Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific supporting details. Reduce filler words (uh, you know) and correct grammar (e.g., "walk to school", "walk home", "every weekend"). Use linking words like "also" or "besides" to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk a lot. I walk to and from school every day, which takes about 20 minutes each way, and on weekends my family and I often join a local exercise club for a long walk.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a clear past-tense statement and one specific example. Avoid vague phrases and repetitive filler. Use correct pronouns and verb forms (e.g., "my grandparents and I went to the park"). Use linking words like "usually" or "often" if appropriate.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often walked outside as a child. Usually on weekends my grandparents and I would walk to the nearby park to play on the playground and feed the ducks.

Sugerencia: Give a structured response: a topic sentence followed by two clear reasons with brief explanations. Use correct vocabulary ("clean air", "peaceful atmosphere", "meet like-minded people") and avoid vague claims like "becomes successful". Use linking phrases like "firstly" and "additionally".

Ejemplo: People like walking in parks for two main reasons. Firstly, parks have cleaner air and many trees, which makes walking relaxing. Additionally, parks offer a peaceful atmosphere and a chance to meet like-minded people, which can motivate people to exercise regularly.

Sugerencia: State the place clearly and give two specific reasons using correct grammar. Replace casual fillers with precise phrases. Use linking words like "because" and "also" to connect reasons. Mention concrete activities (e.g., "visit gardens" or "explore cultural sites").

Ejemplo: I would like to take a long walk in Singapore because the city is clean and has many well-maintained parks. I could spend the day walking through places like Gardens by the Bay and visiting historical sites to learn about the local culture.

Sugerencia: Answer in clear past tense with a straightforward topic sentence, then add one specific detail (where and why). Fix grammar ("my friends didn't pick me up", "I had to walk to the gym"). Avoid filler words. Use linking words like "so" to show cause.

Ejemplo: Recently I walked to the gym because my friends didn't pick me up that morning, so I had to walk there earlier than usual.

× Well, you know, uh, every day when I have to a subjects on school, I need to work to my school and also walk back to home after a long day at school.

✓ Well, you know, every day when I have to go to school for my subjects, I need to walk to school and also walk back home after a long day at school.

The sentence has multiple issues; primary one is subject-verb agreement and incorrect verb forms. 'have to a subjects on school' is ungrammatical: use 'have to go to school for my subjects' to express obligation and purpose. 'I need to work to my school' uses wrong verb and preposition; use 'walk to school'. 'walk back to home' uses incorrect preposition; use 'walk back home'. Ensure verbs agree with subject and use correct infinitive 'have to go'. Suggestions: use 'have to' + base verb, use 'walk to school' and 'walk back home', and remove unnecessary fillers.

× And more than that, every weekends me and my families join the clubs of, you know, working.

✓ Also, on weekends my family and I join work clubs.

Errors include incorrect pluralization and word order: 'every weekends' should be 'on weekends' (time expression), 'me and my families' is wrong pronoun and noun form — use 'my family and I'. 'join the clubs of, you know, working' is awkward; 'join work clubs' is concise. Quantifier/number agreement: use singular 'family' when referring to household collectively. Suggestions: use 'on weekends', place 'my family and I' as subject, and choose a clear noun phrase like 'work clubs'.

× So I really a lot.

✓ So I really walk a lot.

The original lacks a verb; pronoun use isn't the main issue but the sentence is missing the verb 'walk'. This is a sentence structure and pronoun-related omission. Adding the verb completes meaning. Suggestion: include the main verb after 'really' when describing frequency.

× Well, I can't remember a lot, but in my memory, umm, maybe I go on, on weekends, you know, just some, some day when me and my grandparent, uh, go to, you know, a park to, to play, play a playground.

✓ Well, I can't remember much, but I remember that maybe on weekends my grandparents and I used to go to the park to play at the playground.

Talking about childhood requires past tense. Use 'used to go' or past simple 'went'. 'me and my grandparent' is incorrect pronoun/order and singular; use 'my grandparents and I' (plural). 'play a playground' is incorrect collocation; use 'play at the playground'. Also 'a lot' should be 'much' in negative. Suggestions: use past tense consistently and correct subject order.

× That's when I need to walk to.

✓ That's when I had to walk there.

The verb tense should be past ('had to') and 'walk to' needs an object or adverb like 'there'. 'Walk to' without object is incomplete. Suggestion: provide a destination or use 'there' to complete the action and match past timeframe.

× Well, from my perspective, people enjoy walk in the parks because it creates, you know, a clean air because I have a lot of trees, a peaceful atmosphere.

✓ Well, from my perspective, people enjoy walking in parks because it creates clean air thanks to the many trees and a peaceful atmosphere.

Use gerund 'walking' after 'enjoy'. 'in the parks' is better as 'in parks' for general statement. 'creates, you know, a clean air because I have a lot of trees' is ungrammatical: 'clean air thanks to the many trees' is clearer. Adjective/adverb misuse: 'a clean air' should be 'clean air' (uncountable). Suggestions: use 'enjoy walking', avoid filler, and use uncountable noun forms correctly.

× And also they have, you know, people same idea and it's gonna push, you know, the motivation of themselves and becomes successful when after.

✓ Also, they meet people with similar ideas, which can boost their motivation and help them become successful later.

Pronoun phrases 'people same idea' and 'the motivation of themselves' are incorrect; use 'people with similar ideas' and 'boost their motivation'. 'it's gonna' is informal and 'becomes successful when after' is ungrammatical: use 'help them become successful later'. Suggestions: use relative clauses ('which') and correct reflexive/possessive pronouns ('their'). Avoid informal 'gonna' in formal speech.

× Well, I'm gonna say when, umm, you know, going to Singapore 'cause you know, everywhere the, the air is so clean and, you know, have a peaceful atmosphere and you can enjoy walk a long day and going to, you know, some monuments and, you know, talk to the, the, the culture.

✓ I'd say I would like to go to Singapore because the air is very clean, it has a peaceful atmosphere, and you can enjoy long walks, visit monuments, and experience the culture.

Use conditional/future preference 'I'd say I would like to go' or 'I'd like to go'. Replace informal 'gonna' and incorrect verb forms: 'have a peaceful atmosphere' -> 'it has a peaceful atmosphere'; 'enjoy walk a long day' -> 'enjoy long walks'; 'going to some monuments' -> 'visit monuments'; 'talk to the culture' -> 'experience the culture'. Suggestions: use correct tense for hypothetical preference and proper verb constructions ('have', 'enjoy', 'visit', 'experience').

× Well, that's when at the morning my friends don't didn't pick up me. So I need to, you know, walk to hit the gyms earlier and after that.

✓ Well, that morning my friends didn't pick me up, so I had to walk to the gym earlier.

Use past simple for a past event: 'didn't pick me up'. 'don't didn't pick up me' is redundant/incorrect. Pronoun order: 'pick me up' not 'pick up me'. 'walk to hit the gyms earlier' is incorrect collocation; use 'walk to the gym'. Use singular 'gym' unless multiple. 'had to' expresses past necessity. Suggestions: use past simple, correct object pronoun placement, and idiomatic phrases like 'walk to the gym'.