Library— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, and avoid redundancy. For example, say "No, I don't go often. I used to visit the library when I was a student, but now I rarely go."

Ejemplo: No, I don't go to the library often. I used to visit it regularly when I was studying, but since graduating, I hardly go there anymore.

Sugerencia: Your answer is incomplete and lacks coherence. Use linking words to connect your ideas and complete your sentences. For example, "I usually sit on a bench to rest for a while, then I go upstairs to pick some books to read."

Ejemplo: I usually sit on a bench to rest for a while, and then I go upstairs to pick some books to read.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some hesitation and grammatical mistakes. Try to make your sentences clearer and more fluent. Use linking words like 'but' to contrast ideas. For example, "No, I didn't because I didn't like reading books. But now that I am older, I really enjoy reading novels and scientific books."

Ejemplo: No, I didn't go to the library as a kid because I didn't like reading books. But now that I've grown up, I really enjoy reading novels and scientific books.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat off-topic and lacks clarity. Try to answer the question directly and provide specific reasons. For example, "I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but in Japan, many children go to the library because their parents are busy and want them to study independently."

Ejemplo: I'm not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library, but in Japan, many children visit the library because their parents are busy and want them to study on their own.

× No I'm not.

✓ No, I don't.

The response 'No I'm not' is incorrect because the question asks about frequency of going to the library, which requires a verb related to action, not a state of being. The correct negative response is 'No, I don't' to indicate 'No, I don't often go to the library.'

× I used to go to the library when I was a student, but after graduate my finish after finishing my course I barely go to the library.

✓ I used to go to the library when I was a student, but after graduating and finishing my course, I barely go to the library.

The phrase 'after graduate my finish after finishing my course' is grammatically incorrect and confusing. The correct form is 'after graduating and finishing my course' using the gerund form after 'after'. This clarifies the sequence of events and corrects the verb form.

× I sit at the bench and rest for a while, then go upstairs and grab some book books to read and.

✓ I sit on the bench and rest for a while, then go upstairs and grab some books to read.

The word 'bench' is a countable noun and should be preceded by 'the' or 'a' and the preposition 'on' is more appropriate than 'at' for sitting. Also, 'book books' is a repetition and should be corrected to 'books' in plural form. The sentence also ends abruptly with 'and', which should be removed for clarity.

× No, I didn't because I didn't like to read a book.

✓ No, I didn't because I didn't like reading books.

The phrase 'like to read a book' is less natural here. Using the gerund 'reading books' is more appropriate to express a general dislike for reading. Also, 'books' in plural is better to indicate reading in general.

× And uh, but nowadays when after I grow up, I really like to read books, for example novels, scientific book.

✓ But nowadays, after I have grown up, I really like to read books, for example novels and scientific books.

The phrase 'when after I grow up' is incorrect; 'after I have grown up' is the correct present perfect form to indicate completion. Also, 'scientific book' should be plural 'scientific books' to match 'novels' and indicate multiple types of books.

× Actually, I'm not sure about the Chinese kids often go to the library because I am Japanese, but I can say that Japanese kids often go to the library because their parents are busy.

✓ Actually, I'm not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library because I am Japanese, but I can say that Japanese kids often go to the library because their parents are busy.

The phrase 'I'm not sure about the Chinese kids often go' is incorrect. It should be 'I'm not sure if Chinese kids often go' to correctly introduce the indirect question. This corrects the modal verb usage and sentence structure.