Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện rõ ràng và mạch lạc: Trả lời trực tiếp với một câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, sau đó thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp (thì, danh từ số nhiều, động từ) và từ không đúng (ví dụ “shock testing”, “children” bị dùng sai). Dùng các liên từ đơn giản (and, so, because) để nối ý và giới thiệu ví dụ cụ thể về lúc, cách hoặc lý do bạn trò chuyện.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. I usually talk with them during breaks at school or in the evening after a busy day. We chat about our hobbies and daily stories, and sometimes we make video calls to stay connected.

Sugerencia: Làm rõ nội dung và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể, chính xác: Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rồi liệt kê 2–3 chủ đề cụ thể (ví dụ: video games, school projects, celebrities). Tránh từ sai và cấu trúc lủng củng; sử dụng từ nối (for example, also) để liên kết ý và thêm một ví dụ cụ thể để minh họa.

Ejemplo: I usually talk about hobbies and school life with my best friend. For example, we discuss video games we play, recent school events, and interesting news about celebrities. We often joke together and support each other when something is difficult.

Sugerencia: Rõ ràng trong việc so sánh và dùng cấu trúc câu hoàn chỉnh: Trả lời bằng câu chủ đề nêu sự ưu tiên và giải thích lý do. Cải thiện ngữ pháp (it depends, singular/plural, tenses) và tránh câu rối. Thêm một ví dụ rõ ràng cho từng trường hợp (nhóm vs một người) sẽ giúp tăng điểm.

Ejemplo: It depends on the situation. In class I prefer group chats because I can ask classmates or the teacher when I don't understand a lesson. However, I talk one-on-one with my best friend when I want to relax and share personal stories.

Sugerencia: Trả lời cân nhắc, rõ ràng và chính xác: Nêu ưu tiên chính và lý do (ví dụ: hiểu cảm xúc, tương tác tốt hơn), rồi đề cập ngắn gọn hoàn cảnh khi dùng mạng xã hội (video call khi ở xa). Sửa lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp (prefer to talk, know their emotions, because of long distance) và dùng liên từ (but, however) để nối ý.

Ejemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see people's emotions and interact more naturally. However, I use social media and video calls when friends live far away, since it is the only way to stay in touch.

Sugerencia: Trả lời rõ ràng về tần suất và bản chất của tranh luận: Nêu rằng bạn có hay không tranh luận và giải thích cách tranh luận diễn ra (thẳng thắn, tôn trọng). Sửa lỗi cấu trúc (I usually agree, when we have different views, we discuss calmly) và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể, mạch lạc hơn về kết quả của tranh luận.

Ejemplo: Yes, we sometimes argue when we have different opinions, but we usually discuss things calmly and respectfully. For example, my best friend and I disagreed about which coffee shop to go to, so we talked it over and chose one that we both liked.

× Yes I love chatting with my friends especially in shock testing in my break time at school or after a hot good day.

✓ Yes, I love chatting with my friends, especially during short breaks at school or after a long, good day.

The sentence uses incorrect vocabulary and lacks articles and prepositions. 'shock testing' is likely 'short breaks'; use 'during short breaks' for time expression. 'hot good day' is incorrect word order and choice; change to 'a long, good day'. Add commas for clarity and include the article 'a'.

× I chatting with my friend for my hobby, for my stories and I also do something like my children or call video on my phone with my friends.

✓ I chat with my friends as a hobby, to share stories, and I also do things like video calls on my phone with them.

Use base verb 'chat' to match present simple habitual action. 'I chatting' is incorrect; change to 'I chat'. 'For my stories' better as 'to share stories'. 'Call video' should be 'video calls'. Use plural 'friends' or 'them' for pronoun consistency.

× So I love chatting with my friends.

✓ So I love chatting with my friends.

This sentence is correct; no grammar change needed. It uses present simple correctly to express a general preference.

× I often talk with my best friend about my hobbies or about my story in my school or in my day.

