Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Good direct answer and relevant details. To improve, make sentences more concise, vary vocabulary (e.g., "stroll" or "take walks") and add a linking word to connect ideas smoothly. Avoid repeating phrases like "go out for walks" and keep within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk a lot, especially when family or friends visit. We usually stroll around the neighborhood or to nearby parks because it lets us catch up and get some light exercise. Also, walking together gives us a chance to talk without distractions.

Sugerencia: The answer is brief and contains unclear vocabulary and grammar errors ("Lagana", "a funny things"). Improve by using clear, correct words, adding a topic sentence, and giving a specific example of activities. Use linking words like "so" or "because."

Ejemplo: Yes, I went outside to play almost every day as a child because I enjoyed being active. For example, my friends and I often played football in the park or rode our bikes around the neighborhood, so we spent hours outdoors.

Sugerencia: Good idea to mention exercise and scenery, but wording is awkward and repetitive. Improve by using linking phrases ("not only... but also") and more precise vocabulary (e.g., "natural scenery", "fresh air"). Keep it concise and avoid repeating "park."

Ejemplo: People like walking in parks not only to exercise but also to enjoy the natural scenery and fresh air. For instance, many walkers appreciate the trees and ponds because they make a stroll relaxing and refreshing.

Sugerencia: The answer communicates interest but has grammar problems and unnatural phrasing ("anticipated", "the vibes, the relaxation, I wanted to"). Improve by giving a clear topic sentence, using correct verb forms, and providing specific reasons with linking words (e.g., "because", "for example").

Ejemplo: I'd like to take a long walk in Canada because of its stunning natural landscapes. For example, I would love to hike beside mountain lakes and through forests, which I think would be peaceful and refreshing.

Sugerencia: The answer is unclear and contains unintelligible words ("Hawug", "Hawgsya"). Improve by stating a clear location, using correct grammar, and adding a brief reason or detail about the walk. Keep it to one or two concise sentences.

Ejemplo: I went to the local riverside park last weekend because the weather was nice. I walked along the trail for about an hour and enjoyed the views of the river and the birds.

× I am a very Lagana person so I tend to go out with my friends to play and to do a funny things.

✓ I am a very Lagana person, so I tend to go out with my friends to play and to do funny things.

The phrase 'a funny things' mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'things'. Remove the article and use 'funny things' to match plural. Also add a comma before 'so'. Use plural without 'a'.

× I am a very Lagana person so I tend to go out with my friends to play and to do a funny things.

✓ I am very laid-back, so I tend to go out with my friends to play and to do fun things.

'Lagana' appears to be a nonstandard word; replace with 'laid-back' (an adjective) and use 'fun' instead of 'funny' when describing activities. This corrects word choice and adjective use.

× People like to walk in parks, not as just to exercise, but also to see the beauty of park.

✓ People like to walk in parks not just to exercise, but also to see the beauty of the parks.

Remove 'as' (incorrect) and use 'not just to exercise' for the idiomatic expression. Also use plural 'parks' or 'the park' depending on meaning; here 'the parks' matches 'parks' earlier. Preposition 'in parks' is fine.

× Even though you're exercising, you're also enjoying the scenery of that park you're walking.

✓ Even though you're exercising, you're also enjoying the scenery of the park you're walking in.

The clause 'the scenery of that park you're walking' is ungrammatical; use 'the park you're walking in' or 'the scenery of the park you are walking in' to place the preposition correctly and use consistent pronoun/reference.

× I would like to take a long walk in Canada because there's so much there that I am very anticipated to see because the scenery, the vibes, the relaxation, I wanted to.

✓ I would like to take a long walk in Canada because there's so much there that I am eager to see: the scenery, the atmosphere, and the relaxation.

'Anticipated to see' is incorrect usage; use 'eager to see' or 'looking forward to seeing'. Remove redundant clause 'I wanted to' and use parallel list with correct nouns. 'Vibes' replaced by 'atmosphere' for formality.

× I did go in the terminal park because it's Hawug, it's very Hawgsya.

✓ I recently went to the terminal park because it's beautiful; it's very enjoyable.

'Did go in' is awkward for describing a recent walk; use 'recently went to' or 'I went to'. Original words 'Hawug' and 'Hawgsya' are unclear—replace with appropriate English adjectives like 'beautiful' and 'enjoyable'. Ensure past tense 'went' is used.

× Yes, I walk a lot, especially when my family or friends visit.

✓ Yes, I walk a lot, especially when my family or friends visit.

Sentence is grammatically correct in present simple; no change needed. Included here to indicate no error of tense.

× Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

✓ Did you often go outside to take a walk when you were a child?

Question is mostly correct but 'have a walk' is less natural than 'take a walk' in English; keep past tense auxiliary 'did' and verb base 'take'.

× People like to walk in parks, not as just to exercise, but also to see the beauty of park.

✓ People like to walk in parks not just to exercise, but also to enjoy the beauty of the park.

The original sentence had awkward insertion 'not as just' and 'beauty of park' missing article. Reorder to 'not just to exercise, but also to enjoy the beauty of the park' for clearer structure.