Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy (e.g., “high rise” and “buildings” repeated), and correct small grammar issues (use singular/plural consistently). You can add one brief supporting detail to enrich the answer.

Ejemplo: Yes. I live in Bangkok, so there are many high-rise buildings near my condominium. For example, several office towers and apartment blocks are within a ten-minute walk.

Sugerencia: Improve grammar, word choice and coherence. Use a clear topic sentence (“Sometimes I take photos of buildings”) then give a specific reason and an example. Use linking words (‘because’, ‘for example’) and correct collocations: “unique architecture” (uncountable) and “beautiful” needs an object or be changed to 'beautiful design' or 'beautiful façades'.

Ejemplo: Sometimes I take photos of buildings, especially when they have unique architecture because I enjoy capturing interesting façades. For example, I photographed an old temple with intricate carvings last month.

Sugerencia: This answer has several grammar and coherence problems. Start with a direct topic sentence and give specific reasons using linking words. Correct tense and articles: “I have never been” or “I’ve never been” and “the Eiffel Tower in Paris.” Avoid fragmented phrases and unclear references. Provide one or two clear reasons why you want to visit.

Ejemplo: If I could, I would visit the Eiffel Tower in Paris because I have never been there and I want to see its famous iron architecture. Also, I would like to enjoy the views from the top and take photos of the city.

Sugerencia: Make the response grammatically correct and concise. Use a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details with linking words. Correct verb forms and collocations: “I would like to live in a tall building” and “it offers a panoramic view” or “the views are beautiful.” Avoid redundant qualifiers like “very quite.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it offers panoramic views of the city. For instance, I imagine waking up to a wide skyline and watching the sunset from my balcony.

× I live in Bangkok so there are many high rise buildings around my condominiums.

✓ I live in Bangkok so there are many high-rise buildings around my condominium.

'High rise' should be hyphenated as 'high-rise' when used as a compound adjective or noun. 'Condominiums' vs 'condominium': if the speaker refers to their residence, singular 'my condominium' is more natural; if they live in multiple units it's plural. Here context implies one home, so use singular. Also add hyphen to show correct compound form.

× Well, sometimes I take some photos of building if such buildings have the unique architectures and beautiful.

✓ Well, sometimes I take photos of buildings if they have unique architecture and are beautiful.

'Photos of building' needs plural 'buildings'. 'Take some photos' is acceptable but 'take photos' is more natural. 'Such buildings' is wordy; use 'they'. 'The unique architectures' is incorrect: 'architecture' is normally uncountable so use 'unique architecture'. 'And beautiful' lacks verb; add 'are' to form a complete clause.

× Fell if I could, I would visit Paris Eiffel Tower because I'd never been there before.

✓ If I could, I would visit the Eiffel Tower in Paris because I have never been there before.

'Fell if I could' is a typo/word order error; correct conditional begins 'If I could'. 'Paris Eiffel Tower' needs article and correct order: 'the Eiffel Tower in Paris'. 'I'd never been there before' mixed past perfect with present relevance; 'I have never been there before' fits better for experience up to now.

× They have a it's had like unique architecture and iconics.

✓ It has a unique design and is iconic.

Sentence uses incorrect pronouns and redundant auxiliaries: 'They have a it's had' is ungrammatical. 'Eiffel Tower' is singular, so use 'it'. 'Unique architecture' can be rephrased as 'unique design'. 'Iconics' is not a correct noun here; use adjective 'iconic' and include a linking verb 'is'.

× The new research at the Paris.

✓ (Remove sentence) or 'There has been new research in Paris.'

As written this is a sentence fragment lacking a verb and clear meaning. Either remove it as irrelevant or rewrite with verb: 'There has been new research in Paris.' If the speaker meant something else, supply the missing information.

× Yes, I do like to live in the tall building because it's offered the panoramic view of the city and it's very quite beautiful.

✓ Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it offers a panoramic view of the city and it is very beautiful.

'Do like to live' is awkward; 'would like to live' expresses desire more naturally. 'The tall building' should be 'a tall building' (general preference). 'It's offered' is wrong tense and voice; use present 'it offers'. 'Very quite beautiful' is redundant: use 'very beautiful' or 'quite beautiful' but not both.