Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer clearer and more grammatical. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid awkward phrases and unclear words. For example, say whether you walk often, explain when and why (e.g. walking between hostel and campus), and contrast with not walking at home.

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk a lot at university. Since my hostel is some distance from the campus, I usually walk between lectures; however, I rarely walk at home because my family owns a car.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and stay relevant to walking. Use a clear past-tense topic sentence, then add one or two concise supporting details about places or people you walked with. Avoid confusing or irrelevant remarks about family work or fighting.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often went outside to walk when I was a child. I usually walked in the neighborhood with my siblings and we liked visiting the nearby park to play and explore.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and understandable but needs smoother phrasing and a linking phrase. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific reasons with a linking word to connect them. Use natural collocations like “fresh air,” “pleasant scenery,” and “wildlife.”

Ejemplo: People like to walk in parks because they offer fresh air and pleasant scenery. Additionally, parks are peaceful and often have birds and small animals, which makes walking more enjoyable.

Sugerencia: Use a conditional sentence correctly and combine ideas to avoid repetition. Start with one clear conditional statement and support it with specific reasons or imagery of the place you want to walk.

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk through the streets of London. I have always wanted to see its historic neighborhoods and walk along the Thames to enjoy the sights and atmosphere.

Sugerencia: Answer the past-tense question directly and organize the answer with a topic sentence and supporting detail. Clarify timing and sequence using linking words. For example, say when you last walked, where, and why (e.g. returning from playing soccer).

Ejemplo: I went for a walk recently after playing soccer at the nearby market club. After the match I walked home, which usually takes about twenty minutes.

× Yes, I work a lot in my university, not in home.

✓ Yes, I study a lot at my university, not at home.

The prepositions 'in' and 'in home' are incorrect for institutions and locations in this context. Use 'at' with 'university' and 'home'. Also 'work' is odd for a student; 'study' is more appropriate given the context. Suggestion: use 'study at my university' and 'at home'.

× In my university away from hostel, then I walk and go to university, but in home I have a car I don't ****.

✓ My university is far from my hostel, so I walk to the university, but at home I have a car and I don't walk.

The original has incorrect adjective/adverb use and word order. 'Away from hostel' should be 'far from my hostel'. Use 'so' to show consequence. 'Go to university' should be 'walk to the university'. 'In home' should be 'at home'. Also clarify the negative with 'I don't walk'. Suggestion: use clear clauses and correct prepositions.

× Yes, of course they go outside.

✓ Yes, of course we went outside.

The question asks about childhood (past time), so the verb must be in the past tense. 'They go' is present and uses wrong subject. Use 'we went' to match 'Did you often go outside when you were a child?'.

× Do I have to return my family?

✓ Do I have to return to my family? (or) Did I have to return to my family?

The original misuses pronoun and verb. 'Return my family' is incorrect; you need the preposition 'to' and verb tense must match context. For past context use 'Did I have to return to my family?'.

× It was very nice that my family is very good in work.

✓ It was very nice; my family did very well at work.

Mismatch of past and present tenses: 'It was' (past) then 'is' (present). Also 'good in work' is unidiomatic. Use past tense 'did very well at work' to match. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use 'at work' for job performance.

× My father has also fought very much.

✓ My father also worked very hard.

'Has fought very much' is incorrect meaning and tense. Likely the student meant 'worked hard'. Use simple past 'worked' for past events or 'has worked' if still relevant. Suggestion: replace 'fought' with 'worked hard'.

× People like to walk in parks because in park fresh air is in park, beautiful environment and lot of beautiful animals and birds are here.

✓ People like to walk in parks because there is fresh air, a beautiful environment, and many animals and birds.

Multiple preposition issues and word order: 'in park' should be 'in parks' or 'there is'. Use 'there is' to introduce existence. 'Lot of' should be 'many' or 'a lot of'. Remove repetition 'in park'. Suggestion: use 'there is' and plural/quantifier forms correctly.

× That's why people like to walk in parks.

✓ That's why people like to walk in parks.

Sentence is grammatically correct; it matches present habitual tense. No change needed.

× If I have chance, I go to London St. Walk.

✓ If I had the chance, I would go for a long walk in London.

This conditional requires the second conditional for an unreal or hypothetical present/future situation: 'If I had..., I would...'. Also 'London St. Walk' is unclear; use 'a long walk in London' or 'walk along London streets'. Suggestion: use conditional structure 'If I had the chance, I would...'.

× My favorite place is London. I walk in London. My dream is that I walk in London streets.

✓ My favorite place is London. I would like to walk in London. My dream is to walk in the streets of London.

Mix of present simple and intentions creates odd meaning. 'I walk in London' should be 'I would like to walk in London' for desire. 'My dream is that I walk' is unidiomatic; use 'My dream is to walk in the streets of London.' Suggestion: use infinitive 'to walk' or modal 'would like'.

× I didn't go for a walk lately at nearby Market bar.

✓ I haven't gone for a walk recently near the market.

Use present perfect 'haven't gone' for actions in a recent unspecified time. 'Lately' and 'recently' are better; 'at nearby Market bar' is awkward—use 'near the market'. Also 'Market bar' capitalization and article are incorrect. Suggestion: use 'recently' and present perfect for recent actions.

× In Market there is soccer club.

✓ There is a soccer club in the market.

Word order and articles are incorrect. Use 'There is a' to introduce existence and place the location after the noun. Suggestion: 'There is a soccer club in the market.'

× I play soccer and go back home with walk.

✓ I play soccer and walk back home.

Tense is acceptable but word order and phrasing 'with walk' is incorrect. Use the verb 'walk' directly: 'walk back home'. Suggestion: use 'walk' as the main verb to describe the action.