Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh), and give one or two specific supporting details (what kinds of books, why). Use linking words for coherence. Also correct minor grammar (e.g., "books" not "the books", "for my country" or "to improve my English").

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. I mainly read English novels and short stories to improve my language skills, and I often read when I feel bored because reading helps me relax and learn new vocabulary.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence (paper or screen), then one or two concise reasons using linking words (because, so). Remove repetition and hesitations, and fix grammar (e.g., "present" → "give presentations").

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on a screen because the text is clear and I can enlarge it if needed, so I feel more confident when I give presentations at school.

Sugerencia: Provide a direct answer with clear contrast (when careful vs when skimming). Use linking words (for example, but, however) and specific examples (e.g., exams, instructions). Remove hesitations and fix grammar.

Ejemplo: We need to read carefully when studying for exams or preparing presentations because missing key points can affect our grades. However, for light material like short news articles I usually just skim to get the main idea.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and give specific reasons and an example. Avoid vague phrases like "information solution" and correct grammar (e.g., "what the chapter is saying").

Ejemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand complex ideas and remember important facts; for example, when I study a textbook chapter I read it slowly and take notes to ensure I grasp the concepts.

× Of course, I love to read the books, uh, usually I love to read books, uh, whenever I feel bored and I love to read like, uh, like English books and I'm learning English for my Albert country.

✓ Of course, I love to read books; usually I read when I feel bored, and I like to read English books because I am learning English for my country, Albers.

The student used the definite article 'the' incorrectly before 'books' (article error). Remove 'the' when speaking about books in general. Also streamline repeated phrases and correct name/place pronunciation to 'Albers' or 'my country, Albers' if that is intended. Use present simple 'read' for habitual actions and 'I am learning' for current continuous study. Replace informal fillers for clarity.

× I would definitely prefer to read in on screen and because I can see the words clearly and whenever I'm in school I love to present, give present to all the students while while seeing on the screens I can, I can uh, see the words easily and I feel very confident about reading.

✓ I would definitely prefer to read on a screen because I can see the words clearly. When I'm in school, I like to give presentations to the students using a screen because I can see the words easily and feel more confident about reading.

Incorrect preposition 'in on screen' should be 'on a screen' (preposition and article error). 'Give present' is incorrect; use 'give presentations' (word choice). Remove duplicated words and fillers. Use simple present for preferences and habitual actions.

× Uh, I think we should, uh, read carefully on the like the main points on the chapters on presentations. And we have to read carefully as always to give a good, to get good marks on presentation.

✓ I think we should read carefully, focusing on the main points in the chapters and in presentations. We always have to read carefully to get good marks on presentations.

Incorrect article usage: 'the main points on the chapters' should be 'main points in the chapters' (preposition and article). Also 'on presentation' should be plural 'on presentations' and 'to give a good, to get good marks' is awkward; use 'to get good marks'. Use consistent prepositions 'in' for chapters and 'in/for' presentations.

× I would definitely prefer detailed reading because it has to give me a clear information solution what the uh chapters is saying in.

✓ I would definitely prefer detailed reading because it gives me clear information about what the chapters say.

Subject-verb agreement and article errors: 'it has to give me a clear information solution' is ungrammatical; use 'gives me clear information'. 'Information' is uncountable so no article 'a'. 'What the chapters is saying' has wrong verb form; use plural verb 'say' to agree with plural subject 'chapters'. Also reorder phrase for clarity.