Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Give a concise topic sentence then add one clear supporting detail. Correct minor grammar (plural/singular, article choice) and avoid redundancy. Use a linking word if adding detail.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. We usually use instant messaging apps to stay in touch because it's quick and convenient.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear topic sentence and then give two specific examples using linking words. Improve word choice and sentence structure to make content specific and coherent.

Ejemplo: We talk about everyday life and work. For example, we share news about our families and discuss tasks or problems related to my job.

Sugerencia: State your preference directly in one sentence, then briefly explain with a reason and a linking word. Remove hesitations and repetition.

Ejemplo: I prefer chatting one-on-one rather than in a group because I'm introverted and feel more comfortable having a private conversation.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear preference sentence, then give specific reasons using linking phrases. Improve phrasing about nonverbal cues and avoid vague expressions.

Ejemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can read body language and facial expressions, which helps me understand people better and feel more comfortable.

Sugerencia: Give a direct statement followed by a concise explanation and an example. Correct grammar (gerunds/articles) and use linking words to show contrast or preference.

Ejemplo: I don't like arguing with friends; instead, I prefer to discuss problems calmly and look for a solution, such as suggesting compromises or planning next steps.

× Yes, I like talking with my friend, but we always chat and send message online with some instant application.

✓ Yes, I like talking with my friends, but we always chat and send messages online using an instant messaging app.

Multiple errors: 'my friend' should be plural 'my friends' to match general meaning (singular/plural issue) but primary fix is article/word choice: 'send message' needs plural 'messages' (singular/plural issue) and 'some instant application' is unnatural; use 'an instant messaging app' (article and word choice). Suggestion: Use plural nouns for repeated actions and standard collocations 'instant messaging app'. Note: Addressed as article/word choice and pluralization.

× Oh well, they always share some information about our situation and the information relevant to the life and also something in my job.

✓ Oh well, they always share information about our situations and things related to life and also things about my job.

Problems: 'some information' is acceptable but redundant; 'our situation' likely plural 'our situations' if referring to different circumstances; 'the information relevant to the life' is ungrammatical—use 'things related to life' or 'issues related to life'; 'something in my job' should be 'things about my job.' Suggestion: Use plural nouns when referring to multiple items and natural collocations like 'related to' and 'about'.

× Oh I'm I will prefer to chat with one person instead of talking with a group of people.

✓ I will prefer to chat with one person instead of with a group of people.

Errors: 'Oh I'm I will prefer' is redundant and incorrect; choose either 'I'm' + verb-ing or 'I will' + base verb. Also 'prefer to chat with one person instead of talking with a group' mixes forms; keep parallel structure. Suggestion: Use one tense or modal and maintain parallel verbs: 'I prefer to chat' or 'I will prefer to chat' (present preference use 'I prefer'). Alternative recommended: 'I prefer to chat with one person rather than with a group of people.'

× I think because I'm an introverted person so I like to chat with one person.

✓ I think because I'm an introverted person, I like to chat with one person.

Problem: Redundant conjunctions 'because' + 'so' create a sentence structure issue; use one connector. Also a comma helps clarity. Suggestion: Use either 'because' or 'so', or restructure: 'Because I'm introverted, I like chatting with one person.'

× I prefer face to face communication because I can feel more likely, just like some body language and some facial expression.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because I can better perceive body language and facial expressions.

Problems: 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' (compound adjective), 'feel more likely' is incorrect collocation—use 'perceive' or 'see', 'some body language and some facial expression' should be 'body language and facial expressions' (plural). Suggestion: Use correct collocations and plural forms for general concepts.

× And yes, it makes me feel comfortable.

✓ It makes me feel comfortable.

Minor issue: Leading 'And yes,' is conversational filler; grammatically the sentence is fine in present tense. Removed filler for clarity. Suggestion: Avoid unnecessary fillers in formal answers.

× I don't like argue with anyone so include my friend.

✓ I don't like arguing with anyone, including my friends.

Problems: 'like argue' needs gerund 'arguing' after 'like' (verb + -ing form), 'so include my friend' is incorrect pronoun and structure; use 'including my friends'. Suggestion: Use gerunds after 'like' when referring to activities and 'including' to add examples.

× I think argue isn't a way or so something.

✓ I think arguing isn't a good way to resolve conflicts.

Problems: 'argue' should be gerund 'arguing' after 'think' + complement; 'isn't a way or so something' is ungrammatical—clarify meaning: 'isn't a good way to resolve conflicts.' Suggestion: Use gerunds and clear noun phrases for abstract ideas.

× So I would like to discuss and find the solution to some issue.

✓ So I would like to discuss things and find solutions to issues.

Problems: 'find the solution to some issue' is awkward and non-specific; use plural 'solutions to issues' or 'find a solution to a problem.' Suggestion: Use natural collocations: 'discuss and find a solution' or 'discuss things and find solutions.'