Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and organize your response: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and correct small grammar issues (e.g., "I like chatting with friends" rather than "I want with the friends").

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. For example, I often tell them about my day and share my feelings, which helps me relax and feel supported.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence and then list specific topics with linking words. Improve grammar and word choice (e.g., "we talk about") and avoid vague phrases. Provide one concrete example to make it more specific.

Ejemplo: We usually talk about daily events and personal plans. For instance, we discuss university work, job opportunities, and any new hobbies one of us has started.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear preference and give reasons using linking words. Avoid filler words like "like" and unnecessary repetition. Name one advantage of one-to-one chats and one disadvantage of group chats to balance the answer.

Ejemplo: I prefer chatting with one close friend rather than in groups. For example, I usually talk to my best friend Jashnikar because one-to-one conversations are more private and focused, while group chats often have too many different opinions.

Sugerencia: Give a clear preference and then compare both methods using linking words (e.g., "however"). Improve sentence structure and be specific about advantages and disadvantages. Avoid vague endings.

Ejemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it creates stronger memories and allows better expression. However, social media is more convenient for quick messages and staying in touch when we are busy or far apart.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and provide a brief explanation with an example. Correct grammar (e.g., "we sometimes argue") and use linking words like "because" and "but" to connect ideas. Show how conflicts are resolved to finish positively.

Ejemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends because we all have different opinions, but we usually resolve disagreements by talking and understanding each other's point of view.

× Definitely yes, I love to chat with my friends.

✓ Definitely yes, I love to chat with my friends.

No article error here; sentence is correct. (Included for completeness.)

× I want with the friends I share with my feelings and how my day is is going.

✓ I want to share my feelings and how my day is going with my friends.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and an extra 'is'. Reorder to place the verb phrase 'want to share' before the objects, remove duplicate 'is', and put 'with my friends' at the end for natural English word order. Suggestion: practice subject + verb + object structure and avoid repeating words.

× So I share everything with my friends and chatting help to reduce everything.

✓ So I share everything with my friends, and chatting helps reduce my stress.

'Chatting' as a noun (gerund) is fine, but the verb must agree: use 'helps' for third person singular (see also problem 2/27). Also 'reduce everything' is vague; 'reduce my stress' or 'reduce problems' is clearer. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and choose precise objects after verbs.

× If we were talk about chant, we share everything what is going on day by day as well as we share the the things that can be in my mind about study, a job or something new which can be just here with our friends.

✓ If we talk about our chats, we share what is happening day by day, and we also talk about things on my mind, such as studies, a job, or something new with our friends.

The original contains wrong conditional 'If we were talk', incorrect noun 'chant' for 'chat(s)', unnecessary 'what', repeated 'the', and awkward relative clause. Use simple present 'If we talk', replace 'what is going on' with 'what is happening', and rephrase the list of topics. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions and clean up redundancy.

× Like it depends like I have a one best friend named as Jashnikar I always chat with her if I talk have to chat and read.

✓ It depends. I have one best friend named Jashnikar; I always chat with her.

The sentence has filler words 'like', awkward phrasing 'a one best friend', and extra fragments 'if I talk have to chat and read' that are unclear. Remove 'like', use 'one' without 'a', and split into clear sentences. Suggestion: avoid fillers and keep clauses concise.

× Really the mostly when it comes to groups I don't like the group chattings because I don't like the group chatting because they have so many point of view so that's why I don't like that.

✓ When it comes to groups, I usually don't like group chats because people have many different points of view.

Problems: redundant phrases, 'chattings' is incorrect plural, and 'point of view' should be pluralized. Simplify by removing repetition and using 'group chats'. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use correct plural forms.

× If we talk about communication, I love to do face to face communication on by social media because like with the face to face, we make so many memories, we share everything we eat.

✓ If we talk about communication, I prefer face-to-face communication to social media because in face-to-face interactions we make many memories and share everything we eat.

Use 'prefer' for expressing preference, correct preposition 'to' instead of 'on/by', hyphenate 'face-to-face', and use 'in face-to-face interactions' for clarity. Remove filler 'like'. Suggestion: use 'prefer A to B' structure and correct prepositions.

× But if we talk about the social media make everything easy, but when it's on.

✓ But social media makes everything easier, especially when we cannot meet in person.

Original is fragmented and ungrammatical: missing subject-verb agreement ('social media makes'), awkward 'when it's on' fragment. Rephrase to complete the thought and use comparative 'easier'. Suggestion: ensure each sentence has a clear subject and verb and complete clause.

× I don't say that we'd never argue.

✓ I wouldn't say that we never argue.

The original mixes contractions awkwardly. 'I wouldn't say that we never argue' is the correct conditional phrasing expressing uncertainty. Suggestion: use 'wouldn't' for hypothetical or uncertain statements and align tense properly.

× The argument is always with the friends because everyone have different opinions.

✓ Arguments always happen with friends because everyone has different opinions.

'Everyone' is singular and requires 'has', not 'have'. Also pluralize 'argument(s)' to 'arguments' for naturalness. Suggestion: remember that indefinite pronouns like 'everyone' take singular verbs.

× So I have opinions.

✓ So I have my own opinions.

Add 'my own' to clarify meaning; original is grammatically okay but vague. Suggestion: add possessive to clarify whose opinions.

× So we have sometimes we have a argument on the things, but we easily sort out everything.

✓ Sometimes we have an argument about things, but we easily sort everything out.

Errors: redundant 'we have sometimes we have', article error 'a argument' should be 'an argument', and preposition 'on' should be 'about'. Reorder to natural English. Suggestion: eliminate redundancy, use 'an' before vowel sounds, and use correct prepositions.