Rules— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and provide specific examples using proper grammar. Also, keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students are not allowed to wear short skirts. These rules help maintain discipline and a respectful environment.

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Make sure to directly answer the question with a clear opinion, support it with reasons, and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: I don't think students would benefit from more rules because studying is more important. Instead of adding rules, students should focus on their studies both at school and at home.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to form a clear topic sentence, use linking words, and provide specific details about why the teacher is good.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a teacher who did her job very well. She was kind and explained lessons clearly, which helped all students understand the material easily.

× Yes they have some rules in my school.

✓ Yes, they have some rules in my school.

A comma is needed after 'Yes' to separate the introductory word from the rest of the sentence, improving clarity and correctness.

× So when I was a teenager I started I was studying in high school and they had many rule in the school such as don't wear short skirt and.

✓ So when I was a teenager, I started studying in high school and they had many rules in the school such as not wearing short skirts.

The sentence had redundancy ('I started I was studying') which was corrected to 'I started studying'. 'Rule' should be plural 'rules' to match 'many'. The phrase 'don't wear short skirt' was corrected to 'not wearing short skirts' to fit the sentence structure and plural form.

× I don't think so at the person.

✓ I don't think so at the moment.

The phrase 'at the person' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'at the moment' to express current time.

× We know that study is more important for the school.

✓ We know that studying is more important for the school.

The noun form 'study' should be the gerund 'studying' to function correctly as the subject of the sentence.

× So I think we should focusing on studying, not the rule or more rule in the school.

✓ So I think we should focus on studying, not the rules or more rules in the school.

After 'should', the base form of the verb 'focus' is required, not the '-ing' form 'focusing'. Also, 'rule' should be plural 'rules' to match the context.

× not the rule or more rule in the school.

✓ not the rules or more rules in the school.

The word 'rule' should be plural 'rules' to agree with 'more' and the context of multiple rules.

× We should focus on studying at home.

✓ We should focus on studying at home.

This sentence is correct and requires no change.

× Yes, I had a teacher in my school that she had a good teacher and when she teaching is very good and she's kind and make everybody understand what she said.

✓ Yes, I had a teacher in my school who was a good teacher, and when she taught, she was very good, kind, and made everybody understand what she said.

The sentence had several tense and structure errors: 'that she had a good teacher' is redundant and corrected to 'who was a good teacher'. 'When she teaching is very good' corrected to 'when she taught, she was very good' to use past tense. 'Make' changed to 'made' to agree with past tense. The sentence was restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.