Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Clarify and organize your response: start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + main reason), then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Fix grammar (tense, plural/singular, articles) and choose precise vocabulary (e.g., "non-fiction," "historical books"). Keep it under five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy non-fiction, particularly historical books, because they provide detailed accounts of events and help me understand how people and societies developed. For example, a recent biography I read explained the background and motives of a leader, which made the events much clearer to me.

Sugerencia: Give a clear preference sentence, then one or two specific reasons using linking words (because, so, therefore). Correct common mistakes ("prefer to read on paper," "easier on my eyes," avoid unfinished sentences). Keep answers concise and coherent.

Ejemplo: I prefer to read on paper because it's gentler on my eyes and I don't get eye strain. Also, I find paper easier for making notes and flipping back to earlier pages when I need to review something.

Sugerencia: Begin with a direct topic sentence about situations requiring careful reading, then provide a specific example (your job) and contrast with a situation where skimming is fine. Improve grammar ("as an accountant," "read carefully," "before giving advice") and use linking words (for example, whereas).

Ejemplo: I need to read very carefully at work, for example, because as an accountant I must understand financial documents precisely before giving advice to a client. By contrast, I might skim emails or casual articles when I just need the main idea.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear structured answer: state your overall preference depends on purpose, then give two contrasting examples using linking words (if, but, however). Correct grammar and avoid hesitations. Use precise phrases like "scan for gist" and "read in detail for accuracy."

Ejemplo: It depends on the purpose: if I just need the main idea or the text is not important, I scan for the gist to save time. However, if the material is critical—such as a contract or financial report—I read it in detail to ensure I understand everything.

× Absolutely, I liked reading books especially non fictions are a love reading historical book typically because it's recalled part even in detail which help me understand to go to the person's development.

✓ Absolutely, I like reading books, especially non-fiction and historical books, typically because they recall parts in detail which help me understand a person's development.

The student used past tense 'liked' where present tense 'like' is appropriate (habitual preference). 'Non fictions' is incorrect plural and form; use 'non-fiction' or 'non-fiction books.' The sentence also contained subject-verb agreement errors: 'are a love reading' is ungrammatical; 'they recall' matches plural 'books.' 'Help' should be 'help' to agree with plural subject 'they.' The corrected sentence uses present simple for habits, fixes pluralization, and restructures for clarity. Suggestion: use present simple for regular likes, ensure nouns are correctly singular/plural, and match verbs to their subjects.

× I personally like to raise on paper than screens because I find is more friendly to my eyesight.

✓ I personally prefer reading on paper to screens because I find it is friendlier to my eyesight.

'Like to raise' is incorrect word choice; 'prefer reading' fits the meaning. Use 'prefer X to Y' rather than 'on paper than screens.' 'I find is more friendly' is missing subject 'it' and 'more friendly' should be 'friendlier.' Corrected sentence uses appropriate verb 'prefer,' correct preposition 'to,' and adds the pronoun 'it.' Suggestion: choose correct verbs for actions (read, not raise) and include necessary subjects.

× I don't feel sore or eye hurts comparing to when you watching on the screen.

✓ I don't feel sore and my eyes don't hurt compared to when I watch a screen.

Pronouns and possessives were incorrect: 'eye' should be plural 'eyes' with possessive 'my.' 'Comparing to when you watching' mixes forms and persons; use 'compared to when I watch.' Also 'sore' should pair with 'feel' properly: 'I don't feel sore.' Corrected sentence aligns pronouns, verb forms, and comparison structure. Suggestion: keep subject consistent and use correct possessive pronouns.

× Sometimes I get.

✓ Sometimes I get tired.

The fragment 'Sometimes I get.' lacks a complement and is incomplete. Adding an adjective like 'tired' completes the thought and fits context (eye strain). Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments by providing a full predicate.

× Bezels my bezels.

✓ Besides, my bezel?

Original 'Bezels my bezels.' appears unintelligible and likely a mispronunciation. If the intended phrase was 'Besides, my ...' the student must clarify the noun. This correction is tentative; ask for clarification. Suggestion: speak more slowly and choose clear linking words like 'besides.'

× On my job I have to rate everything carefully.

✓ At my job I have to read everything carefully.

'On my job' is incorrect preposition use; use 'At my job' or 'In my job.' 'Rate' is likely the wrong verb; context suggests 'read.' Corrected sentence uses present tense for habitual job duties and correct preposition. Suggestion: use 'at' for workplace and choose verbs that match the intended action.

× As an accountant you need to be very precise, be very careful when write reading things and make the most understanding out of it because you know we have to understand before you giving any advice to your client.

✓ As an accountant, you need to be very precise and careful when reading documents and make sure you understand them because we have to understand before giving any advice to our clients.

This sentence has multiple pronoun inconsistencies and verb form errors: 'when write reading things' mixes verbs; use 'when reading documents.' 'Make the most understanding out of it' is awkward; use 'make sure you understand them.' 'Before you giving' should be 'before giving.' Pronouns switch between 'you' and 'we' and 'client' should be plural 'clients' to match general advice. Corrected sentence uses consistent pronouns, proper gerund 'reading,' and clarifies objects. Suggestion: keep subject consistent, use gerunds after 'when,' and use plural nouns for general statements.

× That's a very tough question, but it depends.

✓ That's a very tough question, but it depends on the situation.

Original sentence is acceptable but vague; adding 'on the situation' clarifies what 'depends' refers to. This addresses missing object of dependence. Suggestion: follow 'depends' with 'on' plus noun or clause.

× I would say if that's if the, if the driving is not, if the text not that important, I probably prefer scanning done writing into detail.

✓ I would say if the text is not that important, I probably prefer scanning rather than writing in detail.

The sentence has repetition and missing auxiliary verbs. 'If that's if the, if the driving is not' is garbled. Use 'if the text is not that important' and 'prefer scanning rather than writing in detail.' Also 'done writing into detail' is incorrect; use 'rather than writing in detail.' Suggestion: simplify conditional clauses and use correct comparative constructions.

× But if that's relate to to something that's critical, yeah, you uh, it must like I have to read.

✓ But if it relates to something critical, I have to read it carefully.

'That's relate' has incorrect verb form; use 'it relates' (third person singular). 'You uh, it must like I have to read' is ungrammatical and mixes pronouns; use 'I have to read it carefully.' Corrected sentence uses present simple for general truth and clarifies pronoun reference. Suggestion: use 'it' as subject for 'relates' and keep pronouns consistent.