Food— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and start with a clear topic sentence naming your favourite (or preferred) food, then give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Avoid filler phrases like "it's really" and repetition of "really" to sound more natural and fluent.

Ejemplo: My favourite food is Korean cuisine because it offers a wide variety of flavours and many dishes have a pleasant spicy kick. For example, kimchi adds tang and heat, while bibimbap combines textures and sauces for a balanced meal.

Sugerencia: Begin with a direct topic sentence about being a picky eater, then give specific examples and a brief reason or consequence. Remove fillers like "you know" and correct grammar (e.g., "I literally like refused" → "I literally refused").

Ejemplo: When I was young I was a picky eater, so I mostly ate simple foods like porridge and plain rice. As a result, I refused to try meats such as beef because their flavours and textures seemed unfamiliar to me.

Sugerencia: Avoid starting with abrupt words like "Obviously not." State your position clearly and give a concise explanation with one example. Reduce hesitations and repetition ("each kind, I mean every kind").

Ejemplo: Not really — I can eat most dishes year-round because I don't mind different temperatures of food. For example, I often enjoy a hot bowl of pho even on a warm day because I like the broth and flavours.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence that your tastes have changed, then explain briefly how and why with one specific contrast and avoid slang or strong negative phrases like "disgusting." Correct grammar ("feels like" → "I feel that"; "I could pretty eat" → "I can eat").

Ejemplo: Yes, my tastes have changed as I've grown older. When I was a child I preferred sweet, comforting foods, but now I enjoy a wider range of savoury dishes; however, I still dislike pineapple on pizza because I don't like the sweet-and-savoury combination.

× It's really hard for me to tell you a specific dish, but I actually really enjoy Korean cuisine as it's really diverse in tastes and it has a bit of spice in each dish which makes it more unique.

✓ It's really hard for me to tell a specific dish, but I actually enjoy Korean cuisine because it's very diverse in taste and each dish has a bit of spice, which makes it more unique.

Original contains redundant adverbs and slight collocation errors ('diverse in tastes' -> 'diverse in taste') and awkward clause order. Use 'tell a specific dish' instead of 'tell you a specific dish' for natural phrasing, 'because' for causal link, 'very' instead of 'really' (stylistic), and place 'each dish has a bit of spice' for clarity. This addresses verb+-ing only where 'making' wasn't used incorrectly; however main edits are grammatical and stylistic for clarity.

× I was a picky eater back then so I only ate the dishes that were familiar to me such as porridge or rice.

✓ I was a picky eater back then, so I only ate dishes that were familiar to me, such as porridge or rice.

Tense is correct (simple past) but sentence needs minor punctuation and article removal for natural English: 'the dishes' -> 'dishes' and add commas. This keeps past tense consistency.

× I literally like refused to eat any kind of food like, you know, beef.

✓ I literally refused to eat any kind of food, like beef.

Incorrect mixing of 'like' with past verb 'refused' creates ungrammatical phrase. Remove the extra 'like' before 'refused' and keep 'like' only to introduce an example. 'Literally' is often unnecessary but can remain for emphasis.

× I don't know why.

✓ I don't know why.

This short sentence is grammatically correct as is; no change needed. Included to show it's acceptable.

× Obviously not. Well personally, each kind, I mean every kind of dish is suitable to eat like at any time of the year.

✓ Not really. Personally, every kind of dish is suitable to eat at any time of year.

Original has informal fillers and awkward phrasing ('suitable to eat like at any time of the year'). Use 'Not really' as a natural short answer and simplify clause to 'suitable to eat at any time of year.' This corrects adverb placement and reduces disfluency.

× Like for example I could just eat a hot bowl of pho in a sunny day and I could still be fine.

✓ For example, I could eat a hot bowl of pho on a sunny day and still be fine.

Remove filler 'like' and unnecessary 'just'; use 'on a sunny day' (correct preposition) not 'in a sunny day'; omit repeated 'I could' for conciseness. This fixes incorrect preposition and awkward use of -ing/filler forms.

× Well absolutely feels like my taste buds have matured.

✓ Well, it absolutely feels like my taste buds have matured.

Missing subject 'it' before 'feels' makes sentence ungrammatical. Adding 'it' corrects sentence structure and keeps present perfect 'have matured' appropriate.

× Well when I was younger I preferred sweet dishes as it felt really comforting but no I could pretty eat like every kind of dish except for pineapple pizza dough.

✓ When I was younger, I preferred sweet dishes because they felt really comforting, but now I can eat almost every kind of dish except pineapple pizza.

Problems: missing commas, 'no I could pretty eat' is ungrammatical and mixes tenses. Replace 'as' with 'because' for clarity, 'it felt' -> 'they felt' to agree with plural 'dishes', 'no I could pretty eat' -> 'but now I can eat almost' to reflect present ability, and 'pineapple pizza dough' -> 'pineapple pizza' (more natural). This fixes tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and word choice.

× It's it's really disgusting.

✓ It's really disgusting.

Duplicate 'it's' is a repetition/disfluency error. Remove the extra 'it's' to correct the sentence.