Chatting— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix verb forms and articles.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me stay connected. For example, we often talk about everyday events and share personal problems or funny stories, which helps us support each other.

Sugerencia: Use clearer, more specific examples and correct singular/plural and verb tenses. Use linking words (for example, sometimes, because) properly and avoid vague words like 'kinetic'.

Ejemplo: We usually talk about everyday life and current events. For example, we discuss school news or personal problems, and sometimes we share weekend plans because those stories make us laugh and feel closer.

Sugerencia: State your preference clearly, then give a concise reason and one supporting detail. Correct grammar (singular/plural, verb forms) and remove filler words.

Ejemplo: I prefer talking to one person because the conversation feels more relaxed and I can discuss personal matters easily. For instance, I usually go to a close friend for advice since we have known each other for many years.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, then give a specific reason with clear language and correct word order. Avoid repeating words and correct collocations (e.g., 'avoid misunderstandings').

Ejemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see facial expressions and body language. This helps me understand feelings more accurately and avoid misunderstandings.

Sugerencia: Be concise and use accurate grammar. Give a clear stance and one supporting reason with an example. Use linking words such as 'because' and correct plural forms.

Ejemplo: Sometimes I argue with friends about personal matters or current issues in my country. I think disagreements can be useful because they let us share different perspectives and help us understand each other's opinions better.

× Definitely, I like chatting with friends because it's the best way to keep in touch and say stay connected.

✓ Definitely, I like chatting with friends because it's the best way to keep in touch and stay connected.

The phrase 'say stay connected' is redundant and ungrammatical. Remove 'say' to produce the correct coordinated verbs 'keep in touch and stay connected'. Use parallel structure for clarity.

× And we talk about it like every life, like everyday life, share a personal problem and funny story and catch up what been happening.

✓ We talk about ordinary things, like everyday life; we share personal problems and funny stories, and catch up on what has been happening.

Multiple issues: 'every life' is wrong; use 'everyday life' or 'ordinary things'. 'Share a personal problem and funny story' needs plural agreement and articles: 'personal problems and funny stories'. 'Catch up what been happening' lacks the preposition 'on' and a correct tense: 'what has been happening'. Use semicolons/commas to separate ideas.

× Usually we chat about everyday life and current event.

✓ Usually we chat about everyday life and current events.

'Current event' should be plural 'current events' to match general reference and parallel with 'everyday life'. Ensure noun number matches intended general meaning.

× For example, we discussed the school Rama or personal problem and sometimes we shared a fun story about the weekend plan.

✓ For example, we discuss school drama or personal problems, and sometimes we share funny stories about weekend plans.

Tense should be present for habitual actions: 'discuss' not 'discussed'. 'Rama' is likely 'drama'. Use plural forms 'personal problems', 'funny stories', and 'weekend plans' for general habits. Add conjunctions and commas for clarity.

× Because it's make us laugh and feel kinetic.

✓ Because it makes us laugh and feel energetic.

Subject-verb agreement: 'it makes' not 'it's make'. 'Kinetic' is not the correct adjective here; 'energetic' or 'happy' fits better. Use correct verb form and appropriate adjective.

× I prefer talking with just the one people person because the conversation feel more relaxed and I can discuss the personal matter easily.

✓ I prefer talking with just one person because the conversation feels more relaxed and I can discuss personal matters easily.

'One people person' is incorrect: use 'one person'. Subject-verb agreement: 'conversation feels' not 'conversation feel'. Use plural 'personal matters' for general reference and remove unnecessary articles.

× I usually turn to my close friend when I need advice and we know like each other a long time and also I enjoy chatting in the group too.

✓ I usually turn to my close friends when I need advice; we have known each other for a long time, and I also enjoy chatting in groups.

Pluralize 'close friends' for general use. Use present perfect 'have known' for duration up to now and 'for a long time' for period. 'Chatting in groups' is more natural than 'in the group too'. Improve conjunctions and avoid filler 'like'.

× Well, I prefer communicate face to face because it's the better way to keep in touch and understand someone clearly better.

✓ Well, I prefer communicating face to face because it's the best way to keep in touch and understand someone more clearly.

Use gerund after 'prefer': 'preferring' or 'prefer communicating'. 'The better way' should be 'the best way' or 'a better way'; 'more clearly' is the correct adverb phrase, not 'clearly better'. Maintain comparative clarity.

× Like I can see the expression and body language is so it which helped me like like can know the feeling and avoid the misunderstand understanding in the conversation.

✓ I can see facial expressions and body language, which helps me understand feelings and avoid misunderstandings in the conversation.

Many issues: use plural 'facial expressions' and 'body language' without 'the'. 'Which helps' connects clause correctly and requires present tense 'helps'. 'Understand feelings' is clearer than 'can know the feeling'. 'Misunderstanding' should be plural 'misunderstandings'. Remove filler 'like' and incorrect words.

× Well, I, I'm, I'm sometime I'll go with friend about personal matter and uh like current issue in my country.

✓ Well, sometimes I argue with friends about personal matters and current issues in my country.

Use 'sometimes' adverb. 'I'll go with friend' is incorrect—use 'I argue with friends'. Use plural 'personal matters' and 'current issues'. Keep present simple for habitual actions.

× I think all arguing it can be useful because it help us share the different experience perspective and understand each other's opinion like better.

✓ I think arguing can be useful because it helps us share different experiences and perspectives and understand each other's opinions better.

Remove redundant 'all' and rearrange 'arguing can be useful'. Subject-verb agreement: 'it helps' not 'it help'. Use plural 'experiences' and 'perspectives', and 'opinions' plural. Place 'better' at the end for correct adverb placement.