✓ I often talk with my best friend about my hobbies or about things that happened at school or during my day.

Use plural 'things that happened' to refer to events. 'My story in my school' is unnatural; replace with 'things that happened at school'. 'In my day' should be 'during my day'.

× Uh, we are the Pacific, so we have the same hobbies and we also take for a video games, a news or a important person who makes some, uh, some.

✓ Uh, we are similar, so we have the same hobbies and we also talk about video games, news, or important people who do interesting things.

'We are the Pacific' is incorrect; use 'we are similar'. 'Take for' should be 'talk about'. Use correct articles: 'a news' -> 'news' (uncountable), 'a important' -> 'an important'. 'Makes some' is vague; specify 'do interesting things'.

× One of both are ask care or are funny.

✓ One of us is more caring and the other is funnier.

The original is ungrammatical. Use 'One of us is' to indicate one person, and adjust adjectives/adverbs: 'caring' and 'funnier' for comparison. Ensure subject-verb agreement ('is' not 'are').

× I think it's depend on my situation.

✓ I think it depends on my situation.

Use present simple 'depends' with third person singular subject 'it'. 'It's depend' is incorrect verb form; replace with 'it depends'.

× I often chat with a group in class like I I didn't understand the last lesson so I asked for the teacher or my classmate for the explanation.

✓ I often chat with a group in class, for example when I didn't understand the last lesson so I asked the teacher or my classmates for an explanation.

Add commas and conjunctions for clarity. Use 'the teacher' rather than 'for the teacher'. 'My classmate' should be plural 'my classmates' if speaking generally. 'For the explanation' -> 'for an explanation'. Past tense 'didn't understand' is fine since it's a specific past event.

× But I often chat with only friend in my best friend to relax and share some story and make me feel sad or make me.

✓ But I often chat with only my best friend to relax and share stories; it makes me feel better.

Replace 'only friend in my best friend' with 'only my best friend'. 'Share some story' -> 'share stories'. The phrase 'make me feel sad or make me' is incomplete; likely intended 'it makes me feel better'. Use clear subject 'it'.

× Actually, I refer to talk with my friends or my relationship face to face because I want to know their emotion when I talk with me so I can interact with them effectively and I also understand about their personality more.

✓ Actually, I prefer to talk with my friends or partners face to face because I want to see their emotions when I talk to them so I can interact effectively and understand their personalities better.

Use 'prefer' not 'refer'. 'Face to face' -> 'face to face' or 'in person'. 'Talk with me' is wrong; use 'talk to them'. 'Understand about their personality' -> 'understand their personalities better'.

× But via social media I can. I also prefer it because I can talk with her. Uh, make a video call because of a long distance?

✓ But via social media I also prefer it because I can talk with them, for example make video calls when there is a long distance.

Combine fragments into a complete sentence. Use 'them' instead of 'her' for plural friends. 'Make a video call because of a long distance' -> 'make video calls when there is a long distance'.

× I really agree with my friends, but in the case we don't have the same views about a statement, so we argue fairly and we also understand more about the views.

✓ I usually agree with my friends, but in cases when we don't have the same views about something, we argue politely and try to understand each other's opinions more.

'I really agree' is awkward; 'I usually agree' fits better. 'In the case we' -> 'in cases when we'. 'Argue fairly' -> 'argue politely' or 'discuss calmly'. 'Understand more about the views' -> 'understand each other's opinions more'.

× For example, I am my best friend have a different views in choosing the coffee shop.

✓ For example, my best friend and I have different views when choosing a coffee shop.

Correct word order: 'my best friend and I'. Use plural 'views' matched with 'have'. 'In choosing' -> 'when choosing'.

× So we we argue about that, but we also do a coffee shop to go.

✓ So we argue about that, but we still go to the coffee shop together.

Remove duplicated 'we'. 'Do a coffee shop to go' is ungrammatical; use 'go to the coffee shop together' to express the intended meaning.