Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and correct verb forms and articles.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. In my free time we often talk about school assignments and our plans for the future, which helps me relax and feel less stressed.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence then specific examples. Use correct prepositions and articles, and link ideas with words like 'also' or 'for example.' Be specific about the kinds of study topics and relationships you mention.

Ejemplo: Mostly we talk about school-related topics. For example, we discuss upcoming assignments, study methods to improve our grades, and sometimes we share advice about friendships or social life at school.

Sugerencia: Give a direct preference sentence, then two clear reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Replace vague phrases with accurate expressions (e.g., 'extroverted person', 'different opinions').

Ejemplo: I prefer chatting in a group because I'm an extroverted person and group conversations bring different opinions and livelier discussions. I usually only have one-on-one talks with my closest friends.

Sugerencia: State your preference clearly, then give two specific advantages using linking words. Fix grammar (e.g., 'I like to communicate', 'it's really convenient'), and avoid filler phrases like 'you know.'

Ejemplo: I prefer communicating via social media because it lets me edit messages and think before I send them. Also, it's very convenient and not limited by distance, so I can keep in touch with friends far away.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, then explain briefly with a clear reason. Correct pronouns and verb forms (e.g., 'I usually avoid arguments because...'). Avoid contradictory or unclear statements like 'I always follow your idea.'

Ejemplo: No, I usually avoid arguing with my friends because I prefer to keep harmony in our relationships. If we disagree, we try to discuss calmly so we don't damage the friendship.

× I really love chatting with my friend, especially in my free time because it's a really good way to help me unwind myself.

✓ I really love chatting with my friends, especially in my free time because it's a good way to help me unwind.

Use plural 'friends' because people usually chat with multiple friends (singular/plural issue relevant) and 'unwind myself' is redundant; 'unwind' already implies reflexive relaxation. Also remove unnecessary 'really' for conciseness.

× And then we can talk about a lot just like assignment teacher has gave us or the future we are planning about or just like that is really relaxing I think.

✓ We can talk about many things, such as assignments the teacher has given us or the future we are planning; that's really relaxing, I think.

Replace 'has gave' with correct present perfect 'has given' (past participle). Reorganize sentence for clarity and correct noun forms: 'a lot' -> 'many things'; remove extraneous words and add punctuation.

× As I'm a student right now, I like to talk about the study with my friend most because we can talk about the assignment that you gave us and the method to improve your grade.

✓ As I'm a student right now, I like to talk about my studies with my friends most because we can discuss the assignments that the teacher gives us and ways to improve our grades.

Use plural 'studies' and 'friends' to match general meaning (singular/plural). 'the assignment that you gave us' is changed to 'assignments that the teacher gives us' to fit context and tense. 'method' -> 'ways' for natural plural. 'your grade' -> 'our grades' for correct pronoun reference.

× Additionally, we also talk about the relationship with others just like in some popular in the school or relate friendship.

✓ Additionally, we also talk about relationships with others, such as who is popular at school or different types of friendships.

Correct prepositions and phrasing: 'relationship with others' -> 'relationships with others'; 'in the school' -> 'at school'; 'relate friendship' -> 'types of friendships'. Improve word order and clarity.

× Well of course I like I'm chatting with a group of people because I'm an extroverted per people and and we can have different opinion and better discussion with more people.

✓ Well, of course I like chatting with a group of people because I'm an extroverted person, and we can have different opinions and better discussions with more people.

Remove extra 'I'm' and correct 'per people' to 'person'. Ensure plural agreement: 'opinion' -> 'opinions', 'discussion' -> 'discussions'. Fix double 'and' and add commas for clarity.

× Additionally, I find it awkward to talk with only one friend and except for best friend just like that.

✓ Additionally, I find it awkward to talk with only one friend, except for my best friend.

Use 'except for' correctly and include possessive 'my' for 'best friend'. Remove filler 'just like that' for clarity.

× Well, of course I like communicate via social media because you know you can revise what you said and then think well before you text the message.

✓ Well, of course I like communicating via social media because you can revise what you write and think carefully before you send a message.

After 'like' use gerund 'communicating'. Use consistent tense: 'revise what you write' (present) and 'send' instead of 'text the message'. 'think well' -> 'think carefully' for natural adverb.

× Additionally, I think it really convenient to communicate by social media.

✓ Additionally, I think it's really convenient to communicate via social media.

Add the verb 'is' ('it's') to complete the clause. Use 'via' or 'through' social media; 'by' is less natural here.

× That is probably because it's not limited by the distance.

✓ That is probably because it's not limited by distance.

Omit the article 'the' before 'distance' in this general statement. 'Limited by distance' is the correct idiom.

× No actually, because I always follow your idea and just follow your thought to talk about.

✓ No, actually, because I usually follow others' ideas and base my conversation on their thoughts.

Avoid addressing examiner with 'your' when referring generally to friends; use 'others'' or 'people's'. 'follow your thought to talk about' is awkward; rephrase to 'base my conversation on their thoughts'.

× I think argue with my friend is kind of awkward and it's not so beneficial to your friendship, it's kind of ruined.

✓ I think arguing with friends is kind of awkward and not very beneficial to a friendship; it can ruin it.

Use gerund 'arguing' after 'think'. Use plural 'friends' or 'a friend'; replace 'your friendship' with 'a friendship' or 'our friendship' depending on meaning. 'it's kind of ruined' -> 'it can ruin it' for clearer cause-effect and correct subject reference.