Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and use correct grammar and vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases (e.g., “save new team”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends. For example, since most of my close friends live in other cities, we use messaging apps to stay in touch daily and share updates about our lives.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give clear specific topics. Use linking words to organize ideas (for example, “usually” then “for example”). Correct verb forms and word choice are important (e.g., use “talk” or “discuss”, not “judge” or “save”).

Ejemplo: Usually we talk about daily events and personal issues. For example, we discuss what happened during the day, share funny stories, and sometimes ask each other for advice about relationships or work problems.

Sugerencia: Give a clear preference statement and support it with specific reasons using linking words (e.g., “because”, “however”). Use correct collocations (e.g., “one-on-one”, “a group of people”) and simpler words if unsure.

Ejemplo: I prefer chatting one-on-one because it feels more private and allows for deeper conversations. However, chatting in a group can be fun for planning events or sharing jokes.

Sugerencia: Make a direct comparison and explain specific advantages of one option. Use correct phrases like “face-to-face” and “body language.” Keep sentences short and clear to avoid confusion.

Ejemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it conveys emotions better; you can see facial expressions and body language, which makes conversations more meaningful. Social media is convenient, but it lacks those nonverbal cues.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and provide a brief specific example with clear sequence words (e.g., “for example”, “after that”). Use correct verb forms and concise phrasing to tell the story and its result.

Ejemplo: Yes, sometimes we argue. For example, once my friend and I disagreed about how to solve a homework problem; we argued and then stopped talking for a couple of days, but later we apologized and resolved it.

× Absolutely, I really chatting with friends.

✓ Absolutely, I really enjoy chatting with friends.

The original sentence omits the main verb 'enjoy' and incorrectly uses 'chatting' without an auxiliary. This is a present tense statement describing a habitual preference and requires the simple present 'enjoy' + gerund. Suggestion: use 'enjoy chatting' for habits or likes (subject + verb in simple present + gerund).

× A simple reason go to the fact that I and my friend live in different cities, so I think it is a good way to have us keep in touch every day and save new team every day.

✓ A simple reason is that my friend and I live in different cities, so I think it is a good way for us to keep in touch every day and share news every day.

Multiple errors: 'go to the fact' is ungrammatical (use 'is that'); subject order should be 'my friend and I'; 'have us keep in touch' is incorrect—use 'for us to keep in touch'; 'save new team' likely intended 'share news'. Suggestions: use clear subject-verb structure 'A reason is that...' and correct infinitive phrase 'for us to...'; choose the correct noun 'news'.

× Well, I often judge with friends about everything in the life.

✓ Well, I often chat with friends about everything in life.

'Judge with friends' is incorrect word choice; context needs 'chat' or 'talk'. 'In the life' is wrong; use 'in life' or 'in daily life'. Suggestion: use the verb 'chat' in simple present for habitual actions and the phrase 'about everything in life'.

× For example, what happen occurs in one day and sometime when we need a opinion about the relationship are a problem we often save together.

✓ For example, we talk about what happened during the day, and sometimes when we need an opinion about a relationship problem, we often discuss it together.

Many issues: tense and word order ('what happen occurs' should be 'what happened' or 'what happened during the day'); 'sometime' should be 'sometimes'; 'a opinion' needs the article 'an opinion'; 'about the relationship are a problem' is ungrammatical—use 'about a relationship problem'; 'save together' is wrong verb—use 'discuss' or 'talk about' and include a pronoun for the object. Suggestion: use past simple 'happened' for events that occurred and simple present for habitual actions; choose appropriate verbs like 'talk' or 'discuss'.

× Well, I refer just to with only one friend because I think it's a convenient and private.

✓ Well, I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think it's convenient and private.

'Refer just to with only one friend' is incorrect phrasing; the intended verb is 'prefer'. 'It's a convenient and private' needs removal of 'a' before adjectives and possibly a noun; better: 'it's convenient and private'. Suggestion: use 'prefer to' + verb and omit unnecessary articles before adjectives when no noun follows."

× When we chat with only one friend, I can know about everything in depth.

✓ When I chat with just one friend, I can learn about everything in depth.

'I can know about' is unnatural; use 'I can learn about' or 'I can find out about'. Also use 'just one friend' or 'only one friend' consistently. Suggestion: choose verbs that collocate with acquiring information: 'learn', 'find out', 'know more about'.

× On the other hand, just with a rough people may have different acumen.

✓ On the other hand, with a group of people there may be different opinions.

'Just with a rough people' is ungrammatical and unclear; 'rough people' is wrong. 'Different acumen' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'opinions' or 'views'. Suggestion: use 'group of people' and 'different opinions' to express varied viewpoints; use 'there may be' for existence. (This also addresses 'There be issue').

× I refer to communicate face to face a symbolism, if it is a right way to reach people's emotions and we can express the feeling, wrote body language are toned in voice.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it is a better way to reach people's emotions and we can express feelings; body language and tone of voice are important.

Many structural and word-choice errors: 'I refer to communicate' should be 'I prefer to communicate'; 'a symbolism' is wrong—use 'because' or 'it is symbolic' if intended; 'if it is a right way' should be 'because it is a better way' or 'a good way'; 'wrote body language are toned in voice' is unintelligible—likely 'body language and tone of voice'. Suggestion: use clear cause 'because', correct nouns 'body language' and 'tone of voice', and ensure subject-verb agreement 'are important'.

× Yes, I remember once I and my friend did homework together and we had different opinion about the solution for problem and we argue seriously.

✓ Yes, I remember once my friend and I did homework together and we had different opinions about the solution to the problem and we argued seriously.

Use conventional pronoun order 'my friend and I' not 'I and my friend'. 'Different opinion' should be plural 'different opinions'. 'Solution for problem' should be 'solution to the problem'. Tense consistency: 'we argue seriously' should be past 'we argued' because it refers to a past event ('remember once'). Suggestion: order pronouns politely, pluralize where needed, and keep past tense for past events.