Food— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise, avoid filler words (uh) and repetition, and organize your answer: give a clear topic sentence, a brief reason with specific details, and a short comparison if needed. Use correct adjective forms (e.g., juicy, dry) and avoid unnecessary negatives about other foods. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: My favourite food is beef burgers because I like the rich, juicy flavour and the variety of toppings. Although chicken burgers tend to be drier, I sometimes choose them if they have good sauces. I don't eat pizza or shawarma often because I prefer grilled meat flavours.

Sugerencia: Use past tense consistently and be specific about the snacks. Replace vague words like "dirty" with clearer descriptions (e.g., fried chips, sugary treats) and explain briefly why you liked them. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and add one linking phrase to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: When I was young, I often ate fried snacks like chips and samosas because they tasted good and were easy to get. At the time I didn't worry about health, but now I avoid them because they are high in oil and salt.

Sugerencia: Avoid contradictory statements and structure answer clearly. Start with a direct response (Yes/No), then give a brief explanation with coherent linking words. Use correct tense and grammar (e.g., "I prefer" not "preferred so much").

Ejemplo: Generally no — I prefer burgers year-round. However, in winter I drink more coffee and visit coffee shops because I enjoy the warm drinks and cosy atmosphere.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, use past vs present contrast, and avoid filler words. Give a specific change and reason, using linking words like "because" or "so". Keep it to 2–3 sentences and choose clearer vocabulary (e.g., "unhealthy snacks" instead of "dirty").

Ejemplo: Yes, my eating habits have changed since childhood. I used to eat many unhealthy snacks, but now I focus on healthier options because I want to protect my immune system and improve my overall health.

× I love to eat burgers, especially, uh, beef burgers because they're, uh, too much juicy and, uh, messy, including the sausage.

✓ I love to eat burgers, especially beef burgers, because they're very juicy and messy, including the sausage.

The phrase 'too much juicy' is incorrect; use the adverb 'too' with an adjective in constructions like 'too juicy' to indicate excess, or use 'very' to indicate degree. Here 'very juicy' is appropriate. Remove unnecessary commas and filler 'uh' for clarity. 'Including the sausage' is acceptable but should be attached with a comma.

× Those chicken burgers are like, uh, dryness and I, I have no interest in, uh, pizzas and Sharmas.

✓ Those chicken burgers are dry, and I have no interest in pizzas or shawarama.

Using the noun 'dryness' to describe burgers is awkward; use the adjective 'dry'. Replace 'and' before a list with 'or' when indicating alternatives. 'Sharmas' is a misspelling; use 'shawarma' (singular or plural as context requires). Remove fillers 'uh' and duplicate 'I'. Use commas appropriately.

× When I was young, I love to eat those dirty snacks which are very harmful and made in, uh, dirty oil, which are very, which are not good for health.

✓ When I was young, I loved to eat those dirty snacks that were made in dirty oil and were very harmful to my health.

The time marker 'When I was young' sets the past tense, so use past verbs: 'loved' and 'were made'. Use 'that' for defining clauses and streamline repetition. 'Not good for health' should be 'harmful to my health' for natural phrasing.

× But at that age, I didn't know much about my health and I don't care these things.

✓ But at that age, I didn't know much about my health and I didn't care about these things.

Maintain past tense with 'didn't know' and 'didn't care'. Also, the verb 'care' requires the preposition 'about' when indicating concern for something.

× No, I always prefer eating the burgers throughout the year.

✓ No, I always prefer eating burgers throughout the year.

Use the plural noun 'burgers' without the definite article when speaking generally. 'Always prefer' expresses a habitual present; this is acceptable.

× Yes, in the middle of winter I preferred so much coffee because I in love with those coffee shops.

✓ Yes, in the middle of winter I prefer coffee a lot because I am in love with those coffee shops.

Mixing past and present: 'in the middle of winter' can be general, so use present 'prefer'. Use 'prefer coffee a lot' rather than 'preferred so much coffee'. The phrase 'I in love' is missing the verb 'am' and needs 'in love with'. Also adjust word order for natural English.

× Uh, yes, a lot of things have been changed since my childhood and one of the main is, uh, my food because I care more about my health, uh, rather than when I was a child because, uh, those dirty snacks destroy my immune system and I now have to, uh, overcome this issue.

✓ Yes, many things have changed since my childhood, and one of the main changes is my diet because I care more about my health now than when I was a child; those dirty snacks damaged my immune system and I now have to work to improve it.

Use the present perfect 'have changed' without passive 'have been changed' unless something actively changed them. 'One of the main changes' clarifies the noun. Use 'diet' instead of 'food' for natural collocation. Compare past and present with 'now than when I was a child'. 'Destroy my immune system' is too strong and present-tense; use past 'damaged' if referring to past effects. 'Overcome this issue' is vague; 'work to improve it' is clearer.