Rules— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structures. Also, avoid redundancy and try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many rules at my school. First of all, students are not allowed to use phones in the classroom. Additionally, we must wear uniforms because they promote equality and discipline among students.

Sugerencia: Your answer expresses your opinion but has several grammatical mistakes and unclear phrasing. To improve, use correct verb forms, clearer sentence structure, and linking words to explain your reasons logically.

Ejemplo: Personally, I don't think students would benefit from having more rules because too many rules can cause stress and tension. Moreover, it can be mentally harmful, so additional rules might not be helpful for students.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows appreciation for your teacher but has grammatical errors and unclear pronoun references. To improve, use correct pronouns, verb tenses, and linking words to make your answer clearer and more coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have a teacher who does her job very well. She always supports us, and whenever we don't understand something, she tries to help us. This is very beneficial for our learning.

× First of all the strict rule is student could not allow to using phone in classroom.

✓ First of all, the strict rule is that students are not allowed to use phones in the classroom.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'could not allow to using' which is not proper modal verb usage. The correct form is 'are not allowed to use' to express prohibition. Also, 'student' should be plural 'students' to match the context.

× First of all the strict rule is student could not allow to using phone in classroom.

✓ First of all, the strict rule is that students are not allowed to use phones in the classroom.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' because the rule applies to all students, not just one. Also, 'phone' should be plural 'phones' to match the plural subject.

× Also we have a rule for our uniform that is we must wear because it's look like equal and discipline.

✓ Also, we have a rule for our uniform that we must wear because it looks like equality and discipline.

The phrase 'that is we must wear' is awkward; it should be 'that we must wear'. 'It's look like' is incorrect; it should be 'it looks like'. Also, 'equal' should be 'equality' to correctly express the idea.

× Personally I don't think a student would be benefit from more roles because of so many rules can be stressed and tense them and also it's mentally harmful for the brain so it's not can be benefiting themselves.

✓ Personally, I don't think students would benefit from more rules because too many rules can stress and tense them, and also it's mentally harmful for the brain, so it cannot benefit them.

'Would be benefit' is incorrect; it should be 'would benefit'. 'Roles' is a wrong word here; it should be 'rules'. 'Can be stressed and tense them' is incorrect; 'can stress and tense them' is correct. 'It's not can be benefiting themselves' is ungrammatical; 'it cannot benefit them' is correct.

× Personally I don't think a student would be benefit from more roles because of so many rules can be stressed and tense them and also it's mentally harmful for the brain so it's not can be benefiting themselves.

✓ Personally, I don't think students would benefit from more rules because too many rules can stress and tense them, and also it's mentally harmful for the brain, so it cannot benefit them.

The singular 'a student' should be plural 'students' to match the plural pronouns 'them' and 'themselves'. Also, 'roles' is incorrect; it should be 'rules'.

× Personally I don't think a student would be benefit from more roles because of so many rules can be stressed and tense them and also it's mentally harmful for the brain so it's not can be benefiting themselves.

✓ Personally, I don't think students would benefit from more rules because too many rules can stress and tense them, and also it's mentally harmful for the brain, so it cannot benefit them.

The pronoun 'themselves' is incorrectly used here; it should be 'them' to refer back to 'students' properly.

× Yes, my teacher is so much well for her teaching, he always support us and as soon as we don't understand he always try to understand us and that does so much beneficial for us.

✓ Yes, my teacher is very good at teaching. He always supports us, and whenever we don't understand, he always tries to help us, and that is very beneficial for us.

The pronoun 'her' conflicts with 'he'; consistency is needed. 'So much well' is incorrect; 'very good' is correct. 'Support' and 'try' need third person singular forms 'supports' and 'tries'. 'Does so much beneficial' is incorrect; 'is very beneficial' is correct.

× Yes, my teacher is so much well for her teaching, he always support us and as soon as we don't understand he always try to understand us and that does so much beneficial for us.

✓ Yes, my teacher is very good at teaching. He always supports us, and whenever we don't understand, he always tries to help us, and that is very beneficial for us.

The verbs 'support' and 'try' should be in third person singular form 'supports' and 'tries' to agree with the singular subject 'he'.