Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và trật tự câu, tránh lỗi chia động từ và dùng dạng đúng của động từ; làm câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tối đa 3-4 câu hỗ trợ có liên kết. Ví dụ: sửa "it make" thành "it makes", "usually reading book" thành "I usually read" và thay các cụm từ thừa bằng liên từ phù hợp.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love reading, especially fiction, because it helps me relax. After a long day of studying or work, I usually read a book at night to unwind. It also entertains me and gives my mind a break before sleeping.

Sugerencia: Sắp xếp câu rõ ràng, tránh ngắt quãng bất hợp lý và sửa lỗi từ vựng như "experience less" (không rõ nghĩa) và cấu trúc "I strain". Nên dùng liên từ để nối ý: nêu quan điểm, đưa lý do, đưa ví dụ; dùng từ chính xác như "eye strain" và "distracted" một cách gọn gàng.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper because I can concentrate more and avoid eye strain. For example, when I read on my phone or laptop for a long time, my eyes get tired and I become easily distracted, so paper feels more comfortable.

Sugerencia: Sửa ngữ pháp và ý lặp: tránh nói "always" nếu không đúng, sửa lỗi như "be because"; nêu rõ hai trường hợp: khi cần đọc kỹ và khi không cần, dùng linking words như "however" hoặc "but" để phân biệt. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể giúp câu có nội dung rõ ràng hơn.

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully when I'm following a complex plot or trying to remember details, because missing something could confuse me later. However, I don't read as carefully when I'm skimming for a general idea or when I reread a familiar passage.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời tương đối rõ ràng; chỉ cần chỉnh ngữ pháp nhỏ và dùng từ chính xác ("reread earlier chapter" -> "reread earlier chapters"; "text quickly" -> "scan quickly"). Duy trì cấu trúc: nêu quan điểm, giải thích lý do, rồi nêu ngoại lệ với liên từ thích hợp.

Ejemplo: I prefer detailed reading because I dislike having to go back and reread earlier chapters to understand the story. However, when I'm searching for simple facts like opening times or a phone number, I just scan the text quickly.

× I really enjoy reading, I prefer fiction because it make me feel relaxed and fun.

✓ I really enjoy reading. I prefer fiction because it makes me feel relaxed and happy.

The verb 'make' should agree with singular subject 'it' so use 'makes' (subject-verb agreement). Also 'fun' is a noun; in this context use the adjective 'happy' to describe the feeling. Suggestion: split into two sentences and use 'it makes' and 'happy' for natural phrasing.

× For instance after I study all day and after I work all day, I usually reading book at night.

✓ For instance, after I study or work all day, I usually read a book at night.

The verb after 'usually' should be in base form 'read' not 'reading'. Also use 'a book' with an article. Combine repetitive clauses for concision. Suggestion: use 'usually read a book' and include comma after 'For instance'.

× Well, I prefer reading on paper rather than on a screen because I can focus better and I experience less.

✓ Well, I prefer reading on paper rather than on a screen because I can focus better and experience less strain.

The original 'experience less' is incomplete; add a noun 'strain'. Also 'on a screen' is okay; keep articles. Suggestion: include the noun that completes 'experience' (e.g., 'less strain').

× I strain, for example, when I read book on my phone or laptop for a long time, my eyes get tired and feel more distracted.

✓ For example, when I read a book on my phone or laptop for a long time, my eyes get tired and I become more distracted.

Use 'read a book' with article. 'Feel more distracted' is less natural than 'become more distracted'; use 'become'. Also restructure to remove comma splice; start with 'For example'. Suggestion: use 'become' for change of state and include 'a' before 'book'.

× Well, I think I always need to read carefully because I want to understand every story in a book be because I think I can't come back to chapter 1 to read again.

✓ Well, I think I always need to read carefully because I want to understand every story in a book, because I think I can't go back to chapter 1 to read it again.

There is a repeated 'because' and an extra 'be' causing ungrammaticality; also use 'go back to' rather than 'come back to' and include 'it' after 'read'. Suggestion: remove the stray 'be', keep one 'because', and use 'go back to chapter 1 to read it again'.

× Well, I prefer detailed reading because I don't want to have to go back and reread earlier chapter.

✓ Well, I prefer detailed reading because I don't want to have to go back and reread earlier chapters.

Countable noun 'chapter' needs plural 'chapters' (or 'the earlier chapter' with specification). Suggestion: use plural 'chapters' when speaking generally.

× However, when I'm looking for simple facts like an opening time or a phone number, I just skim and text quickly.

✓ However, when I'm looking for simple facts like opening times or a phone number, I just skim the text quickly.

Use plural 'opening times' for general facts, and 'skim the text' is the correct collocation; original 'text' used as verb here is confusing. Suggestion: use 'skim the text' and pluralize where appropriate.