Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Avoid repetition and incorrect word choices (e.g. 'work a lot' -> 'walk a lot'). Use correct verb forms and countable/uncountable nouns.

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk regularly, especially after meals. For example, I usually take a 20-minute walk on the playground with my best friend because it helps digestion and keeps us fit.

Sugerencia: Use past tense consistently and give one clear reason with a specific example. Correct grammar errors (didn't allow, spend much time, I went, I invited). Keep to two or three sentences max.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often went for walks as a child because my parents didn't allow me to spend much time on computer games. For instance, I usually invited my best friend to the park to play and take short walks every weekend.

Sugerencia: Be specific and logical: give clear reasons and explain them. Avoid unclear phrases ('professional check'). Use linking words (Firstly, Secondly) and correct vocabulary (friendly atmosphere, fresh air, safe paths). Limit to maximum five sentences.

Ejemplo: People like walking in parks for two main reasons. Firstly, parks offer fresh air and safe, well-maintained paths which are good for exercise. Secondly, the peaceful atmosphere makes it easy to relax and talk with friends.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use correct conditional tense (If I had the chance). Clarify meaning (enjoy challenges) and avoid awkward phrases. Provide one specific image or detail about the mountains to make it vivid.

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in the mountains because I enjoy challenging outdoor activities. For example, I like hiking steep trails to reach viewpoints and enjoy the stunning landscapes.

Sugerencia: Use past tense and correct place names and vocabulary. Be specific about location and impressions, and avoid unclear or incorrect phrases ('air is full of the money', 'stocked'). Keep to two or three sentences and describe one clear detail.

Ejemplo: Last summer, I took a long walk with my best friend in Tokyo along the waterfront. I was amazed by the tall skyscrapers and the busy crowds, and I enjoyed the lively city atmosphere.

× Well, I think I work a lot, especially when I finish my meals, I always take a walk with my best friend on the playground because we always think these activities is very beneficial for our health, especially physical health.

✓ Well, I think I work a lot. Especially after I finish my meals, I always take a walk with my best friend on the playground because we always think these activities are very beneficial for our health, especially for our physical health.

Errors: incorrect use of present tense forms and agreement: 'when I finish my meals, I always take' is acceptable but the sentence was long and needed separation for clarity; 'these activities is' is a subject-verb agreement problem (plural subject with singular verb). Correction: split into two sentences for clarity, keep present simple for habitual actions, and change 'is' to 'are'. Also add 'for' before 'our physical health' to be idiomatic. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Well, when I was a kid I often go outside to have a walk.

✓ Well, when I was a kid I often went outside to have a walk.

Error: present tense verb 'go' used with past time reference 'when I was a kid'. Correction: use past simple 'went' to match past context. Grammar problem type ID:5

× The reason is that my parents didn't allowed me to spend a much time on playing computer games or watching some comedies.

✓ The reason is that my parents didn't allow me to spend much time playing computer games or watching comedies.

Errors: after 'didn't' the base form of the verb should be used ('allow', not 'allowed'); 'a much time' is incorrect quantifier usage—use 'much time' without 'a'; 'on playing' is incorrect preposition use—use verb directly 'spend time playing'. Corrections: 'didn't allow', remove 'a', and use 'spend much time playing'. Grammar problem type ID:5

× So I always invited my best friend to go to the park to do some exercise or taking a short walking.

✓ So I always invited my best friend to go to the park to do some exercise or take a short walk.

Errors: mixing tenses and verb forms: 'always invited' is past habit (acceptable) but parallel verbs after 'to' should be base form 'take' not 'taking'; 'walking' as a noun here should be 'walk'. Correction: use parallel infinitive 'to do' and 'to take', or simply 'do some exercise or take a short walk'. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Well, I think there are several reasons that why people like taking a walk in the park.

✓ Well, I think there are several reasons why people like taking a walk in the park.

Error: unnecessary insertion of 'that' before 'why' causes ungrammatical structure. Remove 'that' to form 'reasons why'. Tense and verb form 'like taking' is correct. Grammar problem type ID:6

× The first one is that there is a professional check for them to take a walk which is very beneficial for their needs and legs.

✓ The first one is that there are professional facilities or fitness checks to help people walk, which are very beneficial for their fitness and legs.

Errors: 'a professional check' is unclear and misuses article and noun; subject-verb agreement with 'is' and plural 'facilities'; 'their needs and legs' is awkward. Correction: clarify meaning by using 'professional facilities' or 'fitness checks', make verbs and modifiers agree in number ('are'), and use 'fitness' instead of 'needs' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:13

× And another reason is that the atmosphere in the park is really peaceful and quiet so they can make conversations with other.

✓ Another reason is that the atmosphere in the park is really peaceful and quiet, so they can have conversations with others.

Errors: 'and another' at sentence start is redundant; 'make conversations' is not idiomatic—use 'have conversations'; 'with other' is incorrect pronoun form—use plural 'others'. Correction: remove redundant 'and', use 'have conversations with others'. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Well to be honest, if I have a chance I'd like to take a walk in the mountains because I'm a huge fan of challenging and risk as kid activity.

✓ Well, to be honest, if I had the chance I'd like to take a walk in the mountains because I'm a huge fan of challenging and risky outdoor activities.

Errors: conditional mismatch: 'if I have a chance' should be 'if I had the chance' when using 'I'd' (would) to match subjunctive/polite condition; 'risk as kid activity' is ungrammatical—use 'risky outdoor activities' or 'risky activities as a kid' depending on intended meaning. Correction: use past subjunctive 'had' with 'I'd', and change phrase to 'risky outdoor activities' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:7

× So I like to spend my leisure times on climbing the mountains and see some stunning landscapes.

✓ So I like to spend my leisure time climbing mountains and seeing stunning landscapes.

Errors: 'leisure times' should be uncountable 'leisure time'; unnecessary preposition 'on' after 'spend'; parallel verb forms: use gerunds for both activities ('climbing' and 'seeing'). Also drop 'the' before 'mountains' when speaking generally. Grammar problem type ID:14

× Well, I still remember last summer vacations. I take a long walk with my best friend in the Strait of the Tokyo.

✓ Well, I still remember last summer vacation. I took a long walk with my best friend in the Strait of Tokyo.

Errors: 'vacations' should be singular 'vacation' in this context; present tense 'I take' must be past 'I took' to match 'last summer'; 'the Strait of the Tokyo' is incorrect article and word order—use 'Strait of Tokyo' without 'the' before Tokyo. Grammar problem type ID:5

× I was stocked with the skyscrapers and the air is full of the money.

✓ I was stunned by the skyscrapers and the air was full of money-related smells or commercial signs.

Errors: 'stocked' is wrong verb—likely meant 'stunned' or 'astonished'; 'the air is full of the money' is ungrammatical and unclear—perhaps intended 'full of money-related activity' or 'full of noise and people' depending on meaning. Also tense consistency: past narrative should use 'was'. Provide clearer vocabulary. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Everyone I saw was crowded by many people.

✓ Everywhere I looked, there were many people, and it felt very crowded.

Errors: 'Everyone I saw was crowded by many people' is illogical—people are not 'crowded by many people' in that structure. Better structure: describe location and state: 'There were many people' or 'It was very crowded.' Use 'everywhere I looked' to convey scope. Grammar problem type ID:26