Rules— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat long and slightly unclear due to redundancy and grammar issues. Try to make your response more concise and clear by directly stating the rule and its reason, using correct grammar and avoiding filler words.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, mobile phones are not allowed because teachers believe they distract students from concentrating on their studies.

Sugerencia: Your answer repeats ideas and has some hesitation. To improve, give a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe students would benefit from more rules because they help maintain discipline. For instance, clear rules encourage students to focus better and behave responsibly in class.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and lacks structure. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific details about the teacher's qualities and how he enforced rules. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, my math teacher was excellent and my favorite. He was very strict about rules, such as completing homework on time and preparing well for tests, which helped me improve a lot.

× ...but here I would like to discuss about like a mobile phones are not allowed in the school because teacher think that with the mobile phone we cannot concentrate on our studies.

✓ ...but here I would like to discuss that mobile phones are not allowed in the school because teachers think that with mobile phones we cannot concentrate on our studies.

The phrase 'discuss about' is incorrect; 'discuss' is a transitive verb and does not require the preposition 'about'. Also, 'a mobile phones' is incorrect because 'mobile phones' is plural and should not have the article 'a'. 'Teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to agree with the plural subject. 'The mobile phone' is better as 'mobile phones' to generalize the statement.

× ...because teacher think that with the mobile phone we cannot concentrate on our studies.

✓ ...because teachers think that with mobile phones we cannot concentrate on our studies.

The subject 'teacher' is singular but the verb 'think' is plural form. To agree, either use singular 'teacher thinks' or plural 'teachers think'. Here, 'teachers' is more appropriate as a general statement.

× Yes, because rules are essential for every students, because it helps us to uh because it helps students to make a discipline and work under the discipline.

✓ Yes, because rules are essential for every student, because they help us to, uh, because they help students to develop discipline and work under discipline.

The phrase 'every students' is incorrect; 'every' is followed by a singular noun 'student'. Also, 'it helps' should be 'they help' to agree with plural 'rules'. 'Make a discipline' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'develop discipline' or 'maintain discipline'.

× Yes, because rules are essential for every students, because it helps us to uh because it helps students to make a discipline and work under the discipline.

✓ Yes, because rules are essential for every student, because they help us to, uh, because they help students to develop discipline and work under discipline.

The pronoun 'it' refers to 'rules' which is plural, so the correct pronoun is 'they'.

× ...because it helps students to make a discipline and work under the discipline.

✓ ...because it helps students to develop discipline and work with discipline.

The phrase 'make a discipline' is incorrect; 'develop discipline' is correct. Also, 'work under the discipline' is awkward; 'work with discipline' is the correct expression.

× Yes, when I was in school, there was a my math teacher like he's my favorite teacher and I believe that he did his job very well and like if I talk about the rules and he was very strict about the rules like doing homework on time, prepare for the test, test that's.

✓ Yes, when I was in school, there was my math teacher; he was my favorite teacher and I believe that he did his job very well. If I talk about the rules, he was very strict about them, like doing homework on time and preparing for tests.

The phrase 'there was a my math teacher' is incorrect; 'a' should be removed because 'my' is a possessive adjective. The sentence is run-on and needs to be split for clarity. 'Prepare for the test, test that's' is unclear and should be corrected to 'preparing for tests'. Also, 'like' is overused and should be removed or replaced for better flow.