Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Correct grammar and pronunciation mistakes, be concise, and organize answer with a clear topic sentence plus supporting details. Use correct verbs (walk, not work), fix numbers and prepositions, and avoid repetition. Add linking words for coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk a lot for my health. I try to reach more than 10,000 steps a day: for example, I walk around my apartment in the morning to get coffee and I take a longer walk home after work. These habits help me stay fit and reduce stress.

Sugerencia: Good content and specifics. Improve fluency by tightening sentences and using linking words. Correct minor phrasing: 'to school' instead of 'to the school' is more natural, and use a single estimate (about 20–30 minutes).

Ejemplo: Yes, I walked a lot as a child because I lived in a rural area. I usually walked to school for about 20 to 30 minutes each way, which gave me time to enjoy the countryside and talk with friends.

Sugerencia: Organize the answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then give two or three specific reasons with linking words. Avoid pauses and incomplete sentences. Use vocabulary like 'greenery', 'fresh air', 'relaxation' and explain the benefits clearly.

Ejemplo: People like walking in parks because the greenery and fresh air are relaxing. For example, trees provide shade and cooler temperatures, and the natural surroundings help reduce stress and improve mood.

Sugerencia: Clarify the location and correct verb misuse (walk, not work). Give a reason and a brief detail about what you expect to see. Use linking words and avoid fillers like 'uh'.

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I'd like to walk along the Yamato train line in Japan because it passes through many interesting neighborhoods. I imagine I could see traditional shops, modern districts, and different local scenes along the route.

Sugerencia: Good structure and relevant details. Improve accuracy of tense and reduce repetition: say 'I moved last month' and combine sentences smoothly. Add a small linking phrase about what you enjoyed or discovered.

Ejemplo: Lately I've been walking around my new neighborhood. I moved last month, so I often explore local shops and cafés to learn more about the area.

× Yes I'm trying to work more than one 10,000 steps a day to for my health.

✓ Yes, I'm trying to walk more than 10,000 steps a day for my health.

The main verb needed is 'walk' not 'work'. Also 'more than one 10,000 steps' is incorrect quantifier usage; use 'more than 10,000 steps'. Remove the extra 'to' before 'for'. Suggestion: use 'I'm trying to walk more than 10,000 steps a day for my health.'

× So after waking up I usually walk around my apartment to grab a coffee and then after work I also work along to my house.

✓ So after waking up I usually walk around my apartment to grab a coffee and then after work I also walk along to my house.

The verb should be 'walk' not 'work'. The phrase 'walk along to my house' is awkward; better: 'walk home' or 'walk back to my house'. Also 'walk around my apartment to grab a coffee' is acceptable but could be 'walk to a cafe' if leaving the apartment. Suggestion: replace 'work' with 'walk' and use 'walk home' for clarity.

× Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

✓ Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

This sentence is grammatically acceptable. It uses past tense auxiliary 'did' correctly with base form 'go'. No correction needed.

× Yes, when I was a child I had to walk a lot to commute to my school.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I had to walk a lot to commute to my school.

This sentence is grammatically correct: past tense 'had to walk' appropriately describes habitual past obligation. No correction needed.

× I was born and raised in a rural area, so I had to walk maybe 20 minutes or 30 minutes every day to go to the school.

✓ I was born and raised in a rural area, so I had to walk maybe 20 or 30 minutes every day to go to school.

Omit the definite article 'the' before 'school' when speaking generally about attending school. Also '20 minutes or 30 minutes' is wordy; '20 or 30 minutes' is concise. Suggestion: use 'to go to school.'

× Well, well, people walk in the parks, they can feel.

✓ Well, people who walk in parks can feel the benefits of greenery.

Original has run-on structure and awkward phrasing. 'People walk in the parks, they can feel' is a comma splice and incomplete. Combine ideas: 'people who walk in parks can feel the benefits of greenery.' Remove unnecessary repetition 'well, well.'

× Greenery benefits, for example, uh trees. Give us all cooler spaces and we also feel.

✓ For example, trees and greenery give us cooler spaces, and we feel more relaxed.

Sentence fragments and incorrect word order. 'Greenery benefits' is improper noun phrase. 'Give us all cooler spaces' is awkward; use 'give us cooler spaces' or 'help cool the area.' 'We also feel' needs an object (e.g., 'more relaxed'). Suggestion: complete the clause and provide clear effect.

× If I have the chance, I'd like to work across the Yamato train, which is the famous train line in Japan.

✓ If I had the chance, I'd like to walk across the Yamato train line, which is a famous train line in Japan.

Use the past subjunctive 'If I had the chance' when following with 'I'd like' to express a hypothetical. 'Work' should be 'walk'. 'Across the Yamato train' is unclear; 'walk along the Yamato train line' or 'walk across' depending on meaning. Also 'the famous' -> 'a famous' unless uniquely famous. Suggestion: 'If I had the chance, I'd like to walk along the Yamato train line.'

× I know that, uh, each Tokyo city has each, uh, it's their own aspect. So walking.

✓ I know that each part of Tokyo has its own character, so walking is interesting.

Original is fragmented and repetitive. 'Each Tokyo city' is incorrect; Tokyo is a city with neighborhoods or 'each part of Tokyo.' Replace 'it's their own aspect' with 'its own character.' Complete final fragment 'So walking.' Suggestion: write full sentence explaining why walking is appealing.

× Lately I I've walked around my new apartment.

✓ Lately I've been walking around my new neighborhood.

Use present perfect progressive 'I've been walking' or present perfect simple 'I've walked' depending on intention. 'Around my new apartment' suggests inside; 'neighborhood' fits exploring shops. Also remove duplicated 'I'. Suggestion: 'Lately I've been walking around my new neighborhood.'

× I've just moved to a new apartment last month, so I'd like to explore new shops around my house.

✓ I moved to a new apartment last month, so I'd like to explore new shops around my house.

Mixing present perfect 'I've just moved' with a specific past time 'last month' is incorrect. Use simple past 'I moved last month.' Also 'I've just moved' could be used without a past time. Suggestion: choose one tense: 'I moved to a new apartment last month.'