Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence answering directly, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix verb forms (e.g., 'I can't be patient', 'I can read short pieces').

Ejemplo: No, I don't enjoy reading very much. I find long texts difficult because I get impatient and lose focus, so I usually prefer short articles or stories. However, I am trying to read more these days to improve my concentration.

Sugerencia: Give a clear preference sentence and support it with specific reasons. Use correct vocabulary (paper, screen), and avoid unclear phrases like 'trash' or 'skin'. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'so'.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper rather than on a screen because I can annotate and flip through pages easily, which helps me remember information better. On a screen I tend to lose concentration, so paper suits me more for studying.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and organize thoughts: say when careful reading is necessary and give an example. Use linking words ('when', 'because', 'so') and correct tense and word order.

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully when the text is complex, such as academic articles or legal documents, because one sentence can change the meaning. For example, when studying for exams I read slowly and re-read unclear sentences to ensure I understand them.

Sugerencia: State your preference clearly and give concise reasons. Use correct phrases: 'detailed reading' or 'scanning', and connect ideas with 'however' or 'but'. Avoid unfinished sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me fully understand the ideas and keeps me interested in the book. However, when I am short on time, I scan texts to get the main points quickly.

× No I don't. Reading is really hard for me. I cannot be patient when I read something like it's cannot be take so long. But I can lead read like short term. But right now I try to read more.

✓ No, I don't. Reading is really hard for me. I cannot be patient when I read something because it cannot take too long. But I can read short pieces. Right now I am trying to read more.

Sentence structure errors: The original contains awkward phrasing and incorrect verb forms ('it's cannot be take so long', 'lead read like short term', 'But right now I try to read more'). Corrections: add a comma after 'No' for clarity; replace 'it's cannot be take so long' with 'because it cannot take too long' to express cause properly; change 'lead read like short term' to 'read short pieces' for natural phrasing; use present continuous 'I am trying' to indicate an ongoing action. Suggestions: restructure sentences to follow subject + verb + object order, use simple vocabulary for clarity, and choose correct verb forms and tenses for ongoing actions.

× I prefer to read on the paper rather than screen because I can trash like I can trash I can fill the book or the paper is make more interested in about the reading but if I use in the skin I will lose.

✓ I prefer to read on paper rather than on a screen because I can write notes in the book or on the paper, which makes reading more interesting for me. If I read on a screen, I lose focus.

Article errors and sentence structure: 'the paper' and 'screen' should be 'paper' and 'a screen' or 'on a screen'. The original also has unclear phrases 'trash I can trash I can fill' and 'is make more interested in about the reading'. Corrections: remove unnecessary definite article before 'paper', add 'a' before 'screen', replace unclear expressions with 'write notes' and 'makes reading more interesting', and add a clear result clause 'I lose focus'. Suggestions: use correct articles ('a', 'the', or none) according to context, avoid repeating words, and use clear verbs like 'write notes' instead of vague terms.

× I always read something in carefully because if I read something I take so long because if I don't understand that sentence, I will go back and go back to reread again to make sure that I really understand that context.

✓ I always read carefully because when I read something and I don't understand a sentence, I take a long time and go back to reread it to make sure I understand the context.

Incorrect adverb placement and redundancy: 'read something in carefully' places 'in' incorrectly and repeats ideas ('go back and go back', 'reread again'). Corrections: move 'carefully' after 'read', remove redundant words, use 'take a long time' for natural phrasing, and use 'reread it' rather than 'reread again'. Suggestions: place adverbs close to the verb they modify, avoid repetition, and use concise expressions.

× I prefer detail reading because if I understand that text or that would really clear is make me more interested in about that that book. But now I really try to scan Ling the book because it's quicker and.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because when I understand a text it becomes clearer and makes me more interested in that book. But now I really try scanning the book because it's quicker.

Verb + -ing form and adjective form errors: 'detail reading' should be 'detailed reading' (adjective), and 'try to scan Ling the book' is incorrect; use 'try scanning' or 'try to scan'. Also fix fragmented sentence ending 'because it's quicker and.' Corrections: use adjective 'detailed', restructure the sentence to 'when I understand a text it becomes clearer', and use gerund 'scanning' to express trying an alternative method. Suggestions: use correct adjective forms for noun modifiers, choose 'try + gerund' or 'try to + infinitive' consistently, and complete sentences to avoid fragments.