Library— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Ejemplo: I don't often go to the library nowadays, but when I was young, my school took us there regularly. I remember studying about Lord Guru Nanak Devji, which inspired me a lot. Visiting the library helped me learn valuable lessons that shaped my future.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but could be clearer and more structured. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion. Avoid filler phrases like 'and yeah, that's it.'

Ejemplo: Usually, I look for historical books because I love learning about past events. By studying history, I believe we can understand people's mistakes and avoid repeating them in the future.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details using linking words. Keep your sentences concise and relevant to the question.

Ejemplo: Yes, I went to the library a few times as a child because it was mandatory. Our teacher assigned monthly activities that encouraged us to visit and learn new things, which motivated me to go regularly.

Sugerencia: Your answer is honest but could be improved by being more concise and structured. Use linking words to explain your uncertainty clearly and avoid repeating words or filler phrases.

Ejemplo: I'm not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library. Although I had some Chinese friends while studying in Montreal, we never discussed their library habits, so I don't have enough information to answer.

× I'm really not fond of the books, but when I was young our school used to take all the kids to the library and when I've been there, I have studied about the Lo Lord Guru Nanak Devji and it helped me a lot to shape up my future because I took many.

✓ I'm really not fond of books, but when I was young, our school used to take all the kids to the library and when I was there, I studied about Lord Guru Nanak Devji and it helped me a lot to shape my future because I took many lessons.

The sentence incorrectly uses present perfect tense 'I've been' and 'I have studied' when referring to a past event. The correct tense is simple past 'I was' and 'I studied' to match the past time frame. Also, 'the Lo Lord' is likely a typo and should be 'Lord'. 'Shape up my future' is better expressed as 'shape my future'. 'I took many' is incomplete; adding 'lessons' clarifies the meaning.

× Normally I just look for the historical books because I just love to know about what's what happened in the past.

✓ Normally I just look for historical books because I just love to know what happened in the past.

The phrase 'know about what's what happened' is incorrect. The preposition 'about' is unnecessary here, and 'what's what happened' is ungrammatical. The correct form is 'know what happened' without 'about'.

× And if you look deeply into it, anyone can learn anything from the past that the people does, the mistakes and yeah, that's it.

✓ And if you look deeply into it, anyone can learn anything from the past, the mistakes people make, and yeah, that's it.

The phrase 'the people does' is incorrect because 'people' is plural and requires the plural verb 'do' instead of 'does'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; rephrasing to 'the mistakes people make' improves clarity and correctness.

× When I was scared I have been there like 3 times and it was mandatory to make a visit.

✓ When I was scared, I went there about 3 times and it was mandatory to make a visit.

The use of present perfect 'I have been' is incorrect when referring to a specific past time. The simple past 'I went' is appropriate. Also, 'like 3 times' is informal; 'about 3 times' is more suitable.

× Make a make a visit once in a month because our teacher has prepared the activity for all the students that if anyone brings knowledge I will mark you.

✓ Make a visit once a month because our teacher prepared an activity for all the students that if anyone brings knowledge, I will mark you.

The phrase 'once in a month' should be 'once a month'. Also, 'has prepared' can be simplified to 'prepared' to match the past context. The sentence is also repetitive with 'Make a make a visit' which should be corrected to 'Make a visit'.

× I used to have some friends from China when I was studying in Montreal for the computer science degree, but I did not got a chance to speak about the books.

✓ I used to have some friends from China when I was studying in Montreal for my computer science degree, but I did not get a chance to speak about books.

The phrase 'did not got' is incorrect; after 'did not' the base form 'get' should be used. Also, 'the computer science degree' is better as 'my computer science degree'. 'Speak about the books' is better as 'speak about books'.

× And yeah, so I don't have a idea.

✓ And yeah, so I don't have an idea.

The article 'a' is incorrect before a vowel sound; it should be 'an idea'. This is an article error but also relates to pronoun usage in the sense of article choice before a noun.