Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrases (e.g., “building bowls”). Use linking words if adding a second point.

Ejemplo: Yes. There are many tall buildings near my apartment because I live in the capital city. For example, a cluster of office towers and high-rise apartments lines the main avenue, so the skyline looks very dense.

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly and accurately. Correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g., “photos,” “buildings,” “in the evening”). Give one specific habit and a reason or detail, using a linking word for clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of buildings in the evening because the sunset creates warm light. For instance, I like photographing the old town hall at dusk when the golden light highlights its details.

Sugerencia: Give a clear main sentence and then specific reasons. Fix grammar (e.g., “Mahanakhon building,” “there are many restaurants,” “the views are amazing,” “the tickets are expensive”). Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the Mahanakhon building because it is currently the tallest tower in Bangkok. Moreover, it has several rooftop restaurants with amazing panoramic views, although admission and dining can be quite expensive.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence stating your current preference, then briefly explain why with one specific reason. Correct grammar and finish the sentence (avoid trailing words). Use a linking word to contrast past and present feelings.

Ejemplo: I no longer want to live in a tall building. Previously I liked the idea, but after experiencing an earthquake in Bangkok I felt shaken, so now I prefer a low-rise house for greater safety and peace of mind.

× There are many tall buildings nearby my apartment because I live in capital city of my country and there are many building bowls of short and tall buildings.

✓ There are many tall buildings near my apartment because I live in the capital city of my country and there are many blocks of short and tall buildings.

Use 'near' or 'nearby' correctly: 'near my apartment' is more natural; 'nearby' would be an adverb or adjective and needs rephrasing. Include the definite article 'the' before 'capital city' when referring to a specific city: 'the capital city.' 'Building bowls' is incorrect vocabulary; likely meant 'blocks' or 'clusters.' Also use plural 'buildings.' Overall fix word choice and articles. Grammar problem type ID:11

× I usually take photo of readings in evening every day with a beautiful sunset.

✓ I usually take photos of buildings in the evening every day when there is a beautiful sunset.

Use plural 'photos' for general habitual action. 'Take photo of readings' is incorrect word choice; 'buildings' fits the context. Use definite article 'the' with time expressions: 'in the evening.' Also add a linking clause 'when there is' to describe sunsets. Problems involve quantifier/plural and article/preposition usage. Grammar problem type ID:14

× I would like to visit Mahanakown building which is the highest building in Bangkok right now.

✓ I would like to visit the Mahanakhon building, which is the tallest building in Bangkok right now.

Use 'the' before a specific named building: 'the Mahanakhon building.' Also use superlative adjective 'tallest' rather than 'highest' with 'building.' Corrected the building name spelling to 'Mahanakhon.' This is a there-be/article/superlative usage issue. Grammar problem type ID:3

× There are have there are many restaurant there with a nice view.

✓ There are many restaurants there with a nice view.

Remove redundant words 'have there are.' Use plural 'restaurants.' Keep 'there' only once and ensure subject-verb agreement: 'There are many restaurants.' This fixes preposition and sentence structure problems. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Amazing view but the tickets is quite expensive.

✓ The view is amazing, but the tickets are quite expensive.

Complete the sentence with a subject and verb: 'The view is amazing.' Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'tickets are' (plural). Include comma before the conjunction 'but.' Also use article 'the' with 'view' if referring to the previously mentioned view. Grammar problem type ID:27

× In the past I used to want to live in the tall building, but after the earthquake in Bangkok I was really shocked and I want to live in a home only with.

✓ In the past I used to want to live in a tall building, but after the earthquake in Bangkok I was really shocked and now I want to live in a house by myself.

Use 'a tall building' without 'the' to speak generally. Maintain past reference 'used to want.' After the earthquake, change to present desire with 'now I want.' 'Live in a home only with' is ungrammatical; likely meant 'live in a house by myself' or 'live alone.' Adjust word order and choice. This fixes tense and sentence structure errors. Grammar problem type ID:5