Part 1
Examinador
What is your favourite food?
Candidato
My favorite food is umm spicy ramen. I like it because it remind me when I was young. I eat that with my teeth dropped out of my my eyes so it just remind me to my memory when I was young.
Examinador
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Candidato
Definitely, I really like the spicy food because it really, really yummy and when we eat done that it it didn't make any sense, but it make you more comfortable and like you if you're tiring and you go to eat that spicy food, it really make you more have.
Examinador
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Candidato
Not really, but sometime, yes.
Examinador
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Candidato
Right now, definitely I'm gonna change my food. When I was young, I like sweet, but right now I like spicy food. Yeah, but definitely I feel like yeah, unfortunately, I still like sweet, sweet fruit sometime.
What is your favourite food?
Puntuación: 38.0Sugerencia: Be clear and coherent: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid fillers and unclear phrases, and give specific reasons or memories. Use linking words (because, when, so) correctly and keep answers concise (1–3 sentences). Pronunciation and grammar need attention (verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and strange idioms).
Ejemplo: I like spicy ramen. I enjoy it because its hot, savory broth reminds me of meals my family shared when I was a child, and the strong flavors make me feel comforted.
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Puntuación: 32.0Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons or examples. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use linking words such as because and when to connect ideas, and correct grammar (e.g., 'I liked' for past tense). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.
Ejemplo: When I was young, I liked spicy food. Because spicy dishes were common at family dinners, they always made me feel warm and energetic after a long, tiring day.
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: Expand briefly with a clear sentence explaining when you do change foods and give a specific example. Use linking words (however, sometimes, for example) to make the answer coherent and avoid one-word replies.
Ejemplo: Not really; however, sometimes I change what I eat in winter. For example, I prefer hot soups and stews in cold months, but I eat more salads and fruits in summer.
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: Answer directly with a clear contrast between past and present, use correct tenses (past vs present), and avoid hesitation words. Give a specific example of a food you liked then and one you prefer now, and keep it to 2–3 sentences.
Ejemplo: Yes, my tastes have changed. As a child I preferred sweet foods like candy, but now I prefer spicy dishes such as kimchi ramen, although I still enjoy sweet fruits occasionally.
× My favorite food is umm spicy ramen.
✓ My favorite food is spicy ramen.
Remove filler 'umm' as it is not a grammatical element. This sentence had no pronoun error but contained a nonstandard filler; keep concise for clarity. (No change to tense or structure required.)
× I like it because it remind me when I was young.
✓ I like it because it reminds me of when I was young.
The verb 'remind' needs third person singular form 'reminds' to agree with subject 'it' (third person singular). Also add preposition 'of' before a clause that indicates memory: 'reminds me of when I was young.' Use past time clause 'when I was young' unchanged.
× I eat that with my teeth dropped out of my my eyes so it just remind me to my memory when I was young.
✓ I ate it until my eyes watered, so it reminded me of my childhood.
Original sentence has multiple issues: incorrect tense and verb forms, odd expressions, and wrong pronouns. Change 'I eat' to past tense 'I ate' to match 'when I was young'; 'teeth dropped out of my my eyes' is nonsensical — likely meant 'until my eyes watered' or 'brought tears to my eyes.' 'Remind' should be past 'reminded' to agree with past context and 'reminded me of my childhood' uses correct preposition and noun. Simplify the sentence for clarity.
× What kind of food did you like when you were young?
✓ What kind of food did you like when you were young?
This question is already correctly formed in past tense using 'did' + base verb 'like'. No change needed.
× Definitely, I really like the spicy food because it really, really yummy and when we eat done that it it didn't make any sense, but it make you more comfortable and like you if you're tiring and you go to eat that spicy food, it really make you more have.
✓ Definitely, I really like spicy food because it is really, really tasty. Even when it doesn't make sense, it makes you feel more comfortable; if you are tired and you eat spicy food, it can make you feel better.
Multiple pronoun, verb agreement, adjective/adverb and sentence structure problems. Replace 'the spicy food' with 'spicy food' for general preference. Use 'is tasty' instead of 'yummy' in formal correction. Use 'doesn't' and 'makes' for subject-verb agreement. Change 'if you're tiring' (incorrect use) to 'if you are tired'. Break into two clearer sentences and correct verb forms to present simple for general truths.
× Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
✓ Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
This question is correct in present simple for habitual actions; no correction needed.
× Not really, but sometime, yes.
✓ Not really, but sometimes, yes.
'Sometime' is an adverb meaning 'at an unspecified time'; the correct adverb for 'occasionally' is 'sometimes'. Use plural adverb 'sometimes' to indicate occasional occurrence.
× Right now, definitely I'm gonna change my food.
✓ Right now, I'm definitely changing my eating habits.
'Gonna' is informal spoken contraction of 'going to' and should be avoided in corrected written form. Also align 'right now' with present continuous 'I'm changing' to indicate an ongoing change. Alternatively 'I'm definitely going to change my diet' would also be correct.
× When I was young, I like sweet, but right now I like spicy food.
✓ When I was young, I liked sweet foods, but right now I like spicy food.
Use past tense 'liked' to match 'when I was young'. 'Sweet' as a noun should be pluralized to 'sweet foods' or 'sweets' for clarity. Present preference 'I like spicy food' is correct.
× Yeah, but definitely I feel like yeah, unfortunately, I still like sweet, sweet fruit sometime.
✓ Yes, but I still sometimes like sweet fruit.
Reduce redundant fillers ('yeah' repeated) and use 'sometimes' instead of 'sometime'. Use 'sweet fruit' (no repeated 'sweet') and place adverb 'sometimes' before verb for natural English. Keep present tense 'I still like' for current habit.