List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it contains some redundancy and minor grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating phrases like "Yes, I always make good. Yes, I always make a list" and ensure your sentences are complete and well-structured. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need and stay within my budget. For example, I usually write it down on a piece of paper or on my phone before I leave the house.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good ideas but is fragmented and unclear in places. Work on forming complete sentences and linking your ideas logically. For example, explain how making lists helps you stay organized and mention the satisfaction you get from crossing off completed tasks in a coherent way.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and keep track of my tasks. I enjoy crossing off completed items, which gives me a sense of accomplishment and confidence.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but quite fragmented and lacks fluency. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, clarify your points with specific reasons or examples.

Ejemplo: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming to write everything down. Instead, they prefer to start working immediately without planning.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good content but is affected by grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to speak in complete sentences and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly.

Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is always with me. I can easily edit or rearrange tasks at my convenience, and there are helpful apps that assist with organizing my lists.

× Yes, I always make good.

✓ Yes, I always make a list.

The phrase 'make good' is incorrect here because 'good' is an adjective and does not fit the context. The student likely intended to say 'make a list.' Using the correct noun 'list' after 'make' clarifies the meaning.

× I usually write it down on a piece of paper or on phone.

✓ I usually write it down on a piece of paper or on my phone.

The phrase 'on phone' is missing the possessive determiner 'my.' In English, when referring to personal devices, we use possessive pronouns like 'my' before the noun.

× As because it helps me to stay organized and keep me on track with my work commitments.

✓ Because it helps me to stay organized and keeps me on track with my work commitments.

The phrase 'As because' is redundant; only one conjunction is needed. Also, 'keep me' should be 'keeps me' to agree with the singular subject 'it.' Using 'because' alone and correcting verb agreement improves clarity.

× It also helps me to send reminders I enjoy. Crossing off.

✓ It also helps me to send reminders. I enjoy crossing off tasks.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Separating into two sentences and using the gerund 'crossing off' correctly expresses the idea of enjoying the action.

× The completed work as it gives me a sense of confidence. Format.

✓ Crossing off the completed work gives me a sense of confidence.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks a clear subject and verb. Reconstructing the sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects the structure.

× I think. They find it time consuming. For writing down the. The list and then working on it.

✓ I think they find it time-consuming to write down the list and then work on it.

The original sentences are fragmented and have incorrect preposition use. Combining them into one sentence and using the infinitive form 'to write' improves grammar and flow.

× Rather than writing down the task, they preferred to dive straight into the work.

✓ Rather than writing down the tasks, they prefer to dive straight into the work.

'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context of multiple items. Also, 'preferred' should be 'prefer' to maintain present tense consistent with the question.

× I preferred to make list on my phone as it is all as it is always with me.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone as it is always with me.

The verb 'preferred' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'prefer.' Also, 'make list' needs the article 'a' before 'list.' Removing redundant words improves clarity.

× I preferred to make list on my phone as it is all as it is always with me.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone as it is always with me.

Same as above: 'list' needs the article 'a' and verb tense should be present 'prefer' to match the question's tense.

× I can edit my task or rearrange. Asbo my convenience.

✓ I can edit my tasks or rearrange them at my convenience.

The sentence is fragmented and 'Asbo' is likely a typo for 'at.' Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context. Adding 'them' clarifies the object of 'rearrange.'

× There there are apps. On the phone which helps too.

✓ There are apps on the phone which help too.

The original sentence has repeated 'There' and is fragmented. Removing repetition and correcting verb agreement ('apps' plural with 'help') improves grammar.