Hobby— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 句子表达有点不自然且存在词汇与语法错误（如“rocket sports”应为“racket sports”）。回答信息量适中，但句子冗长且有语法不一致（时态/主谓一致）。建议用一到两句直接回答，加一到两句具体细节，使用合适的连接词并注意主谓一致。具体练习：替换错误词汇，缩短句子并加入频率、地点或原因等具体细节。

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy racket sports such as badminton and tennis. I usually play with my friends twice a week at the local sports centre, which helps me stay fit and meet new people.

Sugerencia: 回答较长且包含语法与词汇错误（如“and parents enrolled”缺主语关系清晰，“teen regal”疑为听写错误，“allow”时态不一致）。结构上有主题句和细节，但需更清晰的时态和更准确的词汇。建议分两句：一句说明事实，一句说明具体好处并用连接词衔接。

Ejemplo: Yes. My parents enrolled me in swimming lessons when I was a child. Those regular classes not only made me more confident in the water but also helped me make several good friends because we practised together every week.

Sugerencia: 表达多处不准确（如“read paper books and eyes”不通顺，“I grew up I started”语法错误）。信息具体，但句子过多且缺少自然连接。建议先用一句简单明确的主题句说明持续的爱好，再用一两句具体对比纸质书与电子书的优缺点，使用连接词如“because”、“for example”。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have loved reading since I was a child. I used to read paper books, but as I grew up I began reading on my phone because it is portable and convenient. For example, I often read during my commute or before going to sleep.

Sugerencia: 总体意思清晰，但有小范围语法与用词错误（如“I love in reading”应为“I love reading”）。回答结构良好：主题句+细节+例子。建议注意固定搭配、去掉多余介词，并可以补充连接词让句子更连贯。

Ejemplo: Yes. My parents are both teachers, so they enjoy reading educational and professional books. I also love reading, but I usually read novels and articles in my free time, and we often recommend books to each other.

× Yes I do. I enjoy rocket sports like badminton, tennis and so on. I usually play with my friends twice a week that help us keep fit and socialize.

✓ Yes, I do. I enjoy racket sports like badminton and tennis. I usually play with my friends twice a week; they help us keep fit and socialize.

句子中把“racket”误写为“rocket”，属于单词用法错误（形容词/副词或词汇选择问题）。另外原句用“that help us”指代不清，用“they”更自然；列举项目之间最好用“and”。建议检查拼写并用适当的代词连接句子以保证表达清晰。

× When I was a child and parents enrolled me in swimming classes and teen regal, regular lessons not only helped me become more confident in the water, but also allow me to make several good friends because we practice together every week.

✓ When I was a child, my parents enrolled me in swimming classes. Regular lessons not only helped me become more confident in the water, but also allowed me to make several good friends because we practiced together every week.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语“my”并把两个独立句挤在一起，且动词时态不一致（helped 与 allow/ practice）。按时序应使用过去时：enrolled, helped, allowed, practiced。建议拆分长句，统一过去时态并补全主语。

× To be honest, I loved reading since I was a child. I used to read paper books and eyes. I grew up I started reading books on my phone because they are very portable and convenient so I can read everywhere, for example on the commute or before going to sleep.

✓ To be honest, I have loved reading since I was a child. I used to read paper books. As I grew up, I started reading books on my phone because they are very portable and convenient, so I can read everywhere, for example on the commute or before going to sleep.

“loved since”与时间状语连用应为现在完成时（have loved）。原句“and eyes”为错误词汇，应为句号断开“paper books.”另外“I grew up I started”缺少连接词，应为“As I grew up, I started...”。保持时态一致并修正词汇可使表达更自然。

× I used to read paper books and eyes.

✓ I used to read paper books.

原句中“and eyes”毫无意义，可能想表达“and e-books”或只是拼写/输入错误。若想说电子书应为“e-books”或“on my phone”。建议检查是否为拼写错误并使用正确的介词结构（read books / read on my phone）。

× My parents are both teachers so they really enjoy reading, especially educational and professional books. I love in reading too. I often read novels and articles in my free time and sometimes we recommend books to each other.

✓ My parents are both teachers, so they really enjoy reading, especially educational and professional books. I love reading too. I often read novels and articles in my free time, and sometimes we recommend books to each other.

“I love in reading”是不正确的结构，正确应为“I love reading”。另外句子之间缺少逗号分隔，连接词前后需注意逗号与并列结构。建议去掉介词“in”并使用正确的动名词结构。