to 'lifts', and complete the second clause with a clear adjective such as 'crowded'. This produces a coherent reason.