Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、言い換えや繰り返しが多く、流暢さと文法の面で改善が必要です。まず冗長な「uh」や同じ語の繰り返しを減らし、主題文を明確にしてから理由を一文で付け加えてください。例えば「I prefer talking in person because...」の形で話し、理由は具体的に説明してください。発音の明瞭さも意識しましょう。

Ejemplo: I don’t really enjoy chatting online; I prefer talking with friends in person because face-to-face conversations feel more natural and allow us to read each other’s expressions.

Sugerencia: 内容は具体的ですが、文法ミスと語順の不自然さ、言いよどみが目立ちます。トピック文を簡潔に述べ、それぞれの話題について短い説明や例を付け加えてください。接続詞（for example, and, also）を使って文をつなげると流れが良くなります。

Ejemplo: I usually chat about hobbies, such as golf and Japanese anime. For example, we often discuss the series we’re currently watching and share tips for improving our golf swings.

Sugerencia: 回答が断片的で理由がはっきり伝わりません。まず明確な主張（I prefer talking to one person）を述べ、なぜかを簡潔に説明してください（例：集中して話したい、話しやすい等）。5文以内で完結に。不要な発話（uh, I can't, I want to just）を排除しましょう。

Ejemplo: I usually prefer talking to one person because it’s easier to have a focused, meaningful conversation and I feel more comfortable sharing my thoughts.

Sugerencia: 主張はあるものの、文が途切れ途切れで理由が不明確です。はっきりした主題文を言った後、1〜2文で理由を述べ、具体例を加えると良いです（例：non-verbal cues, tone）。不要な「uh」や繰り返しを減らして流暢に話してください。

Ejemplo: I prefer communicating face-to-face because it’s easier to understand people’s tone and body language. For instance, I can tell when a friend is upset and respond more appropriately.

Sugerencia: 回答は伝わりますが、表現が不自然で繰り返しが多いです。まず頻度を明確にし、その後対処法を簡潔に述べてください。謝罪の状況や理由を具体的に述べると説得力が増します。英語では条件節（even if）を正しく使って短く表現しましょう。

Ejemplo: Sometimes I do argue with friends, but I usually try to avoid conflict. If I realise I’m wrong, I apologise right away to keep our relationship strong.

× I don't like to chat with my friend, uh, especially online.

✓ I don't like to chat with my friends, especially online.

The student is talking about chatting in general with multiple friends, so the plural 'friends' is appropriate. Use plural nouns when referring to people in general rather than a single known person. Suggestion: Use 'friends' when you mean more than one person or chatting in general.

× I like, I like talk with my friend in person.

✓ I like to talk with my friends in person.

After 'like' you can use an infinitive ('to talk') or a gerund ('talking'). The original sentence omitted 'to' and used singular 'friend' while meaning general. Suggestion: Say 'I like to talk with my friends in person' or 'I like talking with my friends in person.'

× I usually talk with my friend about uh, our our hobby like golf or and Japanese anime and we were we are currently watching.

✓ I usually talk with my friends about our hobbies, like golf and Japanese anime that we are currently watching.

Use plural 'friends' and 'hobbies' for multiple interests. Remove repeated words and fix conjunctions: use 'and' without 'or' when listing. Use 'that we are currently watching' or 'which we are currently watching' for the anime. Suggestion: Keep lists clear and match singular/plural forms.

× I usually prefer to chat with that is a one person, uh, more than, uh, group of people because I've, I can't, I want to just.

✓ I usually prefer to chat with one person rather than with a group of people because I can't concentrate in a group.

The phrase 'that is a one person' is ungrammatical; use 'one person'. Use 'rather than' for preference comparison. The clause 'because I've, I can't, I want to just' is fragmented; provide a clear reason and matching verb ('can't concentrate'). Suggestion: Use a complete clause to explain why: 'because I can't concentrate in a group.'

× I prefer communicating by uh, by uh, in person.

✓ I prefer communicating in person.

Do not mix prepositions 'by' and 'in'. 'In person' is the correct prepositional phrase to indicate face-to-face communication. Suggestion: Use one correct preposition phrase: 'in person.'

× it it is OK to communicate on online, but the if I talk in person.

✓ It is OK to communicate online, but I prefer to talk in person.

Do not use the article 'on' before 'online' and avoid 'the' before 'if' here. Use a clear contrast phrase: 'but I prefer to talk in person.' Suggestion: Use 'communicate online' and finish the contrast with a clear verb.

× So if even if I, I, I don't, uh, wrong, I apologize then.

✓ So even if I'm wrong, I apologize.

Use the adjective 'wrong' with a verb 'to be' in the present tense: 'I'm wrong'. Remove filler words and extra commas. 'Then' is unnecessary. Suggestion: Keep sentences concise: 'Even if I'm wrong, I apologize.'