Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 話の構成はできているが、繰り返しの「uh」や文法誤り、冗長な表現が多いです。最初に直接答え（Yes）を示し、その後で理由を2点程度に絞り、接続詞（because, since, and）を使って流れを滑らかにしてください。具体的には過去形と現在完了の使い分けや冠詞（the）や前置詞（in）に注意しましょう。

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk a lot now. When I lived in Japan I didn’t walk much because public transport was so convenient. Since moving to London, I walk more for my health and because I enjoy the city views.

Sugerencia: 内容は具体的で良いが、時制と表現の一貫性を改善してください。「need to have a walk」より自然な表現（had to walk / took the dog for walks）を使い、接続詞で理由と結果を明瞭に繋ぎましょう。フィラー（umm）を減らすことも重要です。

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. We had a dog, so I often had to take it for walks. My parents also encouraged me to play outside, and because of that I developed a love for walking.

Sugerencia: 理由の提示はあるが、語順や冗長な語（like, the the, if we go to the）が目立ちます。より簡潔にポイントをまとめ、接続語（so, therefore, because）を正しく使って論理を明確にしましょう。具体例（e.g. sitting by a pond, meeting neighbours）を一つ加えると説得力が増します。

Ejemplo: People walk in parks because parks offer a break from modern cityscapes and let them enjoy nature. For example, they can sit by a pond or chat with neighbours, which helps them relax.

Sugerencia: 文法と語順の誤りが多く、冗長な繰り返し（walking walking）があります。仮定法の質問には条件節を簡潔に使い、過去の経験は過去形で述べ、理由を1〜2点で示してください。時間や場所など具体的な情報を整理して話すと良いです。

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would hike in the mountains. Once I went on a three-hour hike with a friend, and the long walk made me feel relaxed and very happy.

Sugerencia: 時制の混乱（usually went → usually go）や語順の乱れ、冗長表現が目立ちます。現在の習慣を述べる場合は現在形を使い、理由は簡潔に一文でまとめてください。また不要な繰り返しや途切れた文を避け、最後まで文を完結させましょう。

Ejemplo: Lately I usually go for a walk in the park near my workplace. Walking there helps me feel refreshed and relaxed, so I can prepare for my next shift.

× Yes, I do uh, but when I live in Japan, I didn't uh, walk a lot.

✓ Yes, I do, but when I lived in Japan, I didn't walk a lot.

The student uses 'live' which is present tense while describing past situation; this is a present tense error. Use past simple 'lived' to match 'didn't walk'. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense for past events (I lived, I didn't walk).

× It's because there's a lot of the station, so we don't need to uh, to walk.

✓ It's because there are many stations, so we don't need to walk.

Two issues: 'there's a lot of the station' is incorrect: use plural 'there are' and count noun 'stations' or 'a lot of stations'. Also remove unnecessary 'the' and extra 'to' before 'walk'. Suggestion: Use 'there are many stations' and 'need to walk' without 'to'.

× But since I moved to in London, I started walking a lot because it's good for health and I like the view of the London.

✓ But since I moved to London, I started walking a lot because it's good for my health and I like the view of London.

Remove extra preposition 'in' after 'moved to'. Add possessive 'my' with 'health'. Omit 'the' before 'London' since proper nouns don't take 'the'. Suggestion: Say 'moved to London' and 'good for my health' and 'the view of London' -> 'view of London'.

× Well yes I did, it's because umm we had a dog and then we need to have a walk with my dog.

✓ Well yes I did, it's because we had a dog and then we needed to walk the dog.

Mix of past and present: 'need' should be past 'needed' to match 'we had a dog'. Also native phrasing is 'walk the dog' rather than 'have a walk with my dog'. Suggestion: Use past simple 'needed' and 'walk the dog'.

× Then my parents always brought me to go outside.

✓ Then my parents always took me outside.

'Brought me to go outside' is awkward; 'took me outside' or 'brought me outdoors' is correct. Also 'always' + past simple suggests habitual past: 'always took me outside'. Suggestion: Use 'took me outside' for natural phrasing.

× Thanks for this experience, I love walking.

✓ Thanks to this experience, I love walking.

'Thanks for this experience' is not wrong but 'thanks to this experience' better expresses causation here. The gerund 'walking' is fine. Suggestion: Use 'thanks to' to indicate cause.

× I'd say nowadays our architecture is really modern.

✓ I'd say nowadays our architecture is very modern.

'Really' is acceptable but 'very' is stylistic; primary issue minimal. Keeping tense is fine. Suggestion: 'very modern' is slightly more natural here.

× So like we tend to ignore the the nature in a central city.

✓ So we tend to ignore nature in a city centre.

'the the' duplicate article removed. 'the nature' should be 'nature' (uncountable). 'a central city' is odd; 'a city centre' or 'cities' is better. Suggestion: Use 'ignore nature in a city centre' or 'in cities'.

× Then when we go to the if we go to the park, we can feel the nature and to talk to the neighbors and the people.

✓ When we go to the park, we can feel nature and talk to neighbours and other people.

Remove redundant words ('to the if') and 'the nature'->'nature'. Remove 'to' before 'talk' because parallel verbs after 'can' use base form. Use 'neighbours and other people' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: 'we can feel nature and talk to neighbours'.

× I'd say I'd like to go to the hiking in the mountain.

✓ I'd say I'd like to go hiking in the mountains.

Use 'go hiking' (verb + -ing) without 'to'. 'in the mountains' plural is natural. Suggestion: Use 'go hiking' or 'go on a hike in the mountains'.

× Once I went to the hiking with my friend it's take it took 3 hours to go in the park.

✓ Once I went hiking with my friend; it took 3 hours to go through the park.

Multiple tense and phrasing errors: 'went to the hiking' -> 'went hiking'; 'it's take it took' redundant; use past simple 'it took'. 'to go in the park' -> 'to go through the park' or 'to walk in the park'. Suggestion: Keep past simple consistently and use 'went hiking' and 'it took 3 hours'.

× But this experience makes me really comfortable and walking walking a long distance made me really happy.

✓ But this experience made me feel really comfortable, and walking a long distance made me really happy.

Mix of present 'makes' and past 'made'. Use past 'made' to describe that experience. Remove duplicate 'walking'. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense: 'this experience made me feel...' and 'walking a long distance made me happy'.

× I usually went to for walk to the park which is located in my my workplace and it's because I walking in a park makes me feel better and comfortable and fresh so I can prepare the another shift after the.

✓ I usually went for a walk to the park near my workplace because walking in the park makes me feel better, comfortable and refreshed, so I could prepare for the next shift afterwards.

Many tense and article errors: 'usually went' (past habitual) is okay but mix of present 'makes' should be consistent; keep present 'walking... makes me' if describing general effect, but context is past habitual, so change to 'walking in the park made me feel...' Alternatively keep 'went' and 'walking... made'. I chose to keep past for consistency: 'went for a walk to the park near my workplace because walking in the park made me feel better, comfortable and refreshed, so I could prepare for the next shift afterwards.' Fix duplicate 'my', remove 'the', use 'refreshed' not 'fresh', and 'next shift' and 'afterwards'. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent and simplify phrasing